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Kei looks out the window of the ship with a worried look on her face. Mara is still driving the ship toward corusant.
Mara- So are you sure that padme is in corusant?
Kei- yeah, she's still alive. We still have time to save her.
Mara- c'mon, dammit! We won't ever make it in time if this ship doesn't move faster!
Kei- well,... why don't you just flip that switch, maybe it'll help.
Mara- we shouldn't be touching things that we don't know about.
Kei- It's simple. *flicks switch*
Mara- no! don-
*lights go out*
Mara- nice going. now we can't see where we're going!! oh wait, and if I push this lil key and turn this baby....
*ship goes into lightspeed*
Mara- Yeah! alright, get a hold of something kei, cause we have a senator to save!
Kei- right! holds onto handle on side*
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-Vulca
Obi wan- agh! if.... only... I.. could..erg.... get that... rock... to burn this thing off.....
*rolls over to rock and burns robe off*
Obi wan- well, that's settled with. *looks around* but how do I get off this planet?!?! *more volcanic rock burns his leg* Aghhh!!!
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- inside mara and kei's 'borrowed' ship
Kei- *gasp* OBI WAN!!
Mara- kei? what's wrong?
Kei- obi wan, he's in trouble!
Mara- where's it coming from?
Kei- it's behind us. the planet's a couple of lightyears behind us.
Mara- if we go back, we'll never reach padme in time!
Kei- obi wan's our last hope for the republic. If obi wan doesn't survive, padme won't do much help.
Mara- Padme...... *holds hands in a fist* fine, but we have to do this real fast! we don't have much time!
Kei- ok, just c'mon!
*flies back toward vulca*
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- on palpatine's ship
Palpatine- you have made the right choise, my young apprentice. you know that master kenobi has just been holding you back. He was afraid of your strength. He was afraid of your stength. Afraid that you may overcome him.
Anakin- I know. but why did you try to capture us in the first place?
Palpatine- my dear young skywalker, I wouldn't want harm to come to senator amidala. I was just protecting you.
Anakin- protecting us? from what?
Palpatine- the dangers of the war, you could of died much earlier if it weren't for us saving you.
Anakin- I understand
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on the stolen ship.... (mara and kei's)
mara- there, that's it. *points to vulca on window*
Kei- wow, no wonder he's in trouble.
Mara- we have to be careful. This planet canget us all killed.
Kei- wow, this planet must be of nothing but volcanic rock!
Mara- yeah, so we need to be careful!
Kei- there, that place looks okay.
*parks ship on hill*
Kei- Master kenobi~!!!
Mara- OBI WAN~ Obi wan~
Obi wan- *weakly* kei? mara?
both- obi wan!
mara- are you okay? your leg seems badly burnt.
Kei- Omigosh! and our ship will be too! Mara run and get the ship!
Mara- what about you two?
Obi wan- we'll be there once you get it started!
Mara- *reluctantly runs to the ship pacing back at kei and obi wan several times meanwhile* Agh! * jumps over more magma before it nearly touches the front of her shoe*
Kei- ok, master, hold on, we'll need to jump for it.
Obi wan- I'll use my other leg too okay?
Kei- ok, one, two..... three!
*jumps on ship just in time as mara drives ship low enough for them to jump on*
Obi wan- thank you for saving me! Mara, kei.... uh... where's the senator?
*Kei and mara bow their heads with worry*
Obi wan- oh, no..... don't tell me....
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Palpatine sets in his room staring at a nearby monitor, Anakin walks in....

Anakin: What is wrong my master?

Palpatine: Obi-wan Kenobi has broken free of our harness'

Anakin: He is still alive! I thought he would of been dead by now?

Palpatine: Well he is not, I want you to got to Volca... Alone and kill him.

Anakin: Yes my master, I will leave immediatly.

[I] One hour later[/I]

Anakin hits Volca's gravity and begins to be pulled into the planet....
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*kei looks back one last time at the planet seeing a large object being pulled towards it.*
Kei- Hey, you guys, what is that thing?
obi-wan-It looks like some sort of ship!
Mara- it must be in trouble!
Kei- we gotta help it!
Mara- Kei, we have no time! We need to get to corusant! saving obi wan has alreadt wasted alot of time!
Kei- Well, I can't leave whoever's in that ship to die!
Obi wan- I get the feeling that that's anakin's ship! It's not safe!
Mara- If you go there, we could all get killed!
Obi wan- Kei! Don't do it! as you can remember, anakin has already turned to the dark side, this could be a trap!
Kei- no, We still have a chance!
Obi wan- Kei, we can't afford to lose you too!
Kei- but-
Mara- Obi wan's right! Kei, Don't do it!
Kei- *Jumps to anakin's ship*
Obi wan- NO! KEI! GET BACK HERE!!* jumps after her*
Anakin- oh, thank you! thank you!
Kei- *helps him up*
Anakin- *grins* You've just made a huge mistake... *smirks evily* You will pay for betraying my master,
Kei- Your master? What are you talking about? Obi wan is your only master.
Anakin- not anymore. My new master doesn't hold me back.
Kei- do you call saving your life holding you back? That's called holding you back from your death! Get it into your head!
Obi wan- Anakin, you still have a chance to turn back!
Anakin- no! not even if you kill me!* turns on lightsaber*
Obi wan- Anakin, just-
Anakin- I will not listen to your worthless talk anymore!* points lightsaber at kei*
Kei- *turns on lightsaber* anakin,..... please,
Obi wan- Anakin, kei, stop. If you're gonna fight someone, it's gonna be me, Kei, get back to the ship!
Kei- but what about you?
Obi wan- don't worry! just go now and save the senator!
Kei- but I-
Obi wan- JUST GO!
*kei jumps back to ship* "thanks for waiting mara"
Mara- but what about obi wan?
Kei- He's fighting anakin.
Mara- but, what if....
Kei- He'll be okay. but for now, we must save padme.
Mara- *reluctantly starts ship* I hope you're right.
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Obi wan- but why... why did you turn?
Anakin- I have decided to make choises of my own from now.
Obi wan- You're not the young boy that I knew all those years ago,.... You're not the man that you used to be.
Anakin- I know, I'm far stronger, all I need is my strength. now, you have said your last words old man!
*obi wan turns on lightsaber and both start fighting.... as the ship still gets pulled closer,.. and closer.................*
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Anakin uses the force to throw Obi-wan into the wall of the ship just as it crashes into the ground of Volca. He runs to Kei and grabs her throught [i](spelling?)[/i].

Anakin: Dont try to make me look like a child you traitor, you will die!

Anakin turns on his lightsabar and looks at his arm......looks back at kei and slices her right arm off, kei falls to the ground surronded by her own blood. Mara tries to run to her but Anakin throws her out of the ship. Mara lands on the ground snd anakin uses the force to throw large rocks over her, so she can not get up.

Anakin then walks to Obi-wan, Obi-wan gets up and both of the Jedi turn there lightsabars on.

Obi-wan: So, this is what it will come down to, us fighting?

Anakin: Apparently old man!

Ankin takes the first strike with Obi-wan hitting right back. Both the men look equaly matched.....
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Juu, can u please make ur posts more elaborite, I have a hard time understanding ur posts, and also double space.
And can no one please get involved in the fight between Anakin and Obi-wan
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OOC: oops sorry. LOL, when I get carried away like that, I usually don't think of being elaborate.
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Kei- agh.... *kei holds hands in a fist as she tries to reach for her lightsaber.*
Obi wan- anakin, how could you? and you call kei a traitor? what do you call yourself?
Anakin- I have nothing having to do with the jedi anymore. the old anakin is dead. And the 'real' anakin has been 'reborn'
Kei- so, is it true that you don't love anymore? including your own wife padme?
Anakin- never, padme is different. she loves me for who i am.
Kei- then who are you exactly. You're not the anakin I used to know.
Anakin- as I said the old anakin is dead.
Kei- How is padme different? she loves you for who you used to be!
Anakin- *turns off lightsaber*
Obi wan- kei, go back to corusant.
Kei- but I-
Obi wan- let us settle this.
Kei- what if you get hurt? I can't-
Obi wan- I'll be fine, now go back to corusant with mara.
Kei- may the force be with you obi wan.
Obi wan- may the force be with you.
*kei jumps to mara's ship and both start heading away*
Anakin- obi wan, you are very foolish to ask to face me alone. now you'll see my true power, the one you've been holding back this whole time!
Obi Wan- is this what it's all about?
Anakin- don't play dumb with me old man!
*both turn on lighsaber and start fighting*
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-on mara's ship-
Kei- *staggers in with one hand over arm*
Mara- Kei! what happened? And where's obi wan?
Kei- obi wan will be fine. me,... well,...
Mara- I'll get one of the doctors to look at that once we get back.
Kei- Are you sure they're not dead?
Mara- I hope so... but for now, do you think padme's okay?
Kei- she's alive. but she's scared. not of her death. but of all of us. she is worried about anakin, obiwan, you, me, the republic, and especially her twins.
Mara- that's right! omigosh! what could of happened to them? If I find out that pal-
Kei- I can't sense the twins, for I'm not familiar with them.... but I hope they are okay.
Mara- no one better mess with padme or her twins! or else they're making the mistake that'll cause them their life!
Kei- *holds on to cut off arm and cringes while they head for corusant*
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-wherever padme is-
Padme- You monster.... what have you done with them?
???- my dear senator, I assure you everything's alright.
Padme- (thinks) I hope they're alright.
???- I see something else troubling you....
Padme- nothing troubles me more than your presence.
???- If you wish to see your friends alive ever again, I suggest you cooperate.
Padme- who are you?
???- that.... you'll never live to know....
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OOC: erm, schratn, Kei was already off anakin's ship at that time... but uh, never mind, I should of been more elaborate on what happened. Anyways, I like what you said happened better.
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Omg! There was alotttttttttttttttttttt wrong with that post. Juu, Mara was underneigth a bunch of rocks. And Kei had her arm cut off, she was laying on the ground in her own blood! Im gonna ignore that post, sry!
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Obi-wan threw himself into Anakin, swinging his lightsabar at him. Anakin countered by dodging it and striking Obi-wan down. Anakin kicked Obi-wan in the head, knocking him unconcious...

[i]Inside Obi-wan's mind[/i]

" Why, why could'nt this poor little boy stay on that desert planet as a slave! Why did Qui-gon......[i] Begins to cry[/i]

Qui-gon: Why, because he is the one Obi-wan...

Obi-wan: Qui-gon? ([i] Stops crying[/i]) How are you

Qui-gon: Im in your mind, my freind. I am very very pleased with you. Anakin is the one that will bring balance to the force, weither for the light or dark, weither dead or alive!

Obi-wan: You want me too...

Qui-gon: Do what your heart wants to.

[i] While Obi-wan is unconcious[/i]

Anakin looks down at Obi-wan's body

Anakin: Dead, ha....

Anakin walks away back to his ship, turning off his lightsabar..

Obi-wan gets up, turns on his lightsabar and runs to Anakin.

Obi-wan: Where are you going!!!!!!!
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OOC: well, I said that mara was back @ the ship on my one before my last one where we went back to get obi wan.
I put that she *reluctantly started the ship*near the bottom of that post.
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-(mara and kei) on their way back to corusant-
Mara- Yes! I see it! I see it!
Kei- huh? *leans over to window to see a distant planet*
Mara- wow, but..... where are all the speeders and.... *hangs head sadly* the people....... they were... all......
Kei- No... no.... this has to be a nightmare!this...
Mara- this is a nightmare, except we're living in this one.....
Kei- I can't sense master yoda either.....
Mara- *gasp* if obi wan doesn't come back alive.... this galaxy is doomed!
Kei- hold on... *tries to reach yoda* it's either yoda's too far away or... he's......
Mara- dead? this is terrible....... agh! palpatine is going to pay!
but first, we need to reach padme
Kei- but.. but... how?
Mara- well,...*smirks* it won't be easy but, we can do it.
Kei- I hope so...
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-the idiot's array-
Tom- *waves hand over abob's face* hellooo
Abob- I will remember nothing of this mi- *wakes up*
Tom- huh? what's wrong?
Abob- I- I can't remember... Where are we?
Tom- you said something about a mission...
Abob- a mission? ah, that's right. *turns on screen and tries to locate mara's ship, but then remember that he took them to aldderan* tom, we're going to make one more trip.
Tom- huh? but where?
Abob- a planet called aldderan. I have a friend there that the hutts would love to meet.
Tom- *looks confused* ok...
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Obi wan- anakin, if a fight is what you want, that's what you'll get.
Anakin- you're brave master kenobi, but let's test your strength now shall we?
Obi wan- fine...
*both turn on lightsaber and start dueling on falling ship*
Anakin- master kenobi, you disappoint me...
obi wan- you've become strong.....
Anakin- thanks to my new master. but the reason why I was sent here was to kill you. And that's exactly what I'm going to do.
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What are you talking about, Anakin and Obi-wan are on the ground. PLEASE play as ur own Character, and the characters you are with. Again, I am sorry but I will have to ignore that post...

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Obi-wan and Anakin dueled for Hours, not one giving up at any moment. Both Jedi being equaly matched, they knew this battle would go on forever.

Obi-wan backed away

Obi-wan: This is getting childish...

Anakin: Dont call me a child!!!!!

Anakin hits Obi-wan in the back. Obi-wan turns around and the battle continues....
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OOC:okay, okay, sum up, this is getting confusing..mara and kei stole a ship from aldderan so they could reach padme in time and plus,they didn't have a ship. they went to vulca to get obi wan along the way. While they were there, they saw anakin's ship. Kei jumped to anakin's ship and obi wan jumped in after her. Schratn said that anakin hurt mara and kei BADLY. Mara climbed back in the ship and kei staggered up and jumped as hard as she could even though she was in pain, to the other ship. Mara and kei are now on their way back to corusant and obi wan and anakin are fighting back on vulca. there.tell me if I'm wrong. this is what I thought was happening.
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OOC: Please stop your bickering. I'm going to go with Juu's posts, because I guess that's where Mara's at right now.
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"Have a plan?" Kei asked curiously.
Mara nodded.
"I think so."Mara replied, flipping a swtich that brought up a map of the current galaxy they were in.
"So what is it?" Kei asked anxiously.
"I know you are familiar with Padme, so you must be able to sense her. I'm going to go into hyperspace to Coruscant and slowly circle around the planet. I need you to sense a rough approximation of Padme's location, and I'll land there. I'll try to find some weapon's on the ship and I guess we'll just have to wing it from there." Mara replied, flipping a few more switches.
Kei nodded.
'So when does this plan take effect?" Kei inquired.
"Now." Mara replied, sending the ship into hyperspace, it's coordinates set for Coruscant.
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Kei closed her eyes and tries to sense padme.
Mara- any luck?
Kei- agh... it's really hard to see..no....... the dark side is clouding my vision....
Mara- just try harder....
Kei- if only..... *starts sweating* argg...
Mara- are you even sure they're on the planet?
Kei- positive...
Mara-if palpatine's the one that captured her, we don't know what to expect. anything can be a trap.
Kei- Well that's a chance we'll have to take.
Mara- no, that's too dangerous! you only have one arm! we need to reach one of the doctors on corusant without palpatine knowing. Meanwhile, I'll try to track down padme.
Kei- huh? are you sure it's safe? we can't afford to lose you too!
Mara- you won't. There's no reason to be worried. I'll be fine.
Kei- alright, I hope your plan works.
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-wherever padme is-
Padme- agh! Tell me now! What have you done to anakin?
???- senator, Why are you so worried about young skywalker?
Padme- (thinks) it makes no difference now... (speaks) because I care about him.
???- my my, well, that was surely unexpected. If the council were still here, who knows what they'd say
Padme- I've run out of paitiance with you! where are they and what have you done with them?
???- you could have been voted out of office for being in love with a jedi....
Padme- don't change the subject! Where are they?
???- They are all dead. I just sent your beloved young skywalker to kill master obi wan.
Padme- no, he would never listen to you!
???- that is where you are wrong.
Padme- no, anakin wouldn't-
???- but, the old 'anakin' you knew is gone,dead, the new anakin has been reborn to his true purpose.
Padme- *confused/surprised* What?
???- his true purpose, his destiny.
Padme- anakin and I make our own destiny. never what we are expected to do.
???- what makes you so sure?
Padme- he would never betray me! He loves me! and he said that that was all that matters to him!
???- we will see his loyalty to you senator amidala. we will see.
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Yea, Mist im with you, please stop Juu. And yes you are right.

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Anakin pushed Obi-wan off a large cliff, making him fall into a pit of burning lava. Anakin knew that this was it for the Jedi he started to walk away.

All of a sudden a Obi-wan's hand reached up and grabed a rock, Obi-wan pulled himself up. His cloths and skin being burnt bad.

Obi-wan ran to Anakin with anger in his heart. He went for his lightsaber but it was not there! He must of lost it when he fell into the pit, he said to himself.

Anakin swung around with his Lightsabar, hitting Obi-wans arm he fell to the ground. Anakin stood over him, screaming "I am the One!"

Obi-wan looked at his side, he saw a stick in the ground and he remembered the last time he was here, when Padme and Mara buried there supplies. Obi-wan pushed over a rock that was hiding a hole, he reached down into the hole and grabed a blaster. He stood up and shot Anakin in the chest.

Anakin fell to the ground, barely breathing. Obi-wan took his lightsabar and struke him rapididly, cuttin off the bottom of his body and both arms. One more hit in the head and he would die. Obi-wan now stood over the barily alive Anakin Skywalker.

Anakin: Do it my freind, kill me..

Obi-wan: I'd raither not.

With Anakin's lightsabar, Obi-wan climbed into Anakin's ship and took off into space....

After fifteen minutes into the journey into space, Obi-wan realized the seviure ([i]spelling?[/i]) wounds he had been put through during the battle, he fell into another coma.....

Not able to control the ship, Obi-wan crash landed on the nearest planet of Degobah....
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OOC: Umm...okay.
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Mara smiled as she landed in a safe spot on Coruscant.
"Where are we?" Kei asked, looking curiously out of the nearest porthole.
"Well," Mara replied, her tongue darting to the side of her mouth as the ship landed, "I said you need to get to a doctor, right? Well I know a friend of mine that's more than a doctor."
Kei turned around, staring at Mara strangely.
"That would mean?"
Mara laughed.
"He's one of my closest friends; I almost came to the point of marrying him. I'll leave you there; you'll be safe."
Kei just laughed.
"Hmm, this ought to be fun." She said.
------------ Three Hours Later -----------------------
Mara jumped back into her ship, knowing Kei was safe. She flipped a few switches with a sigh.
"Hold on, Padme," she whispered, her fear now consuming her, "I'm coming."
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As Obi-wan's ship crash landed on the swamp planet of Degobah, the great Jedi Master Yoda felt the disturbance in the force weaken, as if something great had just been destroyed.

Twins in hand, Yoda staggered to the crash site. He lay the babies on the ground and walked to the ship. The door opened and in Yoda went. He walked to the unconcious Obi-wan and waved his hand infront of his face. Obi-wan woke up.

Yoda: Defeat the one you have?

Obi-wan: Sadly yes.

Yoda: But alive he is?

Obi-wan: I could'nt finsh him master

Yoda: He will rise again, hide his children you must.

Obi-wan: There mother was kidnapped.

Yoda: She is with Palpatine

Obi-wan: We must split the children up, they will never know of there father of sibling.

[i] Yoda looks down[/i]

Yoda: Taken his weapon you have?

Obi-wan: Yes, mine was destroyed

[i] The two Jedi walk to the children and Obi-wan picks them up[/i]

Yoda: The boy.....

Obi-wan: I fell it too my Master.

Yoda: Bring him to me you will

Obi-wan: Yes

[i] The two men huge, feeling this is the last time they will ever see each other. Obi-wan takes the twins in his ship and takes off, he waves to Yoda as he leaves the planet.[/i]
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Kei- Ow! Hey! what are you doing to my arm? It's already cut off!
doctor- I'm giving you an artificial hand.
Kei- 0.o a-rtificial?
doctor- *nods* or else you won't even stand a chance againt maybe even one of his guards. hold on..
Kei- OW! dammit! who do you think you are?
Doctor-I'm a good friend of mara. I suppose she already told you about that.*chuckles* and, oh, I'm Dr. Richard Leoteon. You can call me Richard.
Kei- *nods* okay. Ow!
Richard- *laughs* oh c'mon, it can't hurt that bad.
Kei- how would you know? You're not the one that's getting an artificial hand!
Richard- *laughs* didn't you say you were a jedi?
Kei- *sighs* no... almost. My master was killed during the clone wars.
Richard- oh, I see... -almost... done! There. It's done!
Kei- *looks at hand* hmm... not bad. Thank you.
Richard- now if it weren't for mara, you could o died.
Kei- huh? how?
Richard- well, blood loss, or palpatine could o killed you himself.
Kei- How do you know about....
Richard- I just have my way with things.
Kei- *raises an eyebrow* whatever you say...
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Palpatine- *gasps* obi wan is still alive.....
Padme- *smirks* and anakin...
Palpatine- I'm not sure.... *walks out door and talks to guard right outside the door*

padme gets her way over by the door and listens.

Palpatine- Officer, I have to leave to take care of some buisness for a little bit. Would you mind looking after the senator during my absence?
Officer- no sir, we will make sure nothing gets past us to the prisoner.
Palpatine- Thank you officer, I will return shortly.
Officer- Yes sir. *walks into room with three other guards*
guard1- it seems you won't be leaving senator, so don't get any ideas of escape.
???- why is that?
Guard2- get her!
Padme- Mara!
Mara- Padme! you're alive!
Guard2- Don't move!
Mara- *points gun at guards*
Officer- 4 to 1... doesn't sound very fair does it?
Guard3- yes, in fact... It's not! *shoots guard2*
Mara- what the-
Guard3- I'm a spy that's been undercover here for about two years. I'm with a person called Kaikei. Do you know her?
Mara- yes, in fact I do..
Guard3- get the senator!
Mara- I have a better idea. *tosses padme a blaster*
mara, padme and guard3 point blasters at the two guards and officer.
Mara- looks like you've lost.
Officer- not-quite. *snaps fingers*
6 more guards march in.
Guard3- Senator, mara! get over here! *calls them from behind palpatine's desk*
Mara- *kicks over desk and ducks behind it and covers padme*
there's gonna be more guards coming! we have to run for it! hey you, run out of here with padme!
Guard3- Who??
Mara- The senator!
Guard3- ok! alright senator amidala, stay behind me.
Padme- I'll be fine. Let's go! *both dash out of room shooting*

padme almost gets shot, but still makes it out of the room. Mara soon follows. all bearly missed my the guards.

Padme- who are you?
Guard3- my name is Leia. At your service.
Mara- how long have you been here?
Leia- ever since obi wan sent that transmission to the jedi about someone being involved with the sith here.
Mara- I see. (thinks) god, what is with all these spies?
Leia- we must get out of here.
Mara- My ship is waiting outside. padme, where's palpatine?
Padme- he went to take care of some 'buisness'.
Mara- oh, no.... we're running out of time.
Leia- Senator, mara. you must leave immediately.
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Obi-wan with twins in arms brings his ship to Courscant. He circles the planet until he finds the death Star. Making his way into a loading bay, Obi-wan fires at the gunners, killing all of them. He sees a group of women running through trying to find a ship. Looking closier he can see Mara and Padme with another lady.

Obi-wan brings the ship down but does not shut it down.

[i] Looking out of the ship[/i]

Obi-wan: Need a ride ladies

The ladies climb into the ship and Obi-wan takes off without the Emperior even knowing he was there

[i]Padme looks into Obi-wan's arms[/i]

Padme: My.....my.....Children!

[i]Padme takes them and begins to cry[/i]

Obi-wan: We need a safe stop to Land

Mara: WHat about Naboo

Padme: The empire took it over, what about Alderaan?

Obi-wan: Sounds great, whose that?

Mara: This is a guard Leia, she helped us.

Obi-wan: Nice to meet you.

The ship begins to make its way to Alderaan and just enters Hyperspace...
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Padme- oh my babies, I'm so glad you're okay! Thank you so much obi wan. I never doubted you.

Obi wan- no problem, It's- er was my job to keep you out of trouble.

Padme- but... how did you find them?

Obi wan- *smiles* well, an old friend 'found' them.

Padme- *smiles back* I see. *looks back at twins and smiles* oh, how did you find me in the first place mara? and great timing by the way.

Mara- uh-oh....

Padme- what?

Mara- urm... we sorta stole a ship from aldderan to save you. And it seems unless kei gets it back.... um..

Padme- where is she?

Mara- oh, she's with a doctor, a 'friend' of mine. erm, you know, Dr.Leoteon?

Padme- *smirks* yeah I remember~ and- oh, why?

Mara- well she-

Obi wan- got injured-

Mara- by one of the guards. * glares over at obi wan* (under breath) she cannot know of what happened to anakin.

Obi wan- *nods firmly* yes, uh... she'll be fine, just a lil scratch.

Padme- *suspectingly* I understand. *turns back to twins*
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-on richard's ship- (richard is giving kei a ride back)
Kei- thanx for helping! and thanx for the ride.

Richard- it's no big deal. um... you need to land...

Kei- *points spot on screen* just drop me off there.

Richard- but that's-

Kei- Yeah, I know. But There's a lil buisness I have to take care of.

Richard- whatever you say... *lands by palpatine's place*

Kei- thanks! be careful on your way back.

Richard- don't worry about me. Bye! *flies away in ship*

Kei- hmm..... yes! * sneaks behind wall* Let's see..... I think I can fit in there.... *pulls out lightsaber and chops off the guard's head and drags him behind wall* This should fit perfectly!
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Juu, again plz play as your own Character not everyone elses..

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[i]Obi-wan talks to Mara through her mind
''She cannot know of Anakin's turning to the dark side, we will tell her that Anakin went to.... ummm..... train. But were not sure where" Obi-wan says to Mara[/i]

Mara: Padme, do you have any idea where Anakin went to train

Padme: ([i] Begins to cry[/i]) I havent seen Anakin in weeks, I have no idea where he could be. Cant you find him with the force Obi-wan?

Obi-wan: Unfortunitly Ive tried and failed. Were approaching Alderaan now....
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Juu please edit your last post or delete it, just make sure its in-character. Thats a spam!
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[i]Obi-wan took the stolen ship down in a grass feild, he turned around and got up out of the pilot seat.[/i]

Obi-wan: Padme we need to talk......about the twins.

Padme: No you cant take them.

Mara: He will kill them!!..........opps

Padme: WHAT, wheres Anakin?

Obi-wan: I must tell you the truth. Anakin has turned to the dark side, I fought him and almost killed him, but I didnt. If he finds out of the twins birth or your whereabouts he will kill the twins and you. He is evil now, and theres nothing you can do. Im sorry.

Padme: I knew this would happen, I saw the hatred in him since he was a boy. We must split the twins up.

Obi-wan: I will take the boy, to where I do not know

Padme: I will keep the girl.

Mara: Im going to stay with you Padme, and leia?

Leia: Im going my seperate way, thank you for the ride.

[i] The Jedi spy walks her seperate way, the group never seeing her again. Padme looks down at the baby girl in her arms.[/i]

Padme: Her name will be Leia.

Mara: And the boy?

Padme: The male form of leia?

Obi-wan: His name will be Luke..... Luke Skywalker. And hers Leia Organa, keep her with Bail. The Empire would never expect it.

Padme: I hate for this journey to end

[i] Padme hugs Obi-wan[/i]

Obi-wan: We will meet again.

[i] After a few good byes, Obi-wan gets into his ship with Luke. One last wave good bye and he takes off[/i]
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*sigh* schratn, I was about to anyway, just stop trying to make me argue, I am NOT in the mood.
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-palpatine's ship-

Pilot- sir, I don't think we can land! It's covered with volcanic magma!

Palpatine- just fly low. Over there.... *points to a certain spot on planet*

Guard1- is that a- person?!?

Palpatine- yes.

Guard1- Could he be alive sir?

Palpatine- yes, very much so. just fly low and get him out of that lava pit and bring him to my doctors immediately.

Guard1- yes sir. *salutes and walks toward door of craft*

Palpatine- be careful, he is severly injured and fragile. He is also very useful to us.

The guards slowly lower some sort of fire-proof net and try to scoop him up back into the craft. eventually after a couple of swings, they get him in the net and bring him back up.

Anakin- e- e- emp-empor-em-

Palpatine- anakin, do not try to use up your energy. You will need what you have to keep you alive,

Anakn nods weakly and falls unconsious having only the memory of palpatine rescuing him.
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- kei's ship-

Kei- huh? what's that?

R3- *beeps*

Kei- whoa... That's pretty far... well, at least they're okay. hey, what's that other ship heading towards us?

R3- *tweets*

Kei- wait... *gasps* It's leia! She's still alive! *drives ship towards hers*

Leia- Long time no see...

Kei- Leia! you're...

Leia- ever since you left with the job... well, I decided to help.

Kei- THat's the stupidest- wait, padme, mara, obi wan, are they okay?

Leia- they're fine. and- is there anything else I can do while I'm still here?

Kei- yes.... in fact there is. Anakin is still on planet volca. make sure he dies. He cannot turn back now. He's been pulled too deeply.

Leia- but-

Kei- he cannot fight back.

Leia- okay...
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Leia- Kaikei!! He- he- He's not there! no trace of him escaping or him dying!

Kei- how could that of happened? There's no wa- oh no......
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[i]Obi-wan flies his ship towards the outer Rim on the Galaxy. He looks into his arms and the baby, luke, looks up. "Im so sorry" Obi-wan says.

The seen now opens on a desert planet Obi-wan, baby in hand, Obi-wan knocks on the door. Two familar faces walk out and take the baby. No words are spoken, the know exactly what is going on. A quick hug between them and Obi-wan walks in the direction Lars is pointing.

A small house, Obi-wan looks inside. He steps in and sits on the bed. He sees a box on the floor he looks to his side and takes Anakin's lightsabar in it. Obi-wan places the box under his bed.
"He will use this some day" he says to him self.

It is now night, Obi-wan walks out side and looks up at the stars. The camera zooms out and the STAR WARS music begins.[/i]

~the end~:bawl:


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Hey guys, whata u think about the ending. Im thinking about making a comic over the summer based, not on, this Rpg. Can everyone please PM or e-mail me pics of what there characters look like. They dont have to be drawings they can be just a pic u found off the internet....thanks
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