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  1. It's an interesting neko, and I like the texturing on the tail and the hair. The head seems kind of large, though, and her pose looks unnatural. Her hips are turned away, but her torso is facing front. Great job, anyways, and congrats on the scanner
  2. Your first banner is... well, interesting. I'd add an intricate border to make it more appealing, but if you like it that's all that matters. The second one I like better, the pictures aren't so pixelly. Again, though: Borders! (not the bookstore)
  3. I wonder how long it takes the guys to get dressed with all those frogs to "button." Remove a few for their sakes. ^^ I also tend to draw the torso too long, and I try to envision where the characters' ribcages end and hips would begin. I agree with Pyro about their feet, unless you were going for the Chinese foot binding look. Broaden the girls' shoulders, too. Generally speaking, most people's elbows end right above where the hips begin, right at that curve in the waist if the arm is held straight down. The fingertips usually end a little more than halfway down the thigh if held straight. Kind of eyeball it. The legs are fair game in anime. It helps if you draw from some photographs and get a good idea of the human anatomy. Great job on distinctly different characters. You can almost distinguish their personalities.
  4. After bouncing around to try and discover if there were any hidden words, I got a cramp in my neck. ^^ But seriously, other than the fact the words are hard to see, I really like it.
  5. Nice effects, but I think it needs a border. Great job anyways.
  6. I thought for sure this contest had died out. Kudos to Katana for taking the time to judge all those pics! Congrats Rhys Mayiessen for the highest score.
  7. Um... I have a scanner. I just couldn't get to it this morning because my mom was using it for a good half hour.
  8. If that was his wedding ring, does that mean Laura has one too? It's hilarious, but the animation seems a little too choppy and detracts from the humor. It's great!
  9. Alright then. Attached is an old manga page of mine to show you the layouts I use, since I can't get to a scanner right now, and here's a pic of how I draw now. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?postid=535587[/img] Just fyi, the manga page was pulled out of the recycle bin and has little to no computer work done on it. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?postid=535818[/img]
  10. Chichiri! (eh, I thought his left eye was gouged out.) Anyways, nice clean cuts, etc. I like how the chibi pic is the only picture of Chichiri not blue, and the birds in the bg kinda make it ... ethereal, I guess. great job. I kinda wish it weren't so symmetrical, and had a stronger, more intricate border, but it's great as is.
  11. I'm having problems understanding what the requirements are. I'm sure I could find time to do a web-manga: One page once a week, anyway, since I'm already juggling 3 mangas. b&w? Color? Do you need a sample of my work?
  12. Ice's eyes aren't quite aligned, and I feel that you should draw more of Fire's left shoulder so it doesn't look like she's painfully thrusting her chest forward. Other than that, I really like it, esp the shading and hair.
  13. I had drawn this for a chapter title page for my manga in progress, then decided to use my corel photo-paint. If it looks crappy, it's because this is the second time I've used the program, and perhaps because I suck at it. ^ - ^ [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=535587[/img] They're twins, if you haven't figured it out.
  14. Oh, darn. I didn't notice I stretched the pic out. :: pouts :: The knee was supposed to be right at the end of the paper, and I made the mistake of drawing in ink. ::slaps self:: bad klin
  15. I threw this together in a car, so the quality is pretty iffy. For Majita Miabi, I wasn't sure exactly what type of lab coat you wanted, nor the shade of gray you wanted for her eyes. Megumi Ayaomi: I wasn't quite sure of what you meant about her hair. Hope it helps. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=534779[/img]
  16. Sorry, it's on lined paper, most of the background is cut out, it was drawn in the middle of chem, medium is a [B]ballpoint pen[/B] and Crayola colored pencils, and my scanner screwed the now non-existent moon. eh, I like the glowing sword/dagger/conductor's baton and the girl's hair. Critiques are very welcome. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=532925[/img]
  17. The neck looks a bit too thick, and the legs look unproportional, and her feet are too small, but that's all I can see. The cg work is great, and I really like the overall work.
  18. I might as well attempt with three pics. This is Motoko Kusanagi from Ghost in the Shell. The medium is Crayola colored pencils.... I need to buy Prismacolors... [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?postid=512867[/img]
  19. Here's my entry. Unfortunately, the medium's pencil and I drew the nose too light so it didn't scan. Oh well. It's of Jolin Cai, a Chinese pop singer. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=529761[/img]
  20. Long time no look, but I still bow to your work. The animated FF8 banner is a little fast, but great still the same. The cuts are crisp, as usual. ::applaudes::
  21. I drew the person and painted her in art class while I was bored, and did all the other stuff on the comp. It looks a bit sloppy, but I tried, and it's not like I'm trying to sell it or anything. The CD is going to be a xmas present for all my friends, and it's just a bunch of songs the violin group I'm a part of recorded, so it's nothing fancy (although I do love the arrangements). [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=529740[/img]
  22. I think I was on crack when I developed that sentence... I actually drew Motoko, also. I believe I was "trying" to say that I actually took the time to color in those tiny squares. I'm not sure, though... ^ ^ I'm kinda flattered that you thought Shirow drew that...
  23. neh, really... big? If the person to the right is supposed to look mad... it doesn't. Some improvements need to be made, but it's really good... really confusing, though. Shading well done. ^ ^ Hope I wasn't too harsh, but you did say C&C. I like it.
  24. Motoko Kusanagi, from Ghost in the Shell (awesome stuff) in an outfit that covers everything but her butt. ^ ^ Anyways, the little squares in the background I actually colored in. Medium: cruddy colored pencils. [img]http://www.otakuboards.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=512867[/img] ugh, I squished it...
  25. Another great pic! The eyes are a bit off, and the shin's a ~bit~ pointy. The arms are off, and hands, but the shading is terrific, and the dragon is done really well. I love it.
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