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I write poetry....I'm too lazy too type any out right now...

However, I believe that poetry is one of the most expressive forms of communication there is--if it's done right.

One poem that I'll always remember is something I received in a email about a year ago...some of you may have gotten it, too.

[I]Near to the door
he paused to stand
As hew took his class ring
Of her hand
And all who were watching
Did not speak
As a silent tear
Ran down his cheek
And through his mind
The memories ran
Of the moments they walked
And ran hand in hand
But now her eyes
Were so terribly cold
He would never again
Have her to hold
They watched in silence
As he bent near
And whispered the words
"I love you" in her ear.
He touched her face
And started to cry
As he put on his ring
He wanted to die
And just the wind
Began to blow
As they lowered her casket
Into the snow...

This is what happens
To man alive
When friends let friends
Drink and drive.[/I]

If you've lost someone, you know the impact it has....
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by BabyGirl [/i]
[B]

[color=deeppink]Hah! That's hilarious now that I know what it's about :laugh:[/color] [/B][/QUOTE]

[b]Hehe,..I see you understand now..the screaming part is sooooooo true,..heck all of it is...[/b]
Woah,..that poem was creepy,
Lesson of the Day:
[b][u]Don't[/u] DRINK DRIVE![/b]
I'm being serious
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good food good meat,good god lets eat

thats my first one..
this next one is sorta evil but hey its tru

mary had 2 little lambs they were fresh and frisky,
then they got foot and mouth
and now their black and crispy

im kinda bad at poetry so i just resited some ones i have heard around..i read some of the other poems.. i can see some of you are very tallented!!!:D :cool: :devil:
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It's all over now
why even try?
To take on the future,
when your life has died.
You'll have your reasons
To try and push ahead.
But you can't,
when you lay in bed.
You do nothing?
Do you feel guilt?
When you stab yourself
Not with the blade
But the hilt?
You can't push yourself
over the top.
You fear death, and stop.
It's all over now,
why even try?
When life is blurred
and play tricks with the mind?
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ooh-wee! which poem shoul i post?! i have so many! :tasty:
well here's a fresh one! :)

Sitting in the darkness
I call out your name
praying that you'll hear me...
and yet, there's no reply
All i hear are my thoughts
All i feel is my pain
I would Love to hear your touch
I would Love to feel your voice
And yet that doesn't happen
I end up alone
Maybe we'll meet again
Then my loneliness will end
And I'll be able to call you
my friend...again...
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Deep, really deep... :) Here's another one...Yeah, I said this a while back...but I really like it.


In times of peril and plight I look to you...
For a new sense of hope.
A ray of light in a gloomy dark sky
strikes down...
So I can find you
and be with you
when I need you...
I doubted you, you doubted me.
I wish I could turn back time...
but I can't.
Who knows what the future will hold.
But hold on,
hold on close to me
so I don't loose you...
In the path of life.
As bleak as it has and will be.
This is the present.
Where everything is clear,
everything is certain.

And nothing will ever change that.
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Some people don?t understand we?re all created equally
And this is like a megalomaniacal jam on my feelings
Wanna? turn yourself into a bomb and blow people up
What do I say? What do I do? What can I say?
Maybe I?ll just close my eyes and it?ll all go away
For many people they found their resting place
Under many feet of concrete, all because
Some motha****a? had something to prove
Some motha****a? just had to make a move
Because some people hold grudges
Well I don?t mind being hardcore
Made to feel insecure
Cuz? it?ll come right back at ya?
And gut you like a rusty blade
The bill they checked will be paid
And I watch innocent people cry
And I watch innocent people die
Die in this messed up place
Where it?s cool to cause terror
And panic, among masses
Well I?m ready to destroy anyone who trespasses
On my feelings and perception of this world
It?s too bad they had to die
For some self righteous cause with no point
And that day, they will know their pain
When their breath is taken from them in a long sigh
That was the day death fell from the sky
That was the day they all died
That was the day Jesus cried
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" A Prayer for a life"

i pray unto thee lord
i ask you to listen to me lord
i ask for a life
i always strive
but what for?
someone please open the door!
lord i call unto thee!
lord hear my plea!
i want a life lord!
ill trade it for the one i now lead
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[b]Please Believe Me ?[/b]

When I say, I love you,
Please believe me?
I love you more than words can say

When I say I need you,
Please believe me?
I need you with each breath I take

When I say I want you
Please believe me?
I want you with me always

When I say I miss you
Please believe me ?
I miss you so much my heart does ache

When I say you are my heart
Please believe me ?
Our hearts beat as one

When I say you are my reason for living
Please believe me ?
Without you with me there is no living

*not my usual style but...i like it!

:wigout: :love:
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I'm not shore if this belongs here but i thought that we needed some more laughs.



[U]Prayer For The Stressed[/U]


Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, and the courage
to change the things I cannot accept, and the wisdom to hide the bodies of
those people I had to kill today because they pissed me off.


And also, help me to be careful of the toes I step on today as they may be
connected to the @ss that I may have to kiss tomorrow.



Help me to always give 100% at work.....
12% on Monday
23% on Tuesday
40% on Wednsday
20% on Thursday
5% on Friday



And help me remember......
When I have a bad day and it seems that people are trying to piss me off, that
it takes 42 muscles to frown and only 4 to extend my middle finger and tell
them to bite me!


Amen.
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Guest Twisted Face
"hate"

Strong am I
Power right by
Wielded with vain
With my hate I will stain

I am evil
I am wrong
I show no mercy
In young minds I spawn

People made fun of
Scold you for color
I am the rotten pollution of people

Why must I be so
I don?t know why
I am the hatred infesting mankind

Sorrow I?ve brought
Relations I?ve ruined
Every day I am putrid undoing
The love that once filled this green grass with a shine
Now all that?s left is abominations that lie

I?ve been around the block so many times
I wonder why I bother coming back
I hate my self, and for hating I hate more
I feed myself and I cry to know why
I never chose to be this way, never wanted to make this change
And I want to evaporate, I am not good, don?t use me
Now I remember why I come back again
Because a young soul like you still has some light left
To fire the match that burns into love
And I am descending, I am bad, don?t use me
Keep your light shining so one day unwinding
The earth will be bright again
I am not good, don?t use me please?please
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if life sucks...
have fun in death!
if you want some bucks
work for it!
if the world hates you
say up yours to it and move on.
if someone makes you mad...
just talk about their dad!
if you cant fill the world with fear
scream and shout so all will hear!
if someone cusses at you...
forget what i said and kick their @$$!
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In the arms of heaven,
You and me we will be one
locked hand in hand
in the early break of the sun
Stars shining,
moon glowing
spread our wings
and fly out
feathers falling one by one.
We're mortal...with our flaws
Bounded by law, fate, hate.
Until we overcome,
the prime evils.
Our task is never done...
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Thanks :D ...eh, another couldn't hurt, I grabbed the last 2 lines from ATB...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Escape
with me
to the promised land
money and riches
people waving their hands
they want it slapped
human contact
without it
where would we be?
hapiness is a phone call,
a hand slap away
so we can get through
just for today...
"It's the loneliness
that's the killer..."
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[b]Heh, I gots a Level 7 for this poem yesterday..
I call it.. My family..

[u]My[/u] [u]Family[/u]
My family is funny,
Take my Dad for instance;
Never goes to sleep without shaving his beard,
Not that he has one.

My family is weird,
Take my Mum for instance;
Never goes to sleep without watching a film or soap,
Not that she finishes watching it.

My family is funny,
Take my little bro for instance;
Hates sleeping whenever,
Not that he?s like that in the mornings.

My family is weird,
Take my sister for instance;
Bullies older kids at school,
Not that she isn?t scared of the little ones.

My family is funny,
Take my baby sister for instance;
Likes peace and quiet,
Not that she?s ever like that.[/b]
8\/\/4h4h4!
*4h3/\/\!* 50|2|2j...1 81_4/\/\3 F1|\|4|_ :)
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Here's a poem I wrote to my baby, when we first started going out:

[COLOR=blue]It's funny how when you go away I still smell your cologne lingering in the air like incense.
Remember the thunderstorm and how the street smelled,cleansed of sin.
Speaking of sin, is it a sin to feel this way....I close my eyes and see our souls and bodies connected as if it were communion.
I hear your voice in the wind as if echoed through a cathedral.
It is shameful to say that before you I would stand..my lone saint.
If I am being blasphemous, forgive me my love.
Nor divine or demonic intervention could purge the love I have for you....
So still I walk....the wind blows...and the scent of you has filled me again[/COLOR]


[COLOR=red]NYC...Short Slam Contest Champ 1995....[/COLOR]
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this poem is called IF *yes it was based on rudyard kipling*
"IF"
If you can love all others ahen they hate you,
If you can look for a girl when none will date you,
If you can help your brother,
and always love your mother,
If you can trust yourself and know your abilitys,
If you can learn how to use all of your utilitys,
If you are beaten by a person you really hate,
yet find it in your heart to congratulate,
If you do these things,
No matter what you do your heart will sing!

THANKS!
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