Writing Addict

[Lady Asphyxia]

Okay well, Anade, My muse, started to nag me, and who am I to deny her? This is the product.

ADDICT

What I want is to live,
What I'll get is to die.
What I need is happiness,
What I have - a lie.


The needle, my arm.
They go hand in hand.
And they take me, soaring,
To a brilliant land.

Where happiness rules,
and agony fades.
Where day is like night,
and night, day.

Addiction
A word we all hate to use
But all I do to my body
is just that; abuse.

I'll fall down off the plain,
And my conscience will whine
So I promise myself
Thats the last time.

A day or two,
and I can't stand the pain.
So I'll go back
to Ms. Heroine again.

All I what is to live,
All I'll get is to die.
What I need is happiness
What I have - a lie.

[Guest ~Mystic~]

Thats an awsome poem and Its really well written. I wish I could write like that. Its one of those things that makes you think, ya know?. Hope your muse keeps nagging you because you are a terrific and very talented writter.

[Lady Asphyxia]

Yeah, thanks. Unfortunately, Anade will settle down for a while and leave me to write stories, so there'll probably be no more poems for a while...

[MarkM]

Thats a good poem :)

[Boo]

Pretty good poem. Post more.

[Jesus Chicken]

Damn that's good. Nice and depressing... Well done

[Mitch]

[color=red]Very nicely worded...it's really nice. [b]All I what is to live,
All I'll get is to die.
What I need is happiness
What I have - a lie.[/b] this line is what really made the poem a good poem. Keep writing![/color]

[Lady Asphyxia]

Thanks. Actually, I only wrote the poem because I had the lines "All I want etc" in my head.

[jupitersun]

that a great poem i agree with anime lover those lines are the ones that made it a good poem, but withg everythign else its great^^

[liamc2]

*cries* ooo I'm so proud! Meh little baby is all grown up!

lol, I know for sure I'm going to be hunted down at school on monday for that

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But seriously now, it is marvellously well written. Mind you I'm not much of a judge on writing poetry as I've detested doing it ever since it was mandatory at primary school. .

[Empathy]

I like tht 'un ^_^ keep at it man!!