Writing A narrative poem by Shystor

[Na'dou]

I'm not going to post this under the limerick, because it's a narrative. Be sure to let me know if it's spam or if you like it.:)

OLD MAN CREEP

There once was an old man
Who lived up the street.
He was smelly and mean
And he had big feet.

Then one day he dissapeared.
It was on the night of Halloween.
Children started missing too,
And he was thought to be seen.

Soon all the kids were gone,
That is except for me.
I walked alone on the dreary street
Wondering how I would be.

I then heard a noise behind me,
It sounded low and deep.
That's when I saw the old man
Oooo, the creep.
He invited everyone but me
To his party.
He laughed in my face and
Do you think I like him, hardly.
- J--- T----
I hope this one's not too corny.
😄

Edited July 15 by Na'dou

[Boo]

*sniffle*

[Na'dou]

I take it that means you liked it.

[Boo]

Yep

[Mist]

One word posts are SPAM, so I suggest you delete your last post, DA. Shystor, very cute poem. I liked it a lot. He had big feet...hehe. :D

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]Big feet...*nudge nudge* *wink wink* Hehe, great line man![/COLOR]

[Na'dou]

Thanks, I didn't know it was that good. I'm glad you liked it.