Yu-Gi-Omg Posted January 29, 2015 Posted January 29, 2015 Hi, here's one of my shorter poems! Hope you guys like it. C&C welcome :D #150125 depleted, defeated reduced obsolete had life on the line but turned on your TV
CaNz Posted February 1, 2015 Posted February 1, 2015 Interesting. To me it feels like a poem about a person who chooses a robotic, ritual based lifestyle over going out and living life to the fullest.
Awesome! Posted February 5, 2015 Posted February 5, 2015 Yeah, you could replace the word TV with PC to create a more current version, but it's cool. Short, but says enough.
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