Lady Macaiodh Posted October 8, 2001 Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B]You guys need to send your poem to publisher. Really, you can make money. [/B][/QUOTE] i actually have poems published in 4 different anthologies, including "poets of the millenia" (i'm particularly proud of that one).
piccolo Posted October 8, 2001 Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Lady Macaiodh [/i] [B] i actually have poems published in 4 different anthologies, including "poets of the millenia" (i'm particularly proud of that one). [/B][/QUOTE] I'm happy for you. :D
Jamvis Posted October 8, 2001 Author Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by piccolo [/i] [B] I'm happy for you. :D [/B][/QUOTE]hey guess what? im gonna get my poetry to my L.A. teacher and he knows a few publishers so he will see if theyre good enough to get published!
Guest Posted October 8, 2001 Posted October 8, 2001 Hey I got another one. I just came up with this. "Hidden Feelings" I didn't know untill just now that I felt this way about you. I knew you were special to me but I didn't know you were that special. You have unearthed my hidden feelings that were buried deep inside of me. Well?????¿¿¿
Jamvis Posted October 8, 2001 Author Posted October 8, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SSJ2 Gohu [/i] [B]Hey I got another one. I just came up with this. "Hidden Feelings" I didn't know untill just now that I felt this way about you. I knew you were special to me but I didn't know you were that special. You have unearthed my hidden feelings that were buried deep inside of me. Well?????¿¿¿ [/B][/QUOTE]thats kool but now you must die! i know where that origionated... trust me on this one... SHES MINE!
Phantasy Freak Posted October 9, 2001 Posted October 9, 2001 I was published you know...and i finally got the book my poem was published in!!!*jumps up and down*I am soo happy!!!
Guest Posted October 9, 2001 Posted October 9, 2001 Wow! What was the poem? Can you post it? It would be nice to see.
Phantasy Freak Posted October 9, 2001 Posted October 9, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SSJ2 Gohu [/i] [B]Wow! What was the poem? Can you post it? It would be nice to see. [/B][/QUOTE] It is already posted...Its called "You'll never know how I feel"
DeathKnight Posted October 9, 2001 Posted October 9, 2001 congratz again, thats a very good achievement (sp o.o)
piccolo Posted October 9, 2001 Posted October 9, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Phantasy Freak [/i] [B]I was published you know...and i finally got the book my poem was published in!!!*jumps up and down*I am soo happy!!! [/B][/QUOTE] Congratulation. Keep up the good work.
DeathKnight Posted October 10, 2001 Posted October 10, 2001 People Die, People Cry, People Sigh, People lie. People Live, People Give, People Take, People Are Fake, We are People, All the same, some have fame, others are lame, but we are people. people divided, people under provided, starving, dieing, slowly.... as we sit in our house quiet as a mouse, thinking why o why does god let the children cry and the people die... Live in constant fear, they are near, coming slowly, nearer and nearer, they come... with their guns... the children cry at night, at the bright lights, in the sky... then they are silenced as the light comes down, they frown, as it comes, and they die... why god... why The tears of god, are the rain. as he sees his children crying, the people he loves dieing. the things he made, and as they fade away... the thunder is his voice... as he makes the choice to remain unseen... till the time is right, when we shall see the light...
DeathKnight Posted October 10, 2001 Posted October 10, 2001 I am finally here, the place where i started, i am about to die, as the others cry... i begin to think about my past... when i got married, thinking of when i get buried... my life was short... i lived it to the full... most of it was just bull... the ones i loved are near me... i have fear... for it is near... i am going... may god rest my soul... as i die i remember, that day in september... when i met my wife... and the rest of my joyous life.... it is time... say good bye... and i die while they cry, i die... happy...
Guest Guitar Girl Posted October 11, 2001 Posted October 11, 2001 [color=purple] Hey! That was a really kewl poem! I write poems myself, but I'm not as good as you! :( Anyways, keep up the good work. :) Buh-bye :flaming: -Louisa [/color]
Phantasy Freak Posted October 11, 2001 Posted October 11, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Guitar Girl [/i] [B][color=purple] Hey! That was a really kewl poem! I write poems myself, but I'm not as good as you! :( Anyways, keep up the good work. :) Buh-bye :flaming: -Louisa [/color] [/B][/QUOTE] Why don't you post some of your poems?It would be nice to see some.:)
Jamvis Posted October 11, 2001 Author Posted October 11, 2001 yeah it would be nice ;) hey and um gohu... i guess i was wrong... :p
Soccer 4 Life Posted October 11, 2001 Posted October 11, 2001 [COLOR=darkblue]All you poets are really talented, "Talented people are capable of achieving great things".[/COLOR] :smirk: Peace:smirk:
Kittie Posted October 11, 2001 Posted October 11, 2001 Surely it can't be Love... I think I Love you though i'm not sure How do you feel about me? You're not sure But I know I like you With all my heart And sometimes I feel Like we shouldn't be apart You bring sunshine in my life each time I see you And the Goddess knows I yearn to be near you Do you feel the same? I hope you do Probably not but still...I like you So what is this I'm feeling? The feelings very strong You know I like you But surely it can't be Love... i don't think i posted this one before... :sleep:
Jamvis Posted October 11, 2001 Author Posted October 11, 2001 Beautiful! hey y cant you be IMed or E-mailed?
Guest Posted October 12, 2001 Posted October 12, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i] [B]yeah it would be nice ;) hey and um gohu... i guess i was wrong... :p [/B][/QUOTE] Wrong about what? Ohh the SHE's MINE!!!!!! thing? lol:p :p
Jamvis Posted October 12, 2001 Author Posted October 12, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SSJ2 Gohu [/i] [B] Wrong about what? Ohh the SHE's MINE!!!!!! thing? lol:p :p [/B][/QUOTE] [FONT=lucidia handwriting]Darn you... if it wasnt for the ages i bet shed pick me over you... :P and you know im probably right![/FONT]
Guest Posted October 13, 2001 Posted October 13, 2001 "I will never give up hope" I will never give up hope, in this time of depression. I will never give up hope, that you feel for me as I do for you. I will never give up hope, that you are my one and only. I will never give up hope, so let it be known that, I love you, Stephanie! :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: Honestly I do!
Jamvis Posted October 13, 2001 Author Posted October 13, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SSJ2 Gohu [/i] [B]"I will never give up hope" I will never give up hope, in this time of depression. I will never give up hope, that you feel for me as I do for you. I will never give up hope, that you are my one and only. I will never give up hope, so let it be known that, I love you, Stephanie! :love: :love: :love: :love: :love: Honestly I do! [/B][/QUOTE]yeah that goes double for me... now all thats left is for you to love yourself... and one more for the road! :love: hehehe
RicoTranzrig Posted October 13, 2001 Posted October 13, 2001 [COLOR=darkblue]Lost again faith stripped yet, I believe... all the things that you've told me Yet never showed me... There's a gap in all of us and It's a gap that only one can fill. The restless soul is searching, For that one person... Who will make them whole. [/COLOR]
Kittie Posted October 13, 2001 Posted October 13, 2001 this poem didn't treally have a title...so i did the Emily Dickinson thing! :D Before you?I never knew what was Love was Before you? my life was blue You?ve showed me how it feels To have a real friend You?ve told me how it sounds To hear true Love When you say my name My spirit does soar To hear I Love you? Who could ask for anything more? What made me happy before Does nothing for me now Without you near?All I do is frown To feel your soft embrace Always makes me feel warm Nothing in the world can touch me When safely in your arms Your kiss?that you do so gentle Is the sweetest?I?ll always remember Before you there was nothing After you there will be no one Because no one has been as sweet As you?ve been to me When I?m with you I have everything *so...mon amis what did you think?!:love:
Guest Pikeon Posted October 13, 2001 Posted October 13, 2001 Every day is a good day, for its a time a time, for rhyme, for my rhymes make you sooth, move I give you groove, Like a human flying in the air An angel upon the cloud, Happy htoughts appear, dont that make u proud? up and down around and around wanna take ride to town? we can stop by the smackdon mall, kickn czns big and tall, There is a life we cannot choose WE shall win or we shall loose. Do not walk in front of me for I may not follow. Do not walk behind for a may no lead. Wak beside me and I knwo u are my friendly neighbor. P.S. Pm me So i can freestyle rap to ya!
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