Writing A poem about a - - holes.

[Dragonballzman]

I think I screwed up the last two verse...But anyway. A poem done out of pure boredom.


[QUOTE]It pains my heart
So much to see,
All of the assholes
Surrounding me.

I can't get away,
The fighing won't stop,
Their heated debates
Go round the clock.

I just can't believe
What we live in today,
Never again will a smile
brighten up my day.

I used to think like this,
That assholes were bad,
But then I realised;
I'm following the fad.

I thought to myself
That all was not right,
But it was never different;
...I just wasted a night.[/QUOTE]

As you can tell, I'm obviously no professional poet, so comments and critiscism are extremely welcomed, especially the latter.

[Spikey]

Uhh.. that was kind of funny. Then again sad. Very nice job. Now let's see a poem from you that doesn't ryme. :)

[Raiha]

[color=royalblue]He can't, he's inept. *giggles and ducks the heavy flying objects* I am proud to have had a part in this beautiful piece of explicit poetry....[/color]

[wild thang]

uh... ok... that was different, but good job man. but i feel insulted.

[Boo]

=o very nice.
Didnt know the spwite master with the OMG BRILLANTUH banner could write poems so I was scared man! never gimme such a shock again man! Thats not groovy dude!
Ehm yah ehm.... cough
It was almost as brilliant as your banner lol

[FartMaster745]

lol, that was pretty funny. I can relate to your poem but instead of a night, its every night :)