Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 dayday you haven't written that one before. So I think...Anyways welcome Yami*Maho Keno and feel free to put anything you want. Not really like we're going to stop people always fun to have more people to talk to here. I like the poem dayday, the word fallow some how reminds me of loyalties (sp), and friend ship. ~~~~~ opps...I put it in the wrong place, it was ment to be for loyalties Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 You can't spell friendship?^^; Anyway welcome Yami*Maho Keno. Always good to have someone else to talk to just like Ruby said. I wasn't really in any moods when I wrote this. I just felt like writing one. So it might not be that good. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wild and free like the wind that blows It passes through your heart with ease Going over the hills and mountains Through the valleys and plains It has strength and power to do what it wants A point with no end as one would say Longer than life cause it never ends Shorter than air which it carries along There's nothing like a gentle breeze Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Thanks guys for being so nice! I liked that previous one too, Ruby and it does remind you of loyalty & friendship. dayday, that one is very nice too, I like the wind, it's calming. Oh & call me, only one of those 3 words in my name, so you don't have to type out the whole thing, which ever you like best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 ^^; I can spell friendship.... Anyways for a poem that you made from a top your head it was good. Remeber I have to think before I put anything down, sooo really good. The gentle brezze blows through the wind pass every thing is true, it never stops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Actually I wrote that one I wrote in school while everyone else was studying for a test. So you couldn't spell loyalty. That edit thing is up at the bottom of your post. And I'll just call you Yami, it's mcuh faster. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Pain and suffering is all so clear It burns a hole deep in your heart Nothing matters through this time Life is ending slowly You will pay the price But with your power Wealth doesn't matter Especially without strength Listen with your touch And you shall understand ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was thinking about Pocahontas when I wrote the last two lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Some how that brings up a image in my mind again. But this time of something from a book, that I've been working on for two years. ^^; And the spelling thing, my over all grade was C+ so I can't spell very well... Anways what ever you were thinking about when writting the last two lines, it made a great last two lines to the poem for finishing it up. Great poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I like the first two lines beacaus they're true and that's really all they do and the rest just falls right in. Actually, just call me Keno (Kee'-no). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I went back and looked over it again. In the end wealth won't matter, it can't save you. Only power may help you, and life dose end slowly. I thought Pocahontas said listen with your heart...^^;; or I maybe wrong I haven't seen it for a long while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Okay the, Keno. Ruby how can you be bad at spelling? It's simple as learning someones name. If you see it once or twice it'll be burned into your mind so you can't forget it. I think I put up this next one before but I'm really bad with memory. She did say heart but I didn't want to copy it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ When the tears flow All the pain disapppears Life starts to lose all meaning Nothing happens for the time It seems to stop and quake You never thought it could end this way The suffering just keeps coming Nohting can stop from this point Just think of it all Life slowly drains from you And nothing will ever stop See through the pain And let the tears flow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Any word with more then 6 letters, I forget. ^^;; So yeah! Most people's names I know of only have 5 or 4 letters. I don't think you put that one up before, unless I'm bad a remembering things like this too. Anyways I like it, the flow of tears, and life losseing meaning. Lot's of people feel that way, and the last part...it's great! To see through the pain and let tears flow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Actually I drew a real funky picture of a peson with a carrot/cabbage head. The poem kind of went to that. He had cuts and his clothes were ripped all over. I put tears coming from his eyes and wrote, 'See through the pain and let the tears flow' beside it. He even had little drip of blood coming from his mouth. Blood was running into his eyes and everything. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm stronger than you can imagine Mt strength is more than you can bear I myself sometimes have trouble with it You can't hold me down much longer I'm my own person from now on Lonliness is no longre killing me I'm free to do as I please I've unleashed power I never knew I had I'm stronger now than you can imagine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 o_O That had to be a real funky picture. And the poem...Cool! Being stronger then before. It'd be like you went away on a journey from some place and came back to prove your worth. Being a stronger soul and stronger will to be free. Very Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Well he had to look painful. I showed it to people and one person said it looked like me. ^^ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Why do you do this Alwasy standing in my way Never letting me reach the top Always one step ahead to stpo me You stand there with a smirk on your face Telling me to turn and go back I look at you and wait Waiting patiently without moving Stiller than a tree higher than the clouds Quieter than the wind when you stopped it howls But you stand there still telling me to return I answer in a mindly voice ne You come at me to try to knock me back I stand and wait for it When you come I swiftly turn to a side I'm now over top of you Pulling away and turning straight My path is now clear with no one there I walk slowly to the door and it opens You scream out after me but it's too late I reached the top finally to my goal You never had a chance to stop me and I know You're too weak and I'm too strong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 It's like a chin to the one before it. That's just really cool. This is my last post for now, but anyways. Having some one stand in your way because they think they're stronger. I love it, to over come what has held you down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 ??chin?? The first one I wrote while I wasn't in any moods and the second was when my teacher kept dissing me beacuse I wrote in class. She always says I don't have good work and that it takes up too much of my time. :P :P :P :P 8P 8P 8P ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Always a path there Behind the trees Centered in the road Down beside the river Ever to be known Forever to be forgotten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Opps...sorry, my brain has gone to mush this summer. *chain* I can't think too clearly now. I'll reading things on wolfs and birds to build up my brain power again. Poem don't take up too much time to write, to me, I'm glade I don't have your teacher. And the poem, was great. There's always a path unseen, people don't mostly ever go that path. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Everybody wishes they didn't have her. She's been teaching for 21 years at the same school. She even taught our parents. I'm out of ideas right now os here's another song. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sick and tired of my brother's killing each other Sick and tired of daddys leaving babies with their mother's To every man that wants to lay around and play around Listen partner you should be man enough to stay around Sick and tired of the church talkin religion But yet we talk about each other make a decision No more racism to face-ism No pollution no solution a revolution Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Who sings that song, is it the same person as before? Anyways I kinda like, the thought that the fathers want to mess around is kinda true lots of times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 It's the same person again. The song is 'Revolution'. Perfect to listen when you're in a bad mood. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The tears I cry stream down my face It burns like crimson fire Isn't it obvious Does the whole world know I break through the flames with all my might I scream out in pain because I understand I understand the world and the people in it Their sorrows and pains deep inside them Everyone has them but much don't realize They may not want to tell and they don't I don't care though I just stand there listening to their thoughts About life love death Even though the flames hurt me I can still see and hear them all Don't ever say that I don't listen I do more than you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Wow, cool! Having the point that you listen, but they don't. Yet they think they do, and seeing through the tears. A crimson fire that is one with tears. It's great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I cry everyday and no one can see it Water coming from my eyes not tears I'm the only one who can see it Everyone else thinks my face is clear I walk just crying as I go The litte smile I give is sadness It stands for sadness because I am sad all day long The happiness I give only covers up What I really feel Torn away from the things I love I love beautiful things But someone always comes And takes it away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 There like invisable tears, always crying but can never be seen. Walikng as you go with a fake smile to cover up the pain that's felt. I like it. ^^ And I'll post a story soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 Why can't they leave me alone I don't want to be bothered anymore Everyone is always standing over top of me Watching to see what I'm doing My ideas are small but better than theirs I'm never alone There's always someone there Just because I wait longer than you Doesn't mean I put it off Leave me alone to my thoughts They are trying to get out and away from me But they can never be set free Because you're always there Making sure they can't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I like it. ^^ Them not leaveing you alone when trying to think. Or when you feel like you need to be alone. And trying to get your ideas out but they're crowding them in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Share Posted July 2, 2003 I think I sometimes feel that way, we all do sometimes I guess. I like that one also! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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