Writing poetry corner

[Guest Twisted Face]

"rotting epitome"

how...could you
why...did you
sadly...i dont care
because i cant feel anymore

it funny how you think ill just forgive and forget
the pain that you sent me through should make you feel regret
but you just brush it off like nothing ever happened
only it did and you will always remember

im turning into a rotting corps
my soul is doing spirals without remorse
and i feel like im losing my mind
its not easy putting up with the cry for what i had

and it makes me feel like it was my fault
but i wont cry for you,just think of what has happened
and some day in the fog youll be able to finnaly see through
to the standin love that you lost,you once knew

im a rotting corps
like a rose turning black
a mindless walking being
like a razor in my back
thats how it feels in my head of twisting thoughts
youll wish that you could take it back
when you too have lost your cause

someday youll think that it was all a big mistake
then youll realize that you ****ed up and there is no escape
youll know it,that it was all your fault
youll know it,that you cant change past
youll know that you lost me
and youll love me,but i wont love back

[Guest Pikeon]

Storming though my party like an hell bentd eagle. Yeah and im hangn out trickn in hte back of a el canino Once a kid was a skid and no one new me by name. Trashed my own house party cuz nobody came. Well i know im not the one u thought u back in high school never go and never show and never react to. Im ditchin every grade. Who told us to behave? Im sick of all this hearing bout ur age. Skip the chorus.
Because you ont notice it all we laught when old people fall what we do is with respect with a conscince so small. Hevay metal and punk were things that we raise. Me and preist were the guys that we praise. Cuz we like having fun in a minor conception, skip some one part.
Its none of ur concern I gues ILl never learn Im sick of being told when its my turn

[Guest]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Jamvis [/i]
[B]yeah it would be nice ;) hey and um gohu... i guess i was wrong... :p [/B][/QUOTE]

Hey I guess we were both wrong:( :( :(

[Pave-Low]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Kittie [/i]
[B]Surely it can't be Love...

I think I Love you
though i'm not sure
How do you feel about me?
You're not sure
But I know I like you
With all my heart
And sometimes I feel
Like we shouldn't be apart
You bring sunshine in my life
each time I see you
And the Goddess knows
I yearn to be near you
Do you feel the same?
I hope you do
Probably not
but still...I like you

So what is this I'm feeling?
The feelings very strong
You know I like you
But surely it can't be Love...


i don't think i posted this one before...
:sleep: [/B][/QUOTE]

Wow, That is great. Everyone here is very talented. Maybe I will post something later.

[Pave-Low]

Well this is really my only good poem and it may not be that good. Just tell me what you think.

Each day at school on the way to class,
We smile at each other every time we pass.
You bring me joy, comfort, meaning, and life,
The thought of you gone is like a wound from a knife.
Even on my bad days you where right there with me,
Even when I thought I was ugly, there you would be.
We are with each other all day then go home,
To talk to each other all night on the phone.
I wish you good night and then go to sleep,
Then I dream about you as I count all the sheep
My undying love for you is never ending,
My love to you I will forever keep sending.
Cheat or beat I will never do to you ever,
Together we will be forever and ever.


Its nothing special but it is from the heart.

[Jamvis]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Pave-Low [/i]
[B]Well this is really my only good poem and it may not be that good. Just tell me what you think.

Each day at school on the way to class,
We smile at each other every time we pass.
You bring me joy, comfort, meaning, and life,
The thought of you gone is like a wound from a knife.
Even on my bad days you where right there with me,
Even when I thought I was ugly, there you would be.
We are with each other all day then go home,
To talk to each other all night on the phone.
I wish you good night and then go to sleep,
Then I dream about you as I count all the sheep
My undying love for you is never ending,
My love to you I will forever keep sending.
Cheat or beat I will never do to you ever,
Together we will be forever and ever.


Its nothing special but it is from the heart. [/B][/QUOTE]thats sweet! *nudges gohu* hehehehe this is funny... it reminds me of... *truck roars by* does it remind you of *anothe truck honks twice*
GOHU: yeah... man she on our minds alot... eh...
JAM: but when she decides... no matter what... shell be mine... :devil:
-§

[Guest]

Yo Jam *honk* is not going to brake up with *honk* :( So me and you got no chance with *honk as long as she is going out with *honk* but yes it does remind me of *honk*.

[Guest Pikeon]

Beep Beep whatcha momma ordered tonite
we gon take it to da house and rok it all night,
Dont take my stuff the wronga way,
I just do wat I do on any given day,
I heard Billy BOb,
Aint be got no job,
Get O.J. Simpson
Theres gonna be a mob.
Im at yo door,
Ready to mop yo flo.
Just get some mr. clean Cuz i dirty the show,
Come into my house and take a seat.
If ya wanna flo then I'll drop da beat,
Move ya feat , If ya wanna flo4 life then just repeat.
I flo like Big PUn Im makn the mon.
ANd IF ya Wann holla to da BOlla, THEN YA KNOW AS PIKEON (p.s. this all was freestyle in like 2 minutes).

[Pave-Low]

Wow, that reminded me of one of our great poets we have today........Afroman!!!!!

Wasnt gonna run from the cops, but i was high,
I was just gonna pull right over and stop, but I was high,
Now im a paraplegic(sp?) and I know why!!!!

Haha, anyway. This is pretty cool. I like reading everyones poetry.

[Phantasy Freak]

Poetry.com wants to publish me in [b][u]The Best Poems and Poets of 2001[/b][/u],but i need to enter another poem and dunno which one....

[Guest]

Really? That's cool. ummmm...... I'll go look at your poems and give me suggestion.;) ;) :D :D

[Guest]

I like this one:

Ode to Silence
Silence comes and silence goes
as though the darkness in the meadows...
Through out the land...
Silence stands
Silence comes as it wants
and leaves as it pleases...

That's my fave. :love: :love: :love: :whoops: :whoops:

[Axel--Ignition]

i have a really stupid one i wrote in 3rd grade.

there once was a duck
that though he was worth a buck
so he went and cashed himself in
but soon he found out
he was worthless no doubt
and he let everyone know with a shout

he wandered aimlessly in despair
he had nowhere to go but he did not care
he came to a fork in the road
where he met a toad
that dude was sorta cheesy
but the duck was glad he found a friend this easy

here they are a truly worthless pair
they didnt know where they were going but they did not care

[Axel--Ignition]

oh i forgot its called [B]waky wildlife[/B]

[Adam]

[/QUOTE]Poetry.com wants to publish me in The Best Poems and Poets of 2001,but i need to enter another poem and dunno which one.... [QUOTE]

Don't fall for that scam bro:), it was publicized that they'll take anyone who pays them... I almost fell for it too:).

-Ad

[Phantasy Freak]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Adam [/i]
[B][/QUOTE]Poetry.com wants to publish me in The Best Poems and Poets of 2001,but i need to enter another poem and dunno which one.... [QUOTE]

Don't fall for that scam bro:), it was publicized that they'll take anyone who pays them... I almost fell for it too:).

-Ad [/B][/QUOTE]

I am a chick not a bro....:p

[SSJ5 Vegeta]

FEAR

The blood that?s already spilt
Is just a testament of the blood that?s gonna? be shed
It?s gonna? be catastrophic and there ain?t no stopping it
When I break through your heart like a 10 ton freight train
And knock you dead in you tracks like a hollowpoint bullet right through your brain
I can paralyze a man in just one instant
I can destroy a whole governmental system
I can start an apocalyptic war
I can leave you screaming for more
I can be the end of your life, or I can save it
I can destroy bonds, even one?s that are close knit
Everyone?s afraid of something or another
Anyone who says different is just a liar
I?m the one thing you can never escape
I follow you to your grave like a dark cape
I?m a four letter word and I rhyme with dear
What I am I?
I am FEAR

[mornigndew]

[COLOR=blue]I'm not a poet. I'll give it a try.

Moonlight above the sky
Here we are,
Side by side
Next to each other
Eyes to eyes[/COLOR]

[Guest]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by mornigndew [/i]
[B][COLOR=blue]I'm not a poet. I'll give it a try.

Moonlight above the sky
Here we are,
Side by side
Next to each other
Eyes to eyes[/COLOR] [/B][/QUOTE]

That's really good. Hear's a suggestion....it would be better if it was lil. longer. But all in all it's better than any of mine, that's for sure.:drunk:

[Guest]

here's a poem/story from Outlawstar_17

One bright day in the middle of the night, two dead boys got up to fight. Back to back they faced eachother, drew their swords and shot eachother. A deaf Policeman heard the noise and came to shoot the two dead boys. If you don't belive this lie is true just ask the blind man, he saw it too!


I thought it was funny.:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :p :p :p

[mornigndew]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by SSJ2 Gohu [/i]
[B]here's a poem/story from Outlawstar_17

One bright day in the middle of the night, two dead boys got up to fight. Back to back they faced eachother, drew their swords and shot eachother. A deaf Policeman heard the noise and came to shoot the two dead boys. If you don't belive this lie is true just ask the blind man, he saw it too!


I thought it was funny.:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :p :p :p [/B][/QUOTE][COLOR=blue]This is funny, and good too.[/COLOR] :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

[Kittie]

With you I?ll have
a Love that lasts forever

When the stars cease to shine
I?ll look into your sparkling eyes
And know that I have your Love

Even when the sun no longer burns
I?ll have your Love to brighten up
my life

When the moon doesn?t hang quite as
high
Your Love will be there to lift me through the sky

As I watch the world

crumble and fall

I have no fear

though the world will live again-never
We have a Love that will last forever?

*this is for...well he knows it's for him!!!:love: :love: :love: :D

[Guest Capt. Stephanos]

[COLOR=green] I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed---and gazed---but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

[/COLOR]

[Jamvis]

that was good and um... interesting

[Jamvis]

This poetry post has been down forever. I am not expecting it to be here long, I only wanted to put it into visuality so BG orTN would move it.