Art What do you think of this? :)

[Taylor Hewitt]

[IMG]http://i159.exs.cx/img159/6155/blueth3oj.png[/IMG]

Please give feedback and rating! :D Thanks.

[Sea Of Chaos666]

Whoa...That's so cool looking...Me likes it vary much. I love the way you made the little strings looking like there just blowing in the wind.

[elfpirate]

[b][b]Overall, I'd say it's a pretty good use of space-- it does look like it has depth and dimension and the eye is drawn from the point of light and then down the strands-- nice...[/b]

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[Taylor Hewitt]

[quote name='Chibi Bunny']*is mesmorized*....Huh? Wha..? Oh! Yes, it's Vury Purdy! =3 Hm, you said something about rating....Now how is that done...*wonders about page*[/quote]
What page are you wondering about?

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Thanks very much guys. I appreciate your feedback :D.

[Kamuro]

its pretty good, I like the wind feature also, I'm not really a big fan of the font you used for the letters but its something I could let go for the stellar background

[Boo]

[quote name='elfpirate][b']Overall, I'd say it's a pretty good use of space[/b][/quote]

[color=gray][size=1]I was just about to say the complete opposite.

I like the whole graphic thingy when it is still bright, but the darker it gets, the less pretty. Make a little less big and let the wires be bright a bit longer.
It catches the eye though. Nice job.
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[Taylor Hewitt]

Thank you very much. I've also gotten comments about the text for the TH so maybe I'll reconsider that.

[Syk3]

[quote name='Chibi Bunny]*is mesmorized*....Huh? Wha..? Oh! Yes, it's Vury Purdy! =3 Hm, you said something about rating....Now how is that done...*wonders about page*[/QUOTE][QUOTE=Chibi Bunny]Mew? :animeswea Dun worry about me, I'm new, so I was more or less [u]Looking [/u]about the page, rather than being curious as in [u]wondering[/u'].. :animeswea[/quote]Welcome to OtakuBoards! We in the Art forum ask that your posts be a tad more descriptive, and include constructive criticism, in commenting on the artwork itself. And for future reference:

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[Taylor Hewitt]

Hey Syk3. Nice to see you're still doing a great job here!
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Could you guys tell me what font and text styles would be good instead of the current one? Thanks.

[-tiGz-]

Great job. Did you follow a tutorial?
The font is good, but doesn't match well. There are too many fonts that would work well, to name. Check out dafont.com. Maybe a pixel font would do the trick! GL

[Taylor Hewitt]

I keep hearing about pixel fonts. Please explain?

[-tiGz-]

Pixel fonts allow you to use small text, while still being able to read every letter clearly.
Check out the following page for examples of pixelated fonts:

[url]http://dafont.com/en/bitmap.php[/url]

[Taylor Hewitt]

Thanks very much.

[-tiGz-]

No problem. Feel free to ask anything. :D Hey, and post up the sig if you make changes to the font.. i'd like to see.

[Retribution]

[SIZE=1]First post back from vacation!

It looks good all in all, but it looks really generic/tutorial-made. It's a nice use of a focal point and colors that are easy on the eyes, but as I get farther from the focal point, things look more disorganized and stringy-esque, I guess.

The font is definitely not working for this piece either. It's isolated from the rest of the image, and doesn't tie in well with the abstract feel. I'd recommend not only a simple and clean font, but duplicating the font layer, messing around with the rasterized layer, and putting the clean layer on top of the other font layer. Here's an example:

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v294/mechinfinity/science.jpg[/IMG]

Perhaps messing with the blending layer on the text would also enhance it a bit. Sorry for such a lengthy (annoying, maybe?) reply... just feel kinda overanalytical.[/SIZE]

[Taylor Hewitt]

No it's fine. I appreciate a decent sized post. I'll try and make it better shortly. And I'll try pixel fonts.

[Syk3]

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