Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Thanks, you're one of the best writers I know too. Just keep reading. The shadows are lurking around the corner The spirits are whispering in my ear The ghosts of my ancestors keep me on the path The love from myself goes out to all
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Ghost, spirits and shadows go great togther when you write them. When I write them it sounds like vampires hasing a feast...but it better when you write about them
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 As long as they're not feastig on me, it's fine. Besides, yours don't don't sound like that. I want to be free Free from this cruel world To roam on my own And not to be told Anything for my sake I can take care of myself Without anyone telling me You have to leave me alone I'm sick and tired of you Telling me about my life I was there I should know I can make my own decisions So let's keep it that way Because I don't need you.
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 If you ever read a poem of mine about spirits it might sound like I'm going to eat some one...Of course I'm not!!! It just sounds that way, but I don't know why...
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Post one and I'll tell you if it sounds that way.
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Alright, but I'll have to find one that I've done already first.
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Alright. I walk alone for these times Staying out of sight From all of those who slay Slaying down the innocent people The ones who stood by them They don't belive in friends Just power greed and money Those who want to stop them One day will And I know It'll be one day soon This goes out to Sadaam Housan. (Is that how you spell his name?)
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Ohhh, I like it. Sudaam Housan should read this poem. Cause it he did, he might have chaged his mind. And if Sudaam Housan isn't spelt that way, then I am really bad at spelling.
Alexa Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 [size=1]This seems like a two person thread ^_^ I like the first couple of stanzas, but the others seem slightly similar to the first @_@?[/size]
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Well, Ruby, if he does read it I just hope he can't find out where I live.:worried: Alexa, thanks and they are pretty similar. I just basically stick to one type of poetry.
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Hi Alex! And dayday I too hope he never finds out where you live, and I've gotten a vimpire post up now.
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 I don't believe a word you say You always lie to me Only to me It's not a excuse to hide the truth It's just your arrogant mind The one that thinks it knows it all Figure it out yourself I'm not telling you If you can make me You can make yourself Go ahead of me I don't mind You knew you were always wrong
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 I like it, too many people think they know whats right for every one. It's a great poem, love it!:)
Guest dayday Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 I might post a few more today and that's it. I'm starting to run low. This one is a little different than the others. Scents of a candle Carry throughout the room Filling in every inch of space FLowing through the air Like wind beneath an eagle's wings Soaring high above the clouds Going over your body To overwhelm your senses Whispering in your ear the daring words Come with me It draws you from the corner Taking you far away from home Only returning when you cry Crying for the scents of a candle
Epsilon Posted June 17, 2003 Posted June 17, 2003 Ohhh...*clapps* I love this one, soaring above and the candles make it even better. Oh yeah, by the way I found the poem that I was looking for.
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 I told your poem didn't sound like vampires. Thanks for liking my poem. This is the last one for today. Someone help me Save me from this This lonliness and darkness A world of no return Where everyone passes by Not seeing what's there Like you and your thoughts They're there too But no one can see them or you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you look at my location you might find some similarity between it and my poem.
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 That's a great one too, I love it! Your location dose relate to the poem. I love it...I've been saying "Love your poems" too much...oh well at least it's true.
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 I'm glad you love my poems. I love yours too. Just hope you keep loving.
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 I will, anything that's one of the greatest things in my eyes I never stop loving. Your poems are one of them so I'll always love your poems and I'll never forget you.
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 Like I said before in your thread, I'll never forget you either and I'll always love your poems.
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 Thanks, Still love your poems! ....I think I'll always love your poems, oh well.:D
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 I said I was sorry Why won't you believe me It makes no sense I didn't even do a thing But that might be it I didn't do anything And you wanted me too I'm sorry if I was wrong I didn't know You should have told me That you weren't alright
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 Ohhh, I love it, sounds like it has something to do with friends or something like that. Well, I still like it! Goveremet is down the street from me, something's going down....
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 Keep an close eye on them and make sure nobody around where you live is a spy for Iraq. Or from Iraq. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People gather round I've got soemthing to say I want to tell to you about me How I come in the night Trying to gather all I can Bringing them with me To tell them two word they coulnd't imagine I'd say on a night like this And those words are HAPPY HALLOWEEN ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I just did this one because I was running out of ideas.
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Posted June 18, 2003 Hehee...Funny tiwst on the end. I like it, that one's good for halloween...hehee funny!
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