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Once again her attention is brought to the ring in the sky, her ears balk back flat agenst her skull and a louder growl escapes her. The sound echos through the small vally she stands in. Being more cautious she climbs out looking for a village or some religious town she could ransome the preist or peristess out of to explain this strange thing n the sky. All of her instincts tell her to run but the winning part of her mind tells her to find out what this thing is. Topping a hill she sees people fall from the ring, suprised she wonders weither they were the ones who made this thing. She quickly tries to locate where they had landed. Suteneko looks down trodden, an fairly large city laies before her. Stealing into one of the nearest taverns she waites hopeing that gossip would bring her news of the ring. In her room she still finds no sleep and instead watches the sky where the ring is. "What are you?" she asks her question to no one in paticular and expects none from the empty room.

Suteneko looks up at the sky from where she stands on the mountin cliff, she thought dark thoughts about Sesshomaru. Picturing him being plucked up into the sky and torn to shreds by Paradice birds. Laughing she tuns and sees the ring in the sky and stops. A feeling of an imense power come over her and she growls deep in her throat. She didn't like it, it wasn't natural. She walks back under the overhanging granit ledge and curls up into a tight ball and squesing agenst the mountin side and best she could. Still the ring bugged her. Annoyed she uncurls and thrashes around tring to get some sleep. It wouldn't let her so she grabes her claymore and tattered cloke and starts down the mountin determined to get to a place that she could sleep.

Well the ogrinal any way Name: Trenre Retin Age:16 Gender: Female Appearance: [URL=http://neondragonart.com/Art/sketch/sketch10.jpg]Uhhh.....[/URL] 5' 9" with black hair wears dark blue or black leather pants and tunic when traveling or fighting and is sometimes seen in a dress when in a city or at a goverment affair, she is rarely seen fighting in a dress, her eyes are dark green. Side: Old Kingdom Weapon: A staff made of ancient oak with a six inch blade hidden in the tip. Charter Magic Magic you know: Free Magic, Charter Acc: A plain silver chain that holds a small jade cat and two silver bracelets with charter writen on the inside. Tell me if you want anything changed

Name:Griffin Trelma Age: apparent age-16 Real age- over 200 years Race: angel Bio:She was murdered when she was young when her home land, Egypt, was ruled by a pharo. She wandered aimlessly around the litttle oassis that she and her friends were killed in for several years, aimless and lost.Her friends, due to the way they were killed, were becoming viloent every year they had to be stuck there. Many travelers came to the oassis and went away telling a story of several child demons that played tricks on the water. Griff was not corrupted by their natures and countered any attempt of harm. Isis taking pity, cast her friends into eternal hell and created her anew. She now helps the lost and wanders aimlessly in the streets at night. She was put to this assignment becuse she had become strong and kept her head when she got into trouble, but she didn't know what she was up agenst. Several painters over the years have depicted her and her various adopted families with a faint shadow of her spirit in the paintings, the shadows are so faint you can hardly see them, she doesn't like cameras for this reason or calm water. She wears dark blue cargo pants,a black off the shoulder shirt and white tennishoes and blond hair and dark blue eyes. She appears as a regular teenager. Uhhhh.... Well you said ;) So here tis. Name: Clayton Stallbaumer (gonna get raized about this if Trigun finds out) Age: 16 Race: Human Bio: Chris grew up in the city, staying away from the other kids he is kinda a loner by nature tending to crawl back into his mind by reading or drawing. A good artist by his early teens he tends to have people stand still and draw them as still art projects. His friends are thoes of the smoking and drinking type yet he dose nither of the two, he usually uses their problems to give him ideas for his work. Wiccan, Chris dabbles in white magik now and then to releve the stress of others and himself, he also knows other stronger magik. A good family friend of the Scotts even before Griffin arrived from London, being the only one her apparant age, and the only person they knew that was in her grade, he was put in charge of guding the forgin student. Chris is kind and helpful but also a bit on edge and seems to know more then people think he does, even hat of personal lives. He walked upon Griff releasing a soul from it's body, she swore him to be quiet. Since then he has helped her with some of her 'problems' as an angel. His youngest brother was turned into a vampire he pledges revenge. Chris has the same feelings about cameras and having his picture taken as does Griff, he hates it with a passion, Griff and he are polar opposites, she is cheerful but serious most of the time and he is pessimistic yet a goof. He isn't crazy about cars as much as he is his hand-me-down Harley. He usualy wears black baggy pants and a black sleveless shirt under a leather jacket and fingerless gloves and combat boots.

Thank you Lalath Ril, I might want to put that up on question. Ok so, the gundams can only have a limit of four weapons that do limited damage, No destroying mass colonies/mechas/cities/planets/or any thing else with one attack, unless you have like a thousand mechs and you syncronize your attack at the same time wich I might add is nearly impossiable. Nearly, so no godmoding or powerplaying. I have sign up form thing so you can think about your charrie if ya want to join by the time I get this straightened out.Not every one can have a gundam, and some people have to sign up for the bad people. Also needed leaders of Riders, White Fang, and Oz.

He he Yeah I know this isn't done alot (i don't think), at least this paticularr title. I think I've done it before though, BUT here goes. And sorry to every one who wanted to do this but this is just a something I want to do. I'm still working on the story and would like comments. Please if you have any thing to add just say so. [I]Peace has reigned for over twenty years, the gundam pilots and war have long since faded from mind. Relina and Herro were married, Duo starting his own little buisnes son a remote colony has taken an allias. Trowa returned to the cirrcus as the sad clown. and Wufi Chan returning to China to do some reashearch all of them have disapeared from many people's memories like the wars. Qutra has become a powerful emasairy, creating a new life for himself in politics. A new group of enforsers taking the name White Fang have apointed themselves as "officers of the peace" bringing their insubstantial status above many of the aristocrats. They terrorize the people like rabid dogs, making getting around a living nightmare. These new "officers" consist mainly of young street gang members given the option of going to jail or inforcing the "laws." Each colony has a groupe of these ex gang members that think they're feared. Stero typing the rich and poor mercilessly, creating for themselves enmies and getting on the black lists of many major gangs of several colonies. The officals appointing them are starting to create a new army of these miscreants. A new generation of gundam pilots have begun to form calling them selves Riders, and have begun to undo the damage to the gundams. Many were distroyed or hidden by the orginal pilots who are now long and dead or in hiding. Thwarting the New White Fang with ancient death traps of mobil suites they strive to up retrive the blueprints from high intelengence "chips." These chips hold memory of past mobil suites and new models based on them. Upgraded models that surpass the more recent, useless dolls. The small band of Riders are planning to hit a high security base on Earth, this is where the story begins, after hearing about a Captin transporting a small steel box with unknown contents. But their attack comes too late for the box has already dissapeared, the Captin along with it, the compund suffering casulties and damages from an explosion. The Oz has faded from the mindes of many of the officials , but some of them have a bright plan for the resurection of the scraps of Epion found on a metor around a newly built colony. Though Oz is but a memory it still thrives and is creating a new teror.Oz has been created again breaking free of the officials and getting forgin backup for their projects. [/I] Ok well, I'm going to be Duo's daughter in this story but wouldn't mind if someone was to be a brother or sister, but I limit two siblings, other then that I'd like to see what you think of it and don't be kind about any thing be as crude as you want becuse I kinda need help on this before I go to the Inn with it. So HELP. If your a Rider you can be one from the straight or join from one of the colinines that the group visits or a town on earth or you can go Awal like my character. You can be a new pilot but some people have to be in Oz or White Fang for good, and I will need leaders for both. Ahh yes and please tell me if i'm spelling Epion right. Have fun with this and Please tell me where I go wrong if I am.

Name: Griffin Trealm Age:208 Race: Dark Angel Role: Turned ally Apperance: I have a pic but she has strange hair ,dark reds, blacks and bronzes bland together to create a shocking effect, that hangs down to her waist and the features of a cat, emrald eyes that reflect light and pale skin. Her wings are bat like and velvety soft. She wears dark blue velvet knee length dresses that are split up the sides to her waist and bound losely around her waist with a silver rope and doesn't wear shoes. Personality: Cold and distant at times but at others caring and friendly she loves life besides the fact that she's dead. Bio: Griff was murdered and drawn by something to Nifelhim, there she became a dark angel, a servent Hell. Stealing souls for a dark master crossing through the tear into the human world and bringing back the souls of infants, children, and healthy people uncareingly. Her soul was purged by unicorn magic and she fights her nature everyday. She is good now but is still susectiable to the dark powers of Nifelhim. She is startled and surprised by the human students when they literally stumble into her after they cross over into her world. She sits in the mud silently watching them repeating over in her mind [I]I'm not here.[/I] But the students see her and she joins their band as a guide and friend. Fighting the battle between her souls, she tries to resist staeling their souls. Sorry, I have pictures. [URL=http://neondragonart.com/Art/2002/balance.jpg]Torn souls[/URL] [URL=http://neondragonart.com/Art/2002/fae_light.jpg]http://neondragonart.com/Art/2002/fae_light.jpg[/URL]

Name: Naomi Griffin Age: 17 Gender: Female Description: She has long black hair with dark red tips, her eyes are dark green and are usually hidden by black mirrored sunglasses. She wears all black. Shirts under either a mesh jacket or a leather jacket and cargo or carpenter pants and combat boots and fingerless mesh gloves , and you usually see her with her cd player or drawing pad. I'm working on the picture. Category: Goth Personality: Distant and cold she rarely says a word. Besides her loner nature she watches people curiosly. Tends to run away from anything that hints getting close to any one. Bio: Her mother works constantly neglecting her and her younger sister, who went to stay with her father. She never stayed at other people's houses and locked her self into her room turning up her music letting it drowned out the world. Her parent's divorse had made her this way she started wearing black and then her friends abandoned her. She now watches every one through emotionles eyes, finding friends in her pets.

Occupation: Free lance bounty hunter Name: Griffin Terla Masiun Age: 18 Weapon(s): various weapons apon her person a bo (staff as tall as herself) with false tip containing six inch blade and a claymore Hails from: Luna Appearance: Demon- wears her silver hiar in a pony tail down to her waist. Deep green eyes that change color. Goes bare foot and wears black leather pants and a silk tunic of the same color. Her skin is pale and has a silver sheen. Human- Black hair to mid back in braid, dark blue eyes with a green ring around the pupil. Wears dark red tunic with tan demin pants, and boots that come to the knee. Unlike her demon self she looks gruff from working in the sun with hazel skin tones. Biography: She learned to fight at an early age with a large family and several older brothers. Her father seeing her potential trained her with various throwing weapons but he was partial to swords and taught her to weild the large claymore that she wears at her hip. Taking pity on her her oldest brother taught her to use a staff and to consentrate. He was killed, fighting the goblin's attempt to storm Luna, the year she turned 16 and she avoided people sinking into herself. Goblins have been plauging the city ramdomly for several years and until her father gets attacked by goblins on his way back to Luna from a neighboring city.On the aniversiary of his death she over heard her father talking to the mayor of the town about the Goblins and thier war agenst the Kingdom. She gathers her little belongings and takes her horse from the stables setting out to avenge her brother. She travels blindly it's not until she hears the news of the King's recrutings and ventures to join the group. Tell me if I need to change any thing.

Name/Nickname:Jessica "Jess" Revees Age: 16 Personality: calm and cenetered she rarely gets up set unless it's really important, like turning chibi. Caring to those who need someone to listen or just to ramble on aimlessly about anything Appearance: She has black hair with red bangs and emarald eyes. She wears a short sleved black shirt over a thin purple sweater and ankle cut hiking boots Occupation: Volentere Animal shelter worker Bio: She moved to the city after her mother and father divorsed and found peace in working with animals. Her mother decided to move to the city after Jess was offered a art scholarship at the school. Jess stays behind books most of the time or her drawings. When she found she was chibi she started laughing at the lunacy of it all, no doubt it was all the plan of the evil lord. With this awnser she bursts into tears on the side walk. Oh this is funny tell me is you want anything changed. I like the plot its cool. Chibi

Suteneko looks up quickly when Noi wakes up, she glares at him. When he quiets she goes back to her drawings in the dust, she was used to the nocturnal thing and tried to help Tsubaki but always got in the way so she stayed in the corner. She was happy to know that someone had made it out of the village alive but something kept bugging her. She stared at Tsubaki 's back curiously, How had she made it out? Did she know about the attack? Was she one of the ones that had attacked? Suteneko's stomach tightens at the last thought, doubt fills her mind and she looks down. Kenji had said they didn't know anything about the Juppon Gatana, he said that many people had died at their will. He watches over Noi and Rubi with Tsubaki Notu had found a comfortable place on the steps and she feell silenty into slumber wondering if she could trust her old friend.

NAME: Suteneko AGE: 16 Bio: When she was barely able to walk her father started to teach her the basics of fighting, the stances. As she got older she learned moves by watching and mimicking the others in her clan. Surpassing many of the men by ten her servaces were bargened for by other clans and villages. A fight agenst the evil Naroku wasps (i can't rember their names, I think Hell wasps or swarm?) she was poisoned, her mother being a healer lanced the wound bleeding it and sowed a jewel shard into her shoulder. As Suteneko's strength is increased by the shard so is the amount of trouble she gets into, and she wears several anklets of many materials on her right ankle. On one of her tasks she became aquainted with Inu Yasha's brother Sesshomaru and they have been traveling together sense. Personility: Easy- going, she smiles to hide her true feelings and gets into trouble a lot. She will be senseable unless her favorite food is involved, it's something along the lines of chocolate. DESCRIPTION: Long black hair with tiger stripes dark emrald eyes. Wears black silk all the time and fingerless mesh gloves but she doesn't wear shoes and has several anklets of diffrent stones and metals from past tasks of removing some demon or marurder,also she has calico cat ears and claws that retract but she rarely uses them. And I have a picture of her I'll put up. RACE: Demon, the Hetokire, catlike demons of dragons WEAPONS: various blades hidden on her person and a claymore (a very long sword) all made of dragon bone or tooth SPECIAL ABILITES: does getting into an imence amount of trouble count ERA: Present SIDE: Bad turned good Piccies this is kinda what i want her to look like besides the wings :) [URL]http://neondragonart.com/Art/2002/fae_light.jpg[/URL] [URL]http://neondragonart.com/Art/2003/darkfae.jpg[/URL]

Sutnenko watches Noi annoyed, she pretended not to notice. Standing by the bed she looks at the girl, "Oh, you don't look so good. What happeden? Hi, I'm suteneko." she points at the wolf near the door and smiles, "He's Notu, hes friendly" she laughes, "Most of the time." Tsubaki walks in the room unnoticed and stares at Suteneko confused. Suteneko feels her gaze and looks back, her eyes brighten and she rushes over to where Tsubaki stands, poking her she leans close to examin her face, "You can't be real." Tsubaki standing with the anime teardrop behind her head punchs her and Suteneko hugs her excitedly. "I thought no one survived, you..you.." she lets go of her friend and slaps her, "You left me in that village." Tsubaki punches her again, "You diserved it. Do you know how much trouble you got me into?" Suntenko frowns, drown trodden she looks at the floor, then looks up and smiles mischioufsly, "Yeah, but it was fun." she walks around her friend and sits in a corner watcheing every one.

Suteneko wakes up near sunset, Notu is nowhere in sight so she gathers her weapons, and prepares to leave. After scrubing the pot and burring the remains of her meal she sets off down the road, self consious at the lack of Notu. THe village looms up infront of her suddenly and she walks silently on barefeet, the streets are almost deserted, she spots Kenji and Noi, stoping her gaze follows them. Kenji senses her gaze and looks at her, she quickly moves on. Head down she bumps into someone near the outskirts of town. "HEY, watch it!" the voice comes from a burly man wearing blue. Suteneko looks up at him, "S..s..sorry" she stampers. "Sorry? I'll make you sorry." he makes a grab for her and she knocks his hand away with the bo. Drawing his sword he attacks her, she trips him and jumps back, "Stand and fight." she says quietly, planting the false end of the bo between her feet she twists it until she hears a soft click, she smiles swwetly, "stand and FIGHT!" she yells the last word and it echos through the darkening streets. THe man turns in an ofensive stance, "No one insultsUraby Koumri, espically not a girl." He charges her and she brings the bladed end of her bo up and over in a slanted arch cutting from the man's hip to shoulder, the strudy blade digging in deep and sending a shower of blood across the street. Kenji and Noi drawn by the shout witness the fatle blow, they stand in shadows, the blood spray ends near their feet. Notu bounds out of the shrub to sniff at the carcus her growls at her in annoyment and walks over to her. Kenji bounds at him sword drawn, his sword sinks into Suteneko's bo and she looks at him with a eire look in her eyes. "Don't." she says coldly, "Not on your life." Notu growls at Kenji menicingly. Kenji holds Suteneko's gaze for a few minutes then straightens. Suteneko looks backat Notu, she walks to where the false tip laies and picks it up, twisting it back onto the bo. Looking back at the two she smiles warmly, "Hi, I'm Suteneko, and you?" all traces of hostility weare gone and she atcted l;ike she hadn't done anything. OOC: Yes Kid Anime I'm really bord.

Hummm I don't know about this.....But I'll try it. Cheers ^_^ Name: Griffin Vix Trisatove (Griff) Age: 16 Background: A family secret passed down to her from her grandmother, whom she lived with, she thought it was a farie tale until some people came for her Grandmother. THey wore black and talked of a great power not knowing she was with in hearing distance, Griff, watched her Grandmother go with the strangers. She waited for her to return but she was left alone, Uncle took her in and taught her to fight. With her gradnmother's disappearance she inherited a small gold ring inset with ivory and jade making the image of briar with a rose, and her grandmother's old Katana. Description: Wears off the shoulder tops, cargo pants, combat boots, fingerless mesh gloves and mirrored shades. Her black hair falls to lower back when in pony tail, her hair is dyed blood red at the tips and bangs, she wears black nail polish and lipstick. Personality: She wears a smiling, happy mask to hide her feelings, she doesn't show them until she gets to know the others then the mask starts to fail. At first she tries to make others comfortable around her so long as it didn't compromise the mask. I'll get pic later

Ooc:*Dances around happily* Yeah we can get on with this, and DF I'm already failing three classes and have to take Speech again Ic: Suteneko hears a comotion ahead but ignors it, it was probly some anmial, she didn't much care about thoes fights. Instead she helps herself to another bowl of her hoshposh of soup type stuff. Despite the fires she feels cold and drawns the hood of her cloke up over her head. "MAn I'll be glade to get to the next town, we need some stuff. Notu." She watches several birds flit through the trees and smiles at the thought of other people. "Notu, will you keep watch? I'm going to streach out in the shade." She sets her empty bowl down and curls up underneithe a tree, after leaning her bos on the small house.

Name: Griff Gender: Female Age: 16 Human appearence: 5' 9". Wears dark red spagety strap and black cargo jeans. Her mirrored shades hide her dark emrald green eyes, and she wears combat boots and fingerless mesh gloves. She has a tatoo of a white dragon with black rose in the coils of it's body and two diagonal scars on her shoulder blades. She has black hair with electric blue tips. She also wears several anklets on each ankle and bracelets on each wrist, a thin rusty chain holds a jade pendent around her neck,t he pendent is accompined by two silver rings inset with turquse and onix. Wolf appearence: Black with faint gold stripes barely able to be seen unless the light hits them just right. She has one ice blue eye and one gold eye. And the rusty chain with rings and pendents. Personality:Usually distant and cold but she has some exceptions. She doesn't talk much and doesn't trust easily, her eyes hold a hint of betrayal and sadness about them. She doesn't tell her secrets or feelings just bottles them up. She will do somthing happy or funny to hide what she feels or thinks.

In the middle of the forest Suteneko stops by a lone house and sits on an abandomed wood pile, long black hair tied up behind her in a pony tail. Notu doubls baack and sits infront of her, looking expectantly. "We have a long walk to the next town and your nose is good enough to follow it tommorow." Her usually smiling eye dull with anger and sorrow. "Notu," she looks at him and waves her hand at the countryside, "Have fun." she say as she watches him lope off. Gathering her bo she checks the end of it, another bo is straped to her back at an angle, and a katana hangs at her waist. Sighing she walks around the house and finds a small pond around wich watercress grows, and rice in small patches. "A feast!" she says brighting, looking in the house she finds several small pans. "They must have left in a hurry." Filling the pans with water she starts a fire outside and boils the rice and watercress. Notu comes back with a rabbit, after skinning it she keeps little of it for the pot and throws the rest to Notu. Serching the pond's bottom she comes up with a few small crawdads. The smell wafers to the road as she digs in. "Notu, sometimes road food is better then home food."

Again Suteneko walks around confused in the village, her home town. She leans heavily on the bo and scratches Notu's head silently looking for any leads. Her eyes rest on the house of her old friend and she feels her eyes burn, "It's not fair it's not. I don't know if any one survived." She turns and walks away trying to hold the tears in. Notu whines and she looks down at him, "Find them, anyone who left this place." she says savagely. The wolf sniffs the ground a while and takes off down the raod, heading east. The darkness surrounds her as she leaves her village for the last time. Looking back once, her tears go unchecked. "May you rest peacefully in you graves." Her eyes flash and she sets her jaw, a steely expression comes across her face. [I]In pace requiescat.[/I] she thinks and follows Notu's shape slipping in and out of shadows. Tears blur her vision and shequickly wipes them away.

Hmmm.....Trigun you think there's anyway to conect all these together? It may work, THank You the The boy, Dragon Warrior, and The Pro for your comments. Monkeys :D :laugh:

Same here Trigun11 Name: Suteneko Hetokire Age:15 Gender:Female Weapon: Two sakura bos (undecorated staffs made of cherry wood as tall as herself, 5' 10") and a Katana, One of the bos has a false tip containing a six inch blade Appearence:I have a picture and she wears black silk but unlike Tsubaki she looks like a traped wolf [url]http://neondragonart.com/Art/2003/darkfae.jpg[/url] Personality:Unlike Tsubaki she is warm and out going, she has no fear of strangers and is most of the reason why the two get into trouble and rarely why they get out of it. Her warm nature is only a mask to hide her true feelings, If you look into her eyes you it's like looking at a traped wolf. Specialty: versitility with any weapon, she uses the false-tipped bo the most History: Since her aunt moved her to Japan she was the best friend of Tsubaki until Tsubaki had enough of being blamed for Suteneko's misadventures and left her in the small village. Suteneko managed to stowaway to the southern end of Japan at 13 and made a living there. Basically she was fostered by a high living family and taught to fight, to survive in the woods, and such. She soon heard of the massacare of her old village and went back Felling the energy of Tsubaki she sets out to find her, qfter her query she befriends a silver wolf cub. She catches up with Tsubaki in a large city tailing her.

*Points accused finger back* It was your fault and Yes it's cool but it's your fault that I have to write it over I didn't mean it to be like thatI just like the thought of a whole planet being a virtual desert, It's SPIFFY * glares at Trigun11* Oh Ha ha We get to play Football with the guys in PE down here I'm getting pretty good at catching though I suck at throwing, What is it with guys having to hold the balls a certin way??? *miroku thoughtfull look*

WEll It starts on this desert Planet, no large bodies of water and the civlization is mostly made up of local creatures, It's kinda a scifi/ Fanticy thing with space travel and dragons and stuff, and the crimanles that are sent from nearby planets to, well it's like a world prison where crimnals have lived and creaed towns and become oddly civilized, they've created laws to their sence of right. THe Outlaw from Earth crashes on the planet and resists arrest by the Desert Wraths, the highway police of the planet, except they patrol the whole planet there's them and regular cops, and their spread out through out sections of the planet like counties, and he is thrown into jail, with one of the main charters and the leader of the gang he tries to get to hep him. By the time he figures out the gang leader's talent, illusions, and to kidnap a Desert Wrath, her friends have broken her out of the jail, they do it a lot. THe gang is a mixed matched groupe of tecnitions, spies, cutthroats, and other low- lifes all atracted to the Viper, the leader, by promises of adventure, gold, and the basics. When Viper learns of ______, I need a good name for the Earth outlaw, "quest" she finds it an excelent plan to thwrt the police and reap rewards. Also Discovering her heritage. Yes it's quiet lame and strange and Trigun11 riped a page of it. * Grumples silently* :flaming:

Thank you but it doesn't sound right, I don't think. :confused: :huh: But Thank You

Basically I need help, I'm writing a story/Rp and I'm stuck, I need some reason for an outlaw to go to a planet where everything is a desert, no forests or oceans, just lakes and rives an stuff. THe outlaw is trying to inlist the help of a gang on the planet (for the crimnials) and I need some reason why he would do this.