Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 You 2 must not have anything to do if you read my stuff. Oh yeah Keno, did you really read all my poems? That's 17 pages of work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As I was walking home I realized I was alone It felt so wrong to me I didn't think it could happen The things around were bare It was so quiet And yet so still I don't belive it would pass Everything seemed to be watching me Without a word of sound They all moved around me Closing in for the breathes
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Actually today I'm free from getting into fights and I'm doing 6 things at once on the computer. The OB, working on a pic, my site, editing two different storys and graphic design. Just because I can spell well dosen't mean I can't read have a 11.9 level of reading! Anyways about the poem. I love it! Alone yet every thing is a live and closing in. All with no thoughts and yet moving of it's own free will. And the thing about not beliving it would all come to pass part.
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Yes, I like that one too! The feeling of being alone... Well, I haven't read all of them yet; I'm reading some everyday until I've read them all. I'd love to read them all in one day but, I don't have the time so, it's just a few at a time.
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Well my reading levels 9 or 10 something. But that's only because I don't read a lot. Only the things that interest me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I saw a picture It ran through my mind All I really saw Was something I couldn't find The image of a lost child Maybe a girl or boy As they ran through a field Playing with a toy It hurt me to see Them all alone So I went over to them And took them home
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Seeing a child playing all alone in a field...kinda reminds me of .Hack//sign. Something you couldn't find, being lost, in a place so big. I like it, ^^ it sounds as if there's a memeory behind it.
Whiteblaze Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Again, the feeling of being alone...nice! What was your inspiration for the previous two? (your reading level doesn't have much at all to do with how fast you can read, if that's what you're sort of talking about, it's more like your understanding of what you're reading and also a little vocabulary...stuff like that. You're right Ruby, it does sort of remind you of .hack//SIGN! ~~ Yes, that's more of what it is Ruby! That's a nice understanding of it!
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Your reading level often tells the out come of your speed, vocb, understanding, and accuracy. Therefore you'd be able to do more then some one can ususally do, because it's like your spliting different parts of your brain to different task. The more task you can do that need more higher level thinking the higher you think therefore the smarter you get. So basically multi-tasking, with different class of thinking.
Guest dayday Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Uhh Ruby, I didn't understand a single word of that. And Keno, the last 2 I didn't have an inspiration. They were off the top of my head. That's the way most of them are. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People pass by People pass by People pass by People pass by Having no thoughts Having no thoughts Having no thoughts Having no thoughts Of how you are Of how you are Of how you are Of how you are People pass by Having no thoughts Of how you are
Epsilon Posted July 2, 2003 Posted July 2, 2003 Yeah, I get can get confusing alot of times. ^^; People loose track of what I say. The poem is good, thinking about other people having no thoughts of how you feel when they pass you by. It's great!
Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Posted July 3, 2003 All I know if you pass the tests then your level gets raised. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Speak to my heart Tell me the things of truth Tell me the things of hope Tell me the things of love Tell me the things of peace Speak to my heart And tell me all the things All the things of life
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Posted July 3, 2003 Telling all the things, that'd be nice if some one had the answers to life. Longing to know about the world and the things in it. It's great. ^^ Speak to the heart, tell all the things.
Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Posted July 3, 2003 I was listening to the song 'Speak to my Heart'. I put the first line and the rest just came. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Past of my shadows Past of the lies Past of my dreams Please just go Life of my shadows Life of my lies Life of my dreams Come take control
Epsilon Posted July 3, 2003 Posted July 3, 2003 The past of the shadows, lies, and dreams, and the life of them all round out into one. Their past is their life and their life is their past. Tells the truth of their life. ^^ I like it.
Guest dayday Posted July 3, 2003 Posted July 3, 2003 I see a child They seem to be happy But when I was like that I wasn't I was never like that I was never happy Everyone watched me closely Trying to figure out why I tell them it's just me The way I always was
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 Very good, it sounds like an out cast. Hee...an out cast, alone and dritfing around. ^^ I like it indeed, I can relate! The child always being alone, then once they grew up they see a child the oppiste then they where.
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 An outcast? I can sort of relate to that too I guess. When I was really small I used to fit in real good and talk to anybody. Then when my *cough* body changed *cough* I started to ease away. I never talked to anybody. Now I'm just an outcast who only talks to people she likes and when they talk to her. Sorry about the coughing. I guess I have a cold or something. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Home is at the end At the end of the trail I'll soon be there I have it in my sights But somehow no matter how far I go I can never seem to reach it It looks only a few steps away I walk all day But yet I still don't reach home Maybe I'm not meant to Maybe there's somewhere else I need to go there first But where is this place This place I must go first Then I'll finally be able To reach my home
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 ^^;;; *under stands cough, same here* Only I was an out cast since I was um.....gotta think here....I think 5? Cant remember, any ways back to the poem. I like it, never reaching where your ment to be. Just because you have some where else to be before you reach the end. Going far enough till you reach the end. I like. ^^
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 Yeah, but I'm mad that happened to me. You're older than me and I changed years ago. ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What do you want Why won't you leave me alone It's the same anyway I'm alone when I'm surrounded I'm alone when I'm by myself There's never anyone with me There... In that place All by myself With no one there
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 Always being alone, I would like that but most people wouldn't. By the way aren't you 12 years old, because if you are your only a few months younger then I am. Because I was born in april, 1991. So yeah....Anyways the poems good, forever being alone. Even in a large group, or just really being alone.
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 Read my profile. My birthday's not until August so I'm still 11. It bites, most people do think I'm 12 though. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Looking around the corner I see the dark past Look upon the sky I see the scornful days It's all the same None of it's different I was just wondering Why isn't there a place For my future
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 So then your turning 12 this year, still the same. By Aug. 21 You'll be the same age because I turned 12 this year. Oh, well....really dosen't matter. So about the poem...that last line is a goood question. If there's a place for your past, and prestent why isn't there a place for the future. I like! ^^ Having to wonder because no has the answer. No one really knows yet they say the do, and never tell.
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 I want to pick my own future but everyone keeps telling me to write. I don't even write as much as I used to. Except poems since I'm trying to keep up with this. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Frozen in my mind In that place I regret Only to cry in agony Because I can't move I'm frozen in that spot The one I can't see But not to move from it I need to be freed I'm stuck here Frozen in this same spot In the corners of my mind
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 I'm already doing what people want me to do so they'll get off my back. O_o I already have few jobs and I'm not even 16 yet! Being forzen in one place in time, it's like time dosen't want you to ever forget that place. Always being in one little place in your mind, that'd b wouldn't be really fun.
Guest dayday Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 I know it wouldn't be fun. I do some jobs for people sometimes like my grandma wants to know how to use a computer but she hasn't even paid me for teaching her spelling. Other people I work for pay me others I don't do it beacuse they won't pay. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Engulfed in the sea of thought About to drown myself Pulled me out deep Waves of focus rushing over me Taking me under the water I'm struggling to breathe Trying to get back Take away my thoughts I want to be free The sea is too much for me
Epsilon Posted July 4, 2003 Posted July 4, 2003 That kinda reminds me of what some people have in there location place: "I'm lost in the sea ready to drown" I've seen a few people with that, and some how this reminds me of it. Anyways...I like the poem, the sea being too uch to handle. It's fun to read because it may create an image in your mind.
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