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Neil: Way to go, Forte! You coulda killed Craig!
Forte: He can take care of himself!
Neil: Regularly, yes, but he's weak, and ca---
[I]*WAP!*[/I] [I]*Craig punched Neil*[/I]
Craig: I'm not weak!
Neil: You coulda fooled me!
AJ: Enough of this! We can't have fighting!
Neil: RRRRR...You're right...Now where? Anyone have any ideas?
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Forte: I have 2 ideas... Lets Leave! Or BLOW IT UP AND RUN AWAY!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA :demon: :demon: :demon: EVIL...

Craig: Boy are you on crack?

Forte: Nah i am EviL
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Forte: Looks like i burnt it to a crisp....

Craig: Yea and its still hot...

Forte: I can fix that Xtreme Cold!!!

[i] Forte blows and snow and ice comes out of this mouth and he makes the place cool down [/i]

Forte: There

Neil: Much better....
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Neil:No we cANT WAIT, MORE ARMY FRCES ARE COMING AND THEY ARE MUCH STRONGER THEN US BY FAR AND YOU KNOW THAT!

Craig: hes right! lets go.

they run down a long corridor hall.

Forte: Hey look! I see light!

Craig:Yes that must be the exit, we made it guys------

Then out of no where a big and strong warrior 3 times as big as them steps in front of them, it punches neil in the face and he hits the floor.

Neil: Urhhhhhh----

Then they see the warriors face mumble in pain, they here a crumble as if bones are breaking, then they see a hand go right through the guards back out of his chest, the mystery man pulls his hand out and the gaurd drops down life less.

Kaiyu: Miss me?

Craig: Kaiyu!! I htought they killed you long ago?!

Kaiyu: hah! me? dead? I wouldnt think of it!

Kaiyu gives neil a friendly punch.

Kaiyu: Glad to see your ok man.

Neil:awww man you got that guys blood all over my shirt!

all::laugh:

Kaiyu: alright lets get out of this hell hole!

Theya ll head for the exit and make there way out side where they see an ship with 2 guards standing by it, and they can see another gaurd and a pilot inside the cockpit!

Craig: well? what are we waiting for? lets high jack the mother f`'cker!
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Neil: Wait a sec!
Kaiyu: What?!
Neil: That warrior! We have to save him!
Forte: We can't risk it!
Neil: That man saved my life! If it wan't for him, I would be dead!
Craig: What do you suggest we do?!
Neil: Follow me!
[i]Neil blast off, and the others follow...*[/i]
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siren fingers the scarred skin under her left cheek bone... loud sirens and claxons went off signaling another break...

siren: not again!!! oh well i'm getting out for good..

siren goes to the bars of her prison and rippes them out of the ground... she sees a group of prisnors racing past and dicides to join them

siren: where in hell are you going??

neil: to save another life


siren: well... i guess i'm along for the ride...
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[SIZE=1]*Sigh* What have you people done!?!?!?! Pay attention! These guards are only using light weapons, BUT THEY ARE ARMED WITH HEAVIER ONES!!!! Just keep in mind that they are doing the butt kicking, not you. Your turn will come later, and you'll know when it does.. if not then ill tell you...
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[i]The warriors flew over the compound only to come to a huge fleet of gaurds with something in the middle... they stop..[/i]

Kaiyu: "What is that???"

Craig: "You don't recognize it?!"

Siren: "Oh no..."

[i]The warriors freeze in horror as in the middle of a gaping high amounts of energy concentrate into a single area...[/i]

Neil: "Get out of here!!!"

[i]The warriors turn and make a break for their cells, but it's too late, the huge blast of energy, too intense for any android or anything to absorb, blasts out of the hole into the sky completely filling the air and smashing into the warriors charring and tearing apart their skin... the blasts subsides, and the warriors fall lifeless to the ground.....[/i]

Guard: "Peh, such weaklings... and that was on the lowest level."

Platoon Leader: "Too true... alright! Get these fools to the infirmary and keep them there."

[i]A number of guards plus extras go take the bodies to heal them over and control their energy level so they dont get stronger from healing...[/i]

[b][i]Meanwhile...[/i][/b]

[i]The rebel sits in the room as the seconds narrow down on the clock...[/i]

"Fools... if they only knew who they were dealing with..."

[i]The rebel is a tall blue-ish colored figure with semi-long white hair in a mohawk...the clock counts down to 30 seconds...[/i]

"*whistles*"...

.......

[i]10... 9...8...7...6...5..4...3...2..1... from the outside, the room expands slightly then explodes with a great force leaving nothing but rubble and miles worth of a crater..... from the dust, the rebel walks out unharmed...[/i]

"I think it's time to go incognito.."

[i]The rebel suddenly disappears and walks unable to be seen..[/i]
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Ok, a few extra notes. I know it's kind of a rough start, but hopefully as you people get the idea it'll go a bit smoother. Secondly, I'm keeping track of your power levels so just keep that in mind. If you're a Saiya-jin (or part Saiya-jin) I will inform you when you have the POTENTIAL to become a super saiya-jin. Thirdly, remember that unless the post someone makes involves you, it doesnt involve you. So this whole thing with the explosion and the rebel that just happened. Your characters dont actaully know it happened. Just because you read it, doesnt mean you know it. Finally, FYI, the rebel is not my character, he's just a side charcter I'm using... his role will develope as time goes on... Ok? Good. Post on![/SIZE]
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Forte: Ugh how did we end up like this....

Craig: I have no idea

Neil: Heh well at least its big... What the...

Craig: What is it?

Neil: Kaiyu is going crazy and the guards just took him..

Forte: The fool he should of kept quite.
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Craig lies back down in his Cell. Neil on the bunk above him, Forte in the next cell across.

Forte: Hey, lil' bro

Craig: What?

Forte: Are you healed yet?

Craig: Not fully, but I'm almost back to full strength.

Neil: Thats good to know.

Forte: What are they gonna do to us guys?

Craig: I don't know, but for now, they are in complete control.
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Forte: Hmm i have an idea lemme see if i still have it...

[i] Forte digs into his robotic arm looking for something...[/i]

Forte: Aha! I have found it...

[i] Forte holds up the banana [/i]

Neil: A Banana?

Forte: Yes i can get us outta here but the time needs to be right...

[i] Forte whispers the plan [/i]

Forte: see im gonna eat it and then im going to drop it on the floor... Once the guard picks it up. I grab him and knock him out break out and i will diguise myself to the guard...and the rest will be up to me.

Neil: Sounds good.....

Craig: Yes it does but what are they gonna do when they notice that you are gone...

Forte: Just say the other guard took him to the "toture room"

Craig: Ok good plan..
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siren slams clenched hands into the wall of her prison...

siren: not again!!!!*slams hands into wall*i can't live like this!!noooooo!!!!

cell mate: calm down!! the'll get you again!

siren: i don't care any more!!!


guard: hey be quiet!!

siren runs over reaches through the bars and snapps the guards neck


siren: sweet dreams


gaurd 2: go get the others... looks like you like punishment...
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Name: Andrew
Age: 24
Race: Saiyin

The door to Forte's cell opens and a man in his early twenties is thrown in.

Forte: Who are you?
Andrew: My name is Andrew, During your little break one of you destroyed my Cell so They moved me here until it's rebuilt
Forte: We going to try again soon!
Andrew: Are you boys stupid? We're severly out numbered and they are much more powerful than us!
Forte: but this time it's gonna be
Andrew: Just leave me out of it
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Neil: [i]*Starts to drift off*[/i] Hey, guys, I'm hittin it...
Andrew: Yeah...[I]*Looks around*[/I] Where do I sleep?
Neil: [I]*Slides off bunk*[/I] There...I'll sleep on the floor. I do not mind...
[I]*Neil lays on the ground and falls alseep...*[/I]
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Forte: Its time...

[i] Forte eats a bannana [/i]

Forte: Time to do the plan

[i] Forte drops it...[/i]

Guard: Hey you dont liter the beautiful atmosphere of the prison!

Forte: Oopss it slipped...

Guard: Well go and get it...

Forte: Cant.. My arm is too short.

Guard: Well come on out and do it then and go throw it away....

[i] Forte looks at his friends [/i]

Forte: This idiot... I will be back.. I have a great plan.....

Craig: Fine..

[i] Forte goes out kills the guard and picks up the banana [/i]

Forte: The door is open. But its fake closed so if a guard comes here kill 'em

Neil: Okay.

Forte: Use the banana deal...

Andrew: Come back alive Forte...

Forte: I will...

[i] Forte clicks a button on his arm [/i]

Forte: STEALTH MODE!

[i] Forte turns invisible and runs off [/i]

Andrew: I hope this plan works cuz if it doesnt its over......
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two protected gaurds grabbed sirens arms

siren: let me go you ...(the rest fo this sentence is unwrightable... i also got bored of the regular beeeeeeepppppp!!!)

guard1: stop swearing

at that a flood of cuss words spilled from siren's mouth

some of the prisnors who where still awake came to their bars to see what the commtion was...

prisnor1: it's siren... again...

prisnor2: that's the third time this week... i bet they'll kill you now...

siren: *sticks out tounge* shut up jaen...
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Forte you idiot! did you here what he said? he said they are much stronger than us and youi can just right a post saying..."i went out of the cell and killed them". thats lame, and for everyone else, im not in the torture room, forte just said that cause he hates me, so if you do it again ill just have you get puched in the face and be the weakling all the time! so get with the story line.
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Kaiyu:*sits in his cell squezzing his fist till it bleeds. " uhh, Ive gotta get out of here, I cant take it anymore!!!

Neil: Kaiyu we must Maintain, we just have to sit put until we think of something that cant fail, there just to strong and we are out numbered, we are lucky we arnt dead yet!

Kaiyu:I understand, but im soooo hungry.

Guard:*eats a sandwhich in front of kaiyus face. "mmmmmm sooo good!!!!!!

Kaiyu: Urhhhhh,*he gets to his feet and bacgs on the cell. "you just wait you bastard, once i get out youll be the first to die! And then ill take that nice bag of doritos you got!

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ohh man now im starving.
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[SIZE=1]Well I'm glad [i]someone[/i] knows whats going on (to Krillen)...
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[i]Two guards walk adjacent to each other with some space inbetween them throughout the compound... suddenly they stop and thrust their arms up catching something! Forte appears visible again...[/i]

Guard: "Don't even try that."

Forte: "Darnit! How the hell did you see me!?!?"

Guard2: "Our sensors can pick up you android types whether you have a blocking device or not"

Forte: ":mad:"

Guard: "Now, back to your cell!"

[i]The guard puts his wired hand up to Forte's chest as a sudden pulse runs through the air... Forte's inside system had been temporarily shut down..[/i]

Guard: He'll wake in about 5 hours.

Guard2: "Ok."

[i]Guard2 takes the lifeless Forte back to his cell and throws him carelessly inside...[/i]

Guard2: "Heh... try to escape agin and it's death to you pal..:demon:"

[b][i]Meanwhile...[/i][/b]

[i]Inside a secret room to men talk..[/i]

????: "The prisoners are getting restless sir."

¿¿¿¿: "Increase security, and if you catch one making a break out again... kill him/her on sight. Maybe, if we kill them all, we can go back home..."

????: "Good. I've been waiting for that command for a long time. We'll put our primary weapon on full power and only arm guards with the strongest yet lightest weaponry we have.."

¿¿¿¿: "Go ahead."

[i]The Commander walks in...[/i]

Commander: "Sir, one of the prisoners seems to be missing."

¿¿¿¿: "What!?! Which one???"

Commander: "Umm.. *looks at memos* his name's Hizoku. I put him in with a time bomb... and his body wasn'y in the remains. There was NO WAY he could have gotten out."

¿¿¿¿: "Alright. Search for him immediately. Only you. Let the other guards keep doing their jobs. You're strong enough yourself to take out all of these warriors blind-folded with one arm behind your back."

Commander: ":smirk: Don't flatter me. I'll kill him on sight."

¿¿¿¿: "So be it."

[i]Just then, a crash is heard as if something metallic had fallen.[/i]

¿¿¿¿: "What was that?"

Commander: "Probably just some creature looking for something to eat..."

¿¿¿¿: "...... Commander.... WE are the only living things on this planet...."

[i]There is silence for a bit and then the commander leaves... all is quiet in the secret room and in a small patch of dust, a footprint suddenly appears..[/i]
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Go ahead Raiha, you can join too. And that closes the signup![/SIZE]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Forte [/i]
[B]Whoa... Umm im HALF Android so i can still think and stuff right? [/B][/QUOTE][SIZE=1]Half your brain is unconsious, so your basically retarded right now, I just felt it would be less degrading if I just said you were asleep..lol[/SIZE]
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[i] Forte wakes up and feels a lil weird [/i]

Forte: HAhnwmas whatssmnx happendsndapf tosnflndf memsnf ahnfff

[i] Forte starts making a movment with his hand banging his chest....[/i]

Forte: Hmnflds whahtsa thisjnlka....

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Translation: Ha what happend to me ahhh... Hm what this


I was gonna post somehow;) ;)
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the two gaurds try to push siren through the door way but she hopps up and places her feet on the doorframe

guard2: we recived a signal to kill anyone who makes trouble
:demon:

siren: shi.t!!! time to exit this mad house!!!

she flipped out of their grasp and ran like hell...

siren ducked into a storage room panting

siren: cra.p... what do i do now?
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[SIZE=1][i]A thin beam of energy whizzes by Sirens head..[/i]

Siren: "What the f..?!?!"

[i]She whips around to see a sentry standing a distance behind her..[/i]

Sentry: "I was just being generous..!"

[i]Siren turns around and takes a mad dash in the opposite direction as thin ki beams fly all around her. She then feels a stinging pain in her ankle and collapses to the ground as she had been shot through the ankle.. the sentry soon catches up to her[/i]

Sentry: "...I should kill you right now... but just as a warning, we have the right to shoot you scum down on sight..."

[i]The sentry picks her up and takes her away as she kicks and screams furiously.. but to no avail.[/i]

[b][i]Meanwhile...[/i][/b]

[i]The rebel now identified as Hizoku walks around the planet looking for the prisoner compound...[/i]

Hizoku: "I need to get out here!... the sooner the better too... but I won't leave the others behind... we need a plan.. and a good one at that.."

[i]Hizoku walks around still unable to find the prisoner compound..[/i]

Hizoku: "Darnit! Where the hell is it!?!"[/SIZE]
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