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poem #150125

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Hi, here's one of my shorter poems! Hope you guys like it. C&C welcome :D

 

#150125

 

depleted, defeated

reduced obsolete

had life on the line

but turned on your TV

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Interesting. To me it feels like a poem about a person who chooses a robotic, ritual based lifestyle over going out and living life to the fullest.

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Yeah, you could replace the word TV with PC to create a more current version, but it's cool. Short, but says enough.

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