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  1. [size=1][color="666666"] You have amazing talent. The drawing reminds me of Nappa from Dragon Ball Z. I guess because he has no hair. Also I think that the axe adds alot to the drawing because of it's size. Also his expression on his face seems to make me laugh because I am thinking he is happy. [/size][/color]
  2. [size=1][color="666666"] Great job Blanko! Totally awesome art work. I agree that the feather's catching on fire is awesome. The only thing is that I would think that the feathers would be the same coler as Pidgeotto's. Also I enjoyed they you colored them. It added alot more "effect" to your drawing. 9/10 Keep the totally amazing artwork! [/size][/color]
  3. [size=1][color="666666"] Suzuka, also one of my favorite Outlaw Star characters. It seems that you may have used the Ripple Effect or something. I belive that you should of not faded the image of Suzuka so that it could be "seen through" If you want to say it like that :P Anyway other than that great job. Keep up the good work. [/size][/color]
  4. [size=1][color="666666"] Yes I know. I got crazy with the same background. But please just mainly look at the stock image. Also comments and criticism is totally alright with me. [/size][/color]
  5. [size=1][color="666666"] Great banner Leh. I haven't been able to get or play Halo. Comments : The stock image is awesome. The background, with the stars and the outlining of the Earth, is awesome. Also I love the quote! Criticism: Banner may be better if you made it bigger. I mean I like the size is right now. It's just I never made them that small. The font is hard to read. I understand what you was trying to do and all. I mean you "can" read it but may be better if you made the font alittle larger. [/size][/color]
  6. [size=1][color="666666"] Yay Chi Chiri's Girl! It is totally awesome. I just loved the way you wrote it but they was some typos here and there. Nothing to worry about or nothing. It would probably help if I knew about Tokyo mew mew by chance, woul it not? Well keep up the great work and keep the story going! [/size][/color]
  7. [size=1][color="666666"] Kurt in a hall of the Xavier's Institute. He looked along down the hall hearing nothing but still his furry ears stood up incase something would happen. Teleporting from one place to another. Kurt watched over the students of the Institue. He finally met up with Scott. [b]Scott[/b] : "Hey Kurt whats going on?" [b]Kurt[/b] : "Nothing really just checking up on all the students. The teleporting ability sure comes in handy." [b]Scott[/b] : " Oh I see..Try to forget what happened, Kurt. It's all in the past now so plan for the future. Scott nodded and walked down through the front yard of the Xavier Institute. Kurt still stood there, thinking to himself of what had happened. [i]Try to forget what happened, Kurt. Its all in the past now so plan for the future.[/i] These words kept going through his mind. He nodded and walked in the opposite way of Scott. [/color][/size]
  8. [size=1][color="666666"] Kurt stood in the main hallway talking on the phone. "Yes I want one table to our selves...Yes Sir we plan staying their for a while...Okay 6:00 on the 23rd? Thank you Sir!" Hanging up the phone he flipped into the air doing three or four acrobatic flips before landing on the ground. He looked around nervously and went upstairs to his room and wrote the date down on his calendar.In a instant he vanished in smoke and appeared in the training center [ defense facility ]. Standing there alone he pushed the button on his holo-watch and his human like form vanished showing what his appearance axually was. Pressing what level he wanted the defence set on, he decided to train by himself for the day. Door panels on the floor slid open, laser's poped out of the floor and aimed at Nightcrawler. They open fired, at that very moment Nightcrawler vanished and appeared behind on of the machines. The other machine lasers fired at him hitting its fellow laser system. It exploded but the other lasers kept firing. When the smoke cleared Nightcrawler was on top of the ceiling, leting go of his hold he fell straight on top of a laser. Using his right knee he crushed the laser into peices. Other lasers continued open fire on Nightcrawler. Although when they shot, they was shooting smoke...[/size][/color]
  9. Assassin

    Zoids

    [size=1][color="666666"] Yes but the voices sound just find DragonBZ_3. The fourth epsiode was quite awesome. All I can say is that you need to watch it. [b] Gpeowyn[/b] : Woah umm I do not think that Gundam Wing is being ripped off. Zoid Fuzors has a great story line and the animation is awesome. I recommend you keep watching Ziod Fuzors I believe its going to get more interesting. [/size][/color]
  10. [size=1][color="666666"] Why thank you Kyo dude. I drew it in art class. We all had to draw it or most likely get a bad grade. It need polished up but still I like the way it turned out. Thanks for the comliment. [/size][/color]
  11. [size=1][color="666666"] " Come on Kitty give it back, Please?" Kitty smiled and went through the wall with her powers. Kurt shrugged and disappeared in a cloud of smoke, reappearing in the room that Kitty had just went to. He looked around but there was no sign of Kitty. " Where could she have went. " Kitty was silently sneeking up behind him , reaching out she grabbed his shoulder and made both of them go through the floor under them. Kurt was astonish where he was at. It was Wolverines training center that made a X- Men out of him. He smiled and turned around seeing Kitty still held his Holo-Watch. Kurt Shrugged " You win Kitty what do you me to do? " Kitty smiled happily infront of him and hopped into the air landing on top of Kurt. They both went to the floor while Kitty said " Take me to dinner tonight. " The light made a slight glimmer in Kitty's eyes. "Okay I will honey. " Kitty was jumping up and down off the ground and reached Kurt's Holo-Watch back. Kurt strapped it on and pushed a button located on the right side of the Holo-Watch. His beast like appearance faded and he looked totally human. [/size][/color]
  12. [size=1][color="666666"] [i]Character Sign Up[/i] Name: Hatsuharu Sohma Age: 19 Gender: Male Height: 6"1 Weight: One hundred and ninety pounds Appearance: [URL=http://64.127.74.3/Pictures/guys/Fruits.jpg]Here[/URL] Biography: Living in New Helic City seemed to be a good home for Hatsuharu. Although it seemed boring at some times. Rei seemed to abondanden by his parents when he was young. He was left outside of a Zoid Veteran house. The name of the man that raised him was [i]Sakuya[/i]. Sakuya raised him like he was his own son, when older he tought Hatsuharu all he knew about zoids. How to pilot them, how to repair them and how to be one with them. Hatsuharu payed attention to Sakuya as he tought through out his younger years. When older he decided to move out and live in New Helic City. One day when walking down the crowded streets of New Helic City. He fount a Zoid Merchant that was trying to sell a new zoid that he had never saw. Remembering what Sakuya said about a guy named Irvine piloting a Lightning Saix. When he asked the man what the zoid was. It was a Lightning Saix he then used all the money that had to buy the lightning saix off of the Zoid Merchant. The lightning saix was one of closest things to him. The lightning saix seems to have a mind of its own in battle, so only Hatsuharu is allowed to pilot the zoid. Checking his news on his computer he read it in his mind. It read [i] Zoid Pilots we are having a contest to allow pilots to try out to be capable of making their own team....[/i] That is all that Hatsuharu read. He went out into the rainy day and slid into the pilot seat of the Lightning Saix. [i]After Tryouts[/i] : Hatsuharu was suprised when the judge said that he was capable of making his own team. So he decided to call his team the [b]Black Fusion[/b]. Personality: Hatsuharu has a great personality. Alway considering the people around him more than himself. Although alot of girls chase after him through his various battles. Also, Hatsuharu is very competative towards other Zoid Pilots. When challenged even if he out ranked he will accept and battle with all of his warrior heart. [i]Team Sign Up[/i] Team: Black Fusion Members: Hatsuharu Sohma Rank within Team: Team Commander Team Zoids: x2 - Lightning Saix and x1 - Blade Liger Sworder Team Transport: Solid Black Hover Cargo Z.P.R.S Numbers: 4444421DC [ Hatsuharu Sohma ] 4444422DD [ ] 4444423DE [ ] Zoid Sign Up Name: Lightning Saix [ Daigo ] Type: Tiger Appearance: Daigo is a rather a newer model besides his team mates. The red fans that is located at the zoids chest and legs are blue. Support Systems: Eon Boosters, Cooling System and Thermal Tracking System Weapons: Duel Laser Beam Cannons , Hardened Alloy Teeth and Claws and Attachable Missle Pods Custom Modifications: Thermal Tracking System , Attachable Missle Pods , Also Font and Back Leg Armour Up-Grade [/size][/color]
  13. [size=1][color="666666"] You could say about 5 minutes x.x Anyway here is my last drawing that I have scanned it took me abuot 20 minutes or so. [/size][/color]
  14. [size=1][color="666666"] Thank you Eternal sir. I appreciate what you said about my drawing. I dont think that it is all that good but here is another. It is named Wind Rider. [/size][/color]
  15. [size=1][color="666666"] [b] Will post pics after other people post. This will make it non-dubble posting and all. So you will be able to see all my pics in this thread. [/b] ========================================== Here is the first one. I fount a pic on google while searching for a naruto. It may be a fan art who ever drew it and all so credit is to them for me looking at the pic. [/size][/color]
  16. [size=1][color="666666"] This is by far better than the first one. The story line seems alot better than the first on and Bryan..that main characters first car that he appears on is awesome. SPOLIER[/color] [color="ffffff"]I love when they are racing down the road and everythin and slams his breaks on, and turns around and flips the black guy off. [/color][/size]
  17. [size=1][color="666666"] Very good ninja! I recomend that you use a different type of font. If your using adobe photoshop 7.0 maybe 04b font or something like that. Make sure it is capatilized and has a black outline. Anyway back to the point. The stock looks alright but is kinda out of quality. What I mean by stock is the image os Sora. Overall Rating: 8/10 [/size][/color]
  18. Assassin

    Zoids

    [size=1][color="666666"] [b]Blazing Yusuke[/b] : The new Zoids series is about the newest modification to the zoids. This meaning that they can fuse together and make a zoid I believe about one hundred times powerful if it was a non fused zoid. IT is cool how it makes the zoid fuse and see awesome combinations and such. Also some zoids can fuse with many other different zoids. [/size][/color]
  19. [size=1][color="666666"] Yo people, umm this is the first chapter of my short Story Named Shadow Hunters. -------------------------------------------- Shadow Hunters Chapter One : Introduction The streets were empty as two men stepped out into the open. Each had a hand gun in his right hand's. "Just give it up Koji, you're not gonna live." "Let's just see about that, shall we, Augusta?" Koji smiled and lifted up his .45 colt custom and pointed it at the man. Augusta fired his hand gun, Koji could see the bullets coming and moved to dodge the bullets, one by one. He dodged them successfully. "Is that all you got Augusta? Well, why do you think people call me the Shadow Hunter? Koji slid his gun behind his back, between his belt. He moved his right hand to his side, a leather box held shurikens. Koji brought out three and held them in his hands like playing cards. He flung them at Augusta with amazing speed and accuracy. Augusta took all the hits and fell to the ground, blood gushing from his wounds. Koji landed on the ground seeming disappointed in the fight. "Augusta you was not even a match for me." Koji laughed and turned around walking down the empty street. As he left the town people swarmed around Augusta. "He was not even a match!" Before their eyes Augusta's human like form vanished, and he appeared to be a shadowy figure with dagger like claws. "OH NO!" "That was one of those Shadow Creatures that has been killing innocent people and trying to take over the world." The crowd grew thin and the discussion of the matter seemed to disappear. The shadowy figure disappeared with the gentle breeze that was blowing. Koji knew that Augusta was a Shadow Creature. They did not know him but they considered him the one that has been killing people. Koji stopped in a dense forest, walking to a nearby tree with a dagger carved into it. He pushed the handle of the dagger then the blade. The ground that surrounded him sunk into the earth. Koji stood there leaning against the metal wall. He looked around the Room. " Tisaki?" Koji yelled through the halls of the building.A young girl around the age of seventeen ran through the halls and stopped, breathing heavily before she could speak. "Sorry Koji, I was making you a new shuriken." Tisaki smiled and reached him a shuriken carved to look like diamond. "Why does it look like a Diamond?" Koji moved his fingers around the top of the shuriken carefully to not touch the sharp edges. "It's made like that so it can hold some more of that poison that we have. Remember the posion that you brought back the other day after destroying another Shadow Creature?" Tisaki nodded. "Yes I remember, for some odd reason the posion makes the Shadow Creature's weaker than normal..." Koji slid the diamond shuriken into the leather box that was located on his right side. Walking to the the tree that had the dagger shaped on it, he turned around and nodded to Tisaki. Tisaki nodded back, Koji pushed the handle of the dagger then the blade and the floor under him went up. When it reached the top, Koji was back in the forest looking around for anything that looked suspicious. He saw something that seemed like a blur when it moved. He threw a shuriken into a tree before the blurry figure. It stopped and came out into the open. "Hello, you seem mighty good with them shurikens. Names, Daigo...Daigo Sasaku. " Daigo laughed and leaned against one of the trees. "Hmm...thought you was some type of shadow creature with the speed you have." "Yeah, I train often so that I can get faster and stronger. The speed is not the only thing I am pretty good at." Daigo reached behind his neck and brought out a katana. He slashed out in front of him making a X shape. The X shape seemed to burn with flames. Daigo stabbed into the middle of the X and it was sent flying to a tree. The tree seemed to have nothing wrong with it but seconds later the tree was cut completly. "Very nice, Daigo, not bad at all. Hmm I know this is kinda convinient, but my name is Koji, Koji Tsuyuma. The thing is I need some help getting rid of these Shadow Creatures. If we get some more people we can over run the Shadow King located in space. I know it sounds weird and you probably never heard of it but its true. That is what I do, I destroy the Creatures that kill innocent people." Koji nodded towards Daigo. "Yeah I know who you are. I've been following you for a while. I suppose I will join the "Shadow Hunters" but on one condition. When I challenge you to a fight or spar you have to accept no matter what, Deal?" Koji asked. "Deal!" Daigo replied. Koji reached out his hand and Daigo did the same. They shook hands and began chatting about how they will find the Shadow Creatures and then destroy the Shadow King. Both Daigo and Koji walked out of the forest and was surrounded by shadow creatures. They flipped into the air and landed on the outside of the shadow creatures. Both began punching and kicking the shadow creatures. One by one they all went down, Daigo and Koji laughed and decided to camp, so they did. Chapter 2 Next [/size][/color]
  20. [size=1][color="666666"] Simply amazing! All the artwork is so good. I am like dumbfounded. It is so awesome, you have great talent. I wish I could draw like that. I am so impressed and I am a fan of your drawing now. :: Huggles all of her fantastic artwork. [Notes : Besides the guy ones cause I am a guy o.o ] :: [/size][/color]
  21. Assassin

    Zoids

    [size=1][color="666666"] Although I don't know much about the voices of the "Zoid Fuzors" sounded familiar. Thank you Shadow Fire for pointing that out. Yes RD's enemy is named Blake, he pilots a Beserk Fuhrer type zoid. It looks like also like the Geno Breaker due to it can fire the CPC : "Charged Particle Cannon. [/size][/color]
  22. Assassin

    Zoids

    [size=1][color="666666"] Zoid Fuzors: Another Zoids anime show. This time the Zoids are capable of combining[fusing] to make a more powerful Zoid. Although I have only saw one episode I am addicted. The main character pilots Liger Zero, his name is RD. It seems like the show is cell animated, or made by computers. I believe the animation and graphics are totally awesome. What do you think of this new series? Overall Rating: 10/10 The two main reason's I enjoy the series is : Reson One: Although it may seem rediculous I am a total Zoid maniac. I have seen almost all the episodes of Zoids: Chaotic Century and Zoids : New Century. Both I believe was awesome but I enjoyed Zoids : CC better! I also used to rp Zoids on msn. Reson Two: The fusion capabilites, this opens new and totally awesome zoids. Two types of weaponary, armor, etc. I mean come on its great! [/size][/color]
  23. [size=1][color="666666"] The banner looks awesome. I just don't like the text and the red surrounding the text lol. Have you tried different types of fonts. Also, the left stock[image] looks great with the banner but the right stock[image] looks sorta blurry to me. Great job though and keep up the awesome work. Overall Rating : 8/10 [/size][/color]
  24. [size=1][color="666666"] Character Sign-Up Name: Kurt Wagner Code Name: Night Crawler Age: 25 Gender: Male Apperance: [URL=http://www.blue-elf.com/miniseries2.jpg ]Nightcrawler[/URL] Mutation/Powers: Teleportation / Acrobatic Prowess / Prehensile Tail Originally From: Germany Affiliation: Xavier's School of the Gifted, X-men Current Location: Xavier's School for the Gifted, Bayville Known Family: [B]Mother[/b] : Mystique [b]Adopted Sister[/b] : Rogue [b]Other[/b] : Foster parents seen in the episode "Shadow Past" Personality: When other's is filling down, Kurt tries to lighten things up. Kurt is one of the sweetest people in Xavier's School of the Gifted. Although, Kurt fills isolated from other people because of his form. So Kurt plays alot of jokes to liven things up and trys to get his form out of his mind. Kurt also plays alot of jokes on Scott. When Kitty entered his life, he knew that she would make him fill like a real person. With all his heart he loves Kitty. Biography: Kurt when he was young never new his real parents. Instead he had foster parents. When older Kurt decided to go to Xavier's School of the gifted and started to learn more about his powers. When Katherine "Kitty" Pryde entered his life, he decided he would only love her. Kitty and Kurt dated awhile and decided to get married. Scott and the others are greatly supporting them. Kurt still seems down about his "real appearance" but decides to hide it in his mind. [/size][/color]
  25. [size=1][color="666666"] Baron, great job putting the image in and everything. The little kid in the bear out fit is kinda scarying me. Still I would rate it Nine out of Ten. [/size][/color]
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