Kanariya

[size=1][color=chocolate]This is a very good banner, although it is too tall. The pic is good, and the background mixtures are good too. Nice work, though bugs me that's it's really tall.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Wow, interesting. ------------------ Yuka stared at Kurumi, with the weapon through her chest. She didn't panic, but stared at the shadow. She saw his grin on his face, while the rest of his body was a shadow. "Dammit!" Yuka yelled, making another disk appear in her hand. She threw it to the shadow, and it scratched against his arm. He winced, and then suddenly, disappeared into the forest, tracking blood behind him. "Yuka...Kurumi...Katana...Kit...Amaya...Yuki...Kaz...the 7 people...who can actually kill me with one great attack...are here. Of course, to bring them here was to make them die...and I could rule this feudal Japan..." the shadow said. "Each of their powers...Yuka is the Day, Kurumi the Night, Katana the Water, Kit the Earth, Amaya the Fire, Yuki the Wind, and Kaz the Heart. All have the special attacks..." Meanwhile, Yuka comforted Kurumi, laying on the groud, with Nao very near. He was taking off some of his clothing now. Katana slowly pulled out the weapon, and lay it next to Clay. Clay watched carefully as Nao and Yuka took off pieces of their clothing to help Kurumi. Clay stared at Yuka as she took off the bottom of her kimono, piece by piece to help Kurumi. "If we only had Sanosuke's bandages now..." Yuka said, surprising everyone. "No duh!" Katana yelled, rubbing Kurumi's wound with her hand, blood covering most of her hand. "Yuka...Katana..." Kurumi muttered. Yuka placed her forefinger over her lips. "Shhh Kurumi, you should get some rest. He hurt you badly...and nice attack. I see you've found yours...I bet each one of us does!" Yuka said. Katana nodded. "That'd be nice. Good attacks rock."' Suddenly, Kurumi dozed off to sleep, comfortable. Yuka stopped her bandaging, letting Nao take care of everything else. "Well if Kurumi is like this, we might aswell rest too," Katana said. "Someone has to keep guard though Katana," Yuka pointed out. "If not, who knows who might pop out!" "Hold on right there!" a man suddenly said. Everyone except Kurumi looked up, to see 5 men with swords, pointing at them. "And what a coinsedence..." Yuka muttered. Katana chuckled. "Who are you all?" another man said. "We're Tokyo police!" they replied. Yuka smiled. "We were going to Tokyo ourselves," Katana said. "To-" "Hold on missy. We're not fallin for that. Hey, what's this girl doing with a dagger in her shoulder?" the leader asked. Yuka looked at her shoulder. "It's not a big deal-" "All right. We'll send you all to the hospital and then we'll throw you in the coop for being invaders. Now move!" ----------------------------- Uh...Kaz...sorry you have to be Heart. If you think of any other good element, I'll make you that. I thought of Captain Planet.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Heh, you're very scetchy. The pic is good, but it is so sketchy, it's hard to make things out a little. The dog with the reindeer ears at the bottom is very cute, and his nose looks as if cold by that it's shiny. I can hardly make up the words, except for it I think reads "I'm cold." This is pretty good, very artsy.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]My favorite car would have to be the cute looking good old PT Cruiser. I think those cars are cool looking, and are the tiniest things. *Next to a beetle* If I had one, I'd like it in a dark purple or silver color. Preferred would be dark purple.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Aww, that's one of the cutest chibis I have ever seen. The colors are very pretty, and his eyes are the cutest things ever. If he didn't have his little frown, he'd look like as if he's thinking of something naughty. Very cute, nice job as well with your othe drawings I find so cool.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Very nice looking, I love them both. The first one is very nice, and the faded picture looks so nice! I like the other too, and I like your background with it too. Two different textures; stripes and little puzzle pieces. The second one is my favorite. I love the pink color you had, and the flowers really are beuatiful, matching the scenery and image.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]All of them are magnificent, even if they were made a while back. I really don't have a problem with them, except on the twins, the right one is a little off. The others are great, and the colors you chose were nice too. My favorite is Leo; the wings are nice, and yet she looks a little dark by her head. Wonderful job.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Sano, Kenshin, and Kit protect the..oops. I made a mistake, sorry. The kids go with Kit, the women go with Yuki and Amaya, and the men go with Katana, Yuka, and Kurumi. Oops. Sorry to confuse you Swordsaint and others. ------------------- Yuka, Kurumi, and Katana were walking along in the woods, with Nao beside Kurumi, some other guy talking to Katana, and Yuka along the side alone, happy. Suddenly, Clay popped up beside Yuka. "You happy alone?" he asked. Yuka nodded, and turned the other way. "You sure?" he asked. Yuka nodded again. Clay nodded, then looked ahead. "Hey Kurumi," Yuka asked. Kurumi looked back. "Huh Yuka?" "Can I be Gollum now?!?!?!?!" "Sure." Yuka jumped and clapped her hands. Then she sulked, looking like the hunchback of notre dame. "My precious...my prescious..." Clay stared at her, until Yuka went to her original form again. "Gollum gone cause he...uh...went to a bar!" she exclaimed. "SHUT UP!!!" Katana and Kurumi yelled. "I HEAR VOICES!!!!" "We said it at the same time!!!" "I'M STILL PARANOID!!!!" Clay stared at the confused Yuka, and chuckled. "You're crazy!!!" he exclaimed. Yuka crossed her arms against her chest in agreement. Suddenly, a rustle from the bushes were heard. Every man screamed. "SHUT UP YOU WUSSIES!!!" Katana yelled. The men went silent, and Yuka gave her a thumbs up. Suddenly, a shadow appeared leaning on a tree. "Katana, Kurumi, and Yuka. My my what a surprise," the shadow said. It...it was the voice of the man who stabbed them! "It's the dagger stabbing dude!" Katana yelled. Kurumi and Yuka cracked up laughing, until the shadow moved his postion to just stand in front of the tree. "Nothing will be funny anymore," he said angrily. Yuka pulled out her two Sai, and the other two their weapons. "Go ahead, you can't catch me!" the shadow said. He began running fast around the group, until a stab was heard. "You are such a bastard..." Yuka muttered as she felt a dagger peirce her skin. Clay suddenly looked worried, and started shivering. "And a fool!" Katana yelled, slashing her weapon and missing him. He laughed like a maniac, and began flying around. "You are my dear, you are!" the voice said, jumping around trying to stab the two others. They were very fast, and gave the shadow scratches. "Yuka, let me help you!" Clay exclaimed. Yuka growled as he ran over, and he stopped in his tracks. "Stop it! I'm fine..." she said. Then suddenly, her rubber band came out of her hair, and her braid became no more of a braid, and left her wavy hair behind her back, blood running on it with its long length. "Kurumi, Katana, let's kill him!" Yuka said, running to them, a disk appearing in her hand.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]I'll be in this. [b]Name:[/b] Kana Lyles [b]Age:[/b] 14 [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Weapons:[/b] 2 BB Guns, and a steel-made sword [b]Group:[/b] Bounty Hunters (I like being the dark evil person in RPGs) [b]Appearance:[/b] Black hair in a short ponytail with black rubber band tying it. Short-sleeved black leather shirt and black leather miniskirt. Black leather platforms that shows her toes. Has a black belly button ring and black toe ring. [b]History:[/b] Kana ran away at the age of 10, and lived with her older 20 year-old friend, Lina. They have been 'friends' since they had met, until Kana went away to look for the Moonlight Crystal for power to help Lina and herself to become more strong. Hope I can join!![/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Hm, pretty interesting. I'll join. [b]Name:[/b] Makaiya [b]Age:[/b] 16 [b]Description:[/b] Long dark brown hair to her knees behind her back, with blonde highlights. She wears black long pants, with a black short dress *to her thighs* that is short sleeved. She wears 20 black bracelets on her arm, and has black combat boots. Her nails are painted black, and her eyes are dark green. [b]Bio:[/b] Makaiya was a loner from her life of the start. She disliked her parents, and killed them at the age of 5. She got away by her sneeky personality, and was never caught and never will. She trusts no one really, and is an independent person. And she likes it that way. Makaiya loves to see people in pain, and gets irritated by nice people easily. Makaiya hates her human side, and praises her demon side for it's strength. [b]Weapon:[/b] Two knives [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Occupation:[/b] Theif/Murderer [b]Race:[/b] Hanyou *half-demon, half-human* [b]Side:[/b] Evil Suggestions: I think the people go into the other realm *forgot called since editing post* first, then go on their adventure.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Yuka awoke silently, on the fresh warm grass. She felt the sun shine, and knew now it was morning. She felt something again...on her back...she turned around, to see the same boy lay beside her. She made a horror lookng face and immediately got up. "Freaking pervert can't leave me alone..." Yuka said, staring down at the boy. Kurumi moved in her sleep, with Nao next to her still, and Katana a little distance away from her, as she snored, a bubbled blew out of her nose. Yuka almost laughed by how Katana looked. She began walking away. "Yu...Yuka...." someone said. Yuka turned around to see the same boy slowly opening his eyes, but in his same lying position. Yuka immediately froze as she saw him as he talked to her. "Where...where are you going?" he asked. Yuka shrugged. "Well I was actually going for a walk. Walking around here can lose some weight off my body especially since I like eatting fatty stuff!" she said, looking at her stomach. She was fit, but kept herself in shape. The boy smiled, but gave a sad expression in his eyes. Yuka didn't feel one bit sad or guilty of his face. "You know that shadow...he might come and stab you," the boy said. Yuka shrugged. "Who cares? I know I don't! I'll beat the crap out of him!" Yuka said. "I care." Yuka sighed, and walked over and kneeled by the boy. "Look, I don't know who you are, and-" "Clay. My name is Clay." "How can a person here be named Clay?" Yuka asked suspicously. Clay blushed. "Well..you see...I was zapped here from the future." Yuka dropped her mouth open, and almost coughed. "You...came from the future like me?" she asked. Clay nodded. "I came from a middle school..and you were there. I...liked you once I saw you. You were so dark, always wore dark T-shirts and now you see yourself in a light kimono!" Clay said. Yuka got up from her kneeling postion, and looked down to him. "Look, sorry to burst your bubble, but I don't want a relationship. I never want a relationship with anyone, and I'm not one of those girls that complains who's cuter in this Rurouni Kenshin world. God I could care less-" "I know that. There's really no hope," Clay said sadly. Yuka nodded, and walked away from the camp, into the woods alone. Kurumi slowly woke up, feeling Nao's warm arm wrapped around her. She smiled, until she saw the sad Clay sitting where Yuka once was sleeping. [i]Now what did she do? Kurumi thought.[/i] "Hey," Kurumi said. Clay turned around, and smiled. "See your awake," Kurumi said. "What are you doing in Yuka's spot? She left already?" "Yeah...she doesn't like anyone does she?" Clay asked. Kurumi sat up, gently putting Nao's arm on the ground. "Yuka doesn't like to feel in a very good relationship with anyone. I learned that as more as I got to know her here, and I really don't know about her past either. Yuka is a mysterious girl...sometimes she's dark, and other times she's hyper and all. She doesn't know what to do with herself I suppose," Kurumi said. Clay nodded, then turned to the direction where Yuka went. [i]But...you don't know how much I want to care about you...and...love you...[/i] ~*~*~*~*~* Yuki woke up silently. She shook Amaya's shoulder, then Kaoru's, then Megumi's. All woke up, and then woke the children up. "How are you all doing?" Megumi asked sweetly. "Fine Miss Megumi!" a little girl exclaimed, hugging Megumi on one leg. "Well we better get going," Kaoru said. Yuki nodded, along with Amaya. Suddenly, laughing throughout the trees were heard. The children gathered around Megumi and Kaoru scared. "You two...aren't you supposed to be dead yet?!?!" the voice said. Yuki cursed, and Amaya groaned. "What do you want?" she yelled. The voice laughed like a maniac again. "I want for you all children from the future to die...all you do is cause pain..." Then with that, the voice disappeared, and everyone was silent. Nothing. "Ok, what did he mean by that?" Yuki asked. "I have no idea but that must have something to do with why we are here," Amaya said. Megumi and Kaoru nodded, and they all along with the children began their journey again. ~*~*~*~*~* Kit, Sanosuke, and Kenshin were all up, ready to go. "Well let's go, we have no time to waste!" Sanosuke said. Kenshin nodded, along with Kit. They began walking, until Kit asked a question. "Hey Kenshin...do you sometimes wonder about Kaoru?" he asked. Kenshin blushed. "When I am sad, I usually think of her, that I do," he replied. "Eh..I thought I was alone..." "What?" Sanosuke said. Kit gave the indication with his hands 'never mind' and they three began walking again silently.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Ah, I loved the Tenchi Muyo series. Of course, I learned it from Cartoon Network, and I watched it of how long it had stayed on air. Tenchi Muyo will always be one of my favorite series. I loved Ryoko, she was such an interesting character. I would post more, but from my memory, I can make nothing of it.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]It's good, much better then me of course. The body seems a little off though, and those are mighty big ears. Looks like wings, not trying to be offensive. The weapons are nice too, ah someone made good looking weapons! Overall, good work.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Wonderful Conna, just wonderful. Banner #1: It's very nice. It has good quality pics, and the border is very unique of it's curvy style. The font is good too (see italics) and reminds me of Christmas with little dots. Pretty! Banner #2: Yes, sure not the best. The pics are good, but the font is blurry, and Vash on the right side don't look right tilted. Banner #3: I love this one a bunch. I love the font, and the pics are very pretty. The background is great too. Heh, just make me a matching avatar and I'll use it gladly. ^_^ Banner #4: ME FAVORITE!!! I get to praise the banner I use! Anyway, I just have to comment the fact that I love the pics and how you faded it like I asked, and the font is simple but good. Just makes me feel so cheerful. Banner #5: Not the best banner I've seen from you, but good. I think the font color doesn't well match the picture, and seems a little to plain for the love in the banner with the rose petals. Banner #6: Another great masterpiece. Just repeating great comments, although text on the left side in the middle would make it look not so plain, in white colored font too. Ah a lot to type but worth it. Keep up the good work![/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]The girls had found a camp site with the men, had a fire started, and began going to sleep. Yuka lay down on the grass, and yawned. She closed her eyes slowly, until she felt something touch the back of her body; along her back was more to be specific. She turned around to see a young looking man, about the age of 16, laying next to her going to sleep soundly. He had is black hair in a ponytail, and wore something like Kenshim, except the top was dark blue. Yuka panicked then got up. The boy looked up to her. "WHO THE FREAK ARE YOU?!?!" Yuka yelled. Kurumi heard, and frowned. "Yuka, don't be so mean. He was only trying to be comforting with you," Kurumi said. The boy frowned, and got up. "Well then, I guess Miss Katana won't mind," the boy said, making up a plan. Yuka smiled. "No she won't! And I don't either!" Yuka said, laying down on the grass again. The boy frowned, and lay next to Katana, who was asleep. Naozumi (or Nao, whatever) lay next to Kurumi. Kurumi blushed, and soon fell asleep. When she did, Nao wrapped his arm around her waist, and hugged her tight. Yuka caught them, and made a disgusted look on her face. Looking at Katana, she was snuggling with that boy. Everyone was asleep except for her. She yawned, then sat up. "99 bottles of beer on the wall..." Kenshin, Sanosuke, and Kit took a seat around the fire. They were quiet, and peaceful. "So...Kenshin what do you think the girls are doing?" Kit asked. Kenshin smiled. "I think the girls are enjoying themselves very much. Katana and Kurumi might have found someone, that they did. Though I'm not sure about Yuka," Kenshin replied. *Meanwhile* Katana is snuggled up with the boy, Kurumi with Nao, and Yuka singing her song. Not to mention almost drooling in the process. *Back to Kenshin and the other two* "Yeah, I suppose Yuka isn't the lovable type," Kit said. "I wonder if Yuka has ever liked someone," Sanosuke asked. "Maybe that's why she acts the way she does." "Possible," Kenshin said. "Of course, she might just because she is hyper, that she is." "Hm, true," Kit said. "Hope they are all right." *To Yuki and Amaya* "The children fell asleep so quickly..." Amaya muttered to Yuki, sitting around a fire. Yuki nodded, looking at the sleeping Yahiko. "All children," she said. Amaya nodded, and Kaoru and Megumi, on the other side of the fire, looked quite worried. "What's the matter?" Yuki asked. "Well with the shadow figure and all, what do you think they'll do?" Megumi asked harshly. "The shadow wasn't afraid to stab any of you except Yuki, and you were badly injured, though I don't get about Yuka though. Anyway, if these kids were stabbed, they would die instantly!" Kaoru nodded, and looked at the children. "They are so peaceful and helpless. What can we do?" she asked. "We can protect them," Yuki said. "You know we kick ***." Kaoru smiled, then lay down on the grass. "Yeah I guess," she said. Amaya and Yuki nodded, then lay down on the grass and soon fell asleep with Kaoru. Megumi meanwhile sighed. "Yes, at least I hope." Megumi looked up to the sky, looking at the bright stars. What or who caused this? So many questions... Yuka was dozing off by the moment, singing her song. "God dammit keep awake!" she said to herself. After, she fell asleep. (Nice!) Yuka fell from her position and lay on the grass. Meanwhile, the boy next to Katana suddenly woke up from a nightmare, and looked to Yuka. He smiled in comfort, and crawled over to her. He lay next to her peacefully, and smiled dozing off to sleep. "Sweet dreams Yuka..." ----------------------- No, Yuka will never love anyone. I just wanted this to be better![/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Weird tastes... I like to have the original favorite orange juice with plan old Cheerios. That's the best weird food out their for me. I also like rice pudding, with cinnamon, with raisans, with hershey kisses, and with sugar. Mmmm...I love that. Especially the Hershey Kisses with it. I like a bunch of other foods too to mix together, but too many to list.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]"Okay, now everything is going to be all right," Sanosuke said to the people on the train. They all frowned. "How are we going to be okay with a shadow with daggers around and...her?!" a woman said, pointing to Yuka, crouched up in a corner sucking her thumb. "She's paranoid right now, she'll be fine!" Sanosuke said. "I HEAR VOICES!!!!" Yuka yelled, then began sucking her thumb more. Kurumi sighed, and Katana was 'oh too cheerful.' "Okay, there are 5 women, 4 men, and 6 children on this train. The strongest protect the children, which are Kenshin and Sanosuke. A middle schooler can come with them!" Kaoru said. Suddenly, Yuka appeared over, dreamy eyed. Kaoru ignored her. "Kit, you go with them," Kaoru said. Yuka groaned, then crawled back to her little corner and began sucking her thumb again. "To stay with the women...me, Megumi, Yahiko, Yuki, and Amaya. We're sane, and we can keep the women happy. THAT means Yuka, Katana, and Kurumi protect the men!" Kaoru said. The men stared in horror, and Yuka stayed in her corner. "Yuka come out!!" Katana said. "VOICES!!!! NO!" she quickly yelled back. Kurumi sighed, and walked over to Yuka. "You want a sugar cookie?" she said. Yuka suddenly got up, and nodded. "You come with us you get a sugar cookie, eh?" Kurumi said. Yuka nodded. "Ok I join you people but if we play Lord of the Rings along the way like I song on South Park I'M GOLEM!!!!" "Ok, you can be Gollum. Now let's go!" Yuki said. The others nodded. The children kissed their parents goodbye (Yuka was almost puking by this), the men and women were kissing and hugging for their goodbyes (Yuka was now turning green), and children blew kisses when they were done kisses on the cheek (Yuka puked out the window.) "Yuka, are you all right?" Amaya asked, looking out the window. She quickly turned back around, and had a sick look on her face. "What's the problem?" Kenshin asked. Yuka turned around, and looked happy. "Oh nothing..." -------------------- Person next gets to start the big adventure!!![/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]I think holding doors for women and all is really sweet, though I think people should hold doors for other people and stuff, not caring which gender. Meaning to be curtious, that's all. For me, I'm a girl, I really don't like boys acting all sweet towards me. I don't like to be treated much as a lady. I'm not saying holding doors and stuff is a bad thing, just that I don't really like people doing it for me. I could care less if someone slammed the door in my face. Curse them. I really don't take it too seriously. I wasn't raised the be a very polite person either. My mother is a good parent, just doesn't teach being polite very well. I am respectful to others, but at times I say the worst things I could say to other people.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Nice work here. The grayscale is cool looking, though the knives don't really seem to fit the picture. They stand out throughout the whole picture, and look more realistic. Some people might like that, but I think the knives are a little too 'real' looking for the picture.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Hm, very creative. The coloring, as everyone had said, is very good, and the tongue texture is very well done. The little words ruin it all...:p *stares and wonders what they say*[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Heh, I like Family Guy and all, but I don't have the DVDs of it. My parents refused to get it for me for Christmas, and I'm completely broke. :P I want to get them later, along with Season 3. Since I had seen Family Guy, I keep on watching and watching and watching it, not caring or repeats. Good News: Since many many Family Guy DVDs were sold, the creator decided the make 35 new episodes of it. Not sure when it will start though; I think 2005 or something. *Waits another year*[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]I don't plan on getting the new Blink 182 CD. I just think Blink 182 is too 'pop-ish' for me. The only song I have ever known was 'Feeling This' (off of MTV.) It isn't the best song in the world, but I do enjoy it. I'm not really a big fan of this group, and don't plan getting the CD either. Yes...go MTV...[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Ooh, very nice. I absolutely love the background effect you made; it looks so creative and cool. The image is very good, though I don't like the writing in red letters. Black would do better for the dark edges. Nice work, I like this piece a lot.[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]Heh, I have never seen your work at all. I'm glad now I do! This is an amazing piece. I love the things on the corners whatever they are; very pretty and creative. Reminds me of Kingdom Hearts for some odd reason. Yes...now I see the huge books...were they supposed to be that huge? The 'butterflies' are okay, though not the best. I like the dark room, and the kitten. That's a girl? Or is it a boy? I think it's a boy, I don't know...[/size][/color]

[size=1][color=chocolate]"Kurumi?" Yuka asked, bonking her on the head. She drooled even more, and Yuka chuckled. "Hey Kurumi is a gonner!" she said. "Well when she wakes up, we'll get going off this train. Look at the people here!" Sanosuke said. People were still on the train, men, women, and children. They were scared; they had watched as the other middle schoolers were stabbed. "So what do you exactly plan?" Kit asked. Yuki shrugged, the turned to Kenshin. He looked worried. "I don't know what to do, that I don't. That...shadow figure...he stabbed every one of you except Yuki, that he did," Kenshin said. Katana nodded, then poked Kurumi. "She's sleepy dumbo!" Yuka said. "You're calling [i]moi[/i] dumb?" Katana said. "No DUH!" "Katana, Yuka, cut it out!" Yahiko said. "Well we better get going!" he said. "WELL THEN OKAY!!!" Yuka said. She bonked Kurumi on the head, and Kurumi rolled off of the train couch. She cursed, then got up, glaring at Yuka. "How...dare...you!" she yelled. Yuka crossed her arms across her chest. "Well...well you were sleeping and we needed to leave!!" "For what?" "To get out of this train, remember?" Katana said. Kurumi sweatdropped, then looked at the other people on the train. "Don't worry we'll help you too!" Kurumi said. Suddenly Yuka popped up. "[i]If[/i] you give me money. I deserve it because I'm SPECIAL!!!!" "Nah uh!" a kid said. "I'm special!" Yuka frowned, then gave the little kid the middle finger. He shrugged, and Yuka sweatdropped. "Eh..." "Yuka you're evil. You deserve to die," Kurumi said. Yuka smiled. "Yeah I know. That's why I am why I am today. Now let's go...uh...where...somewhere over the rainbow...[/size][/color]