Writing Deep Thoughts no spelling errors this time :) )

[Mitch]

[color=red]Deep Thought[/color]

[color=green]I wander deep in thought[/color]
[color=red]remembering things long forgot[/color]
[color=green]feelings converge in perpendicular fits[/color]
[color=red]curving all to one slit[/color]
[color=green]I reach deep inside[/color]
[color=red]seeing life from within my mind[/color]
[color=green]a treasure cove of finds[/color]
[color=blue]all the boxes marked with signs[/color]
[color=red]I dig deep into all those vines[/color]
[color=green]conversing into my own self[/color]
[color=red]looking on shelf upon shelf[/color]
[color=green]seeing the great valley of sacred secrets[/color]
[color=red]only there for the keeper[/color]
[color=green]suddenly it all blurs[/color]
[color=red]collapsing in unknown slurrs[/color]
[color=green]I return to my own strife[/color]
[color=red]the entrance of my life[/color]

[Jamvis]

nice dude....

[Guest Morph]

Thats really good... I like it

[Guest Shift]

[color=royalblue][b]Nice... I like it at least.[/color][/b]

[Guest cloricus]

What is with the colours or mainly the one blue line?

[Flipmodesquad]

Nice again.Im telling you post your peoms on [url]www.poetry.com[/url]

[Raiha]

[COLOR=seagreen]Well, maybe he wanted to acent that particular line. I should do that with my work to...[/COLOR]

[Mitch]

[color=blue]lol, the blue line :). I don't know why I put it there, now that I think of it...not really any reason...lol...well, I suppose I will post a few on poetry.com, I also plan to send them to [url]www.otakupoetry.com[/url] if I get to it.[/color]

[Geist]

That was really good. A lot better than I could ever come up with. :D I liked all of the lines, but here was one I thought was good.
[I]"conversing into my own self
looking on shelf upon shelf "[/I]

[BlueGender]

I really like the poetry my favorite part was the ending though.

"I return to my own strife
the entrance of my life"

You could become a profesional in my opinion you might want to consider submitting them to some literary magazines.