Deathsye

Name- Trig Sentaris Race- Zabrak(Coloring like Bao Dur) Gender- Male Age- 38 Physical Profile- He has a slightly muscler built. He wears a Heavy Exoskeleton that can withstand Heavy Blaster shots and can even fend off the sharpest of Vibroblades and a helmet that can give him air in the vaccum of space. Essecially he has a space suit. He has Tattoos on his face in the shape of a Hand and his horns are spaced 2 to 3 inches apart. Background- Trig Organa grew up on the Planet Taris, a sprawling city on the Outer Rim. He was few of the lucky alien species that was allowed to roam the Upper Streets of Taris. Trig lived a good life, working at the Cantina in his early years and working at the Sith Military Base during their occupation as a Soldier Recruit. He had the basic training, combat, melee and ranged but the place he really shined was his Military Strategy. During training exercises he came up with massive strategies, pincers, flanking maneuver , and Three-pronged attacks. His favorite kind of battles were the Space Battles. One time during a simulation he lead a boarding party on a Republic Capital Ship. They swept though the ship in under 30 mins. He was happy during that time. But then the Sith Bombarded the planet destroying everything he has ever known including his friends he had at the academy. After the bombardment he walked the once beautiful streets of Taris and saw the devastation that the Sith could dish out. So he abandoned his role as a Sith Soldier. Later, he tried to join the Republic as a Soldier but they would not take him because of his back ground with the Sith. However, every once and a while he got called for information during the Jedi Civil War. After, the Civil War his talents were made useless by the senseless destruction of the New Breed of Sith. After a while he became fed up with the Sith and The Republic, The Sith for there mindless destrution and The Republic for doing nothing about it. It was then he gathered all his earnings he earned during The Jedi Civil war as an informant and purchased a ship he named the Crimson Axe, an old Mandalorien Freighter that he modified drastically for space combat. Then he found himself a crew of 3 people and one droid. The droid designated as TK-01, a assault droid. Now Trig wanders the galaxy as a space pirate raiding ships both Republic and Sith ship up to the current date. They are currently located on Ord Mantell for repairs to the Crimson Axe and for a little R&R. Trig however is looking for info for the crews next job. Personality Profile- Trig is a likeable guy. Always cracking a joke to lighten the mood. Sometimes planing parties on board the ship also. In battle ,however, his attitude changes drastically he becomes quiet calculating and deadly. Profession- Space Pirate (Ex-soldier) Specific Skill- Stradegy and Speed Preferred Weapon- His modified Disrupter Rifle used for infiltration. And his Durasteel Vibroblade ------------------------------------------ The reason why i didnt name the other 3 of the crew is because that anyone from here on could be one of the crew of the Crimson Axe. I hope this is ok Gavin. And I never really seen a space pirate in star wars before so i thought that would be great fun. :D Gavin do you need me to change the first name as well?

[quote name='Tank!']my biggest issure with starting a book, is I have the story down, plot etc. but when it comes to getting it down on paper. Nothing is every good enough. Then I end up getting frustrated.. leading to nothing getting drawn. Or what has been drawn, ends up earsed or in the trash. :animestun[/quote] Yeah that is about the same with me. I can draw on a normal sheet of drawing paper with a normal size character but when it comes to drawing in a little box... i can only draw with stick figures or and triangle person.

[COLOR=DarkRed]As Adam and Nega was taking the path to Saware being careful not to be spotted by the woman. Nega stopped in mid-stride, "[COLOR=Orange]Nega why have you stopped we need to keep past with the group ahead." [/COLOR] said Adam in a annoied tone of voice. "[COLOR=Red]Master Deathsye... I have noticed that a person has been following us since we left Serenity City. I think we should investigate this and make sure that this is not a threat to our goal." [/COLOR] said Nega in a confident voice. "[COLOR=Orange]Nega. You are too smart for your own good. We will hide in those bushes over there and wait for the guy to walk by then we shall see if he or she is a threat."[/COLOR] "Yes, Master" They quickly hid behind a bush that had a plain view of the path they were on. As Nega pointed out a young man in his early 20s was walking along. "[COLOR=DarkSlateGray]Where did they go?[/COLOR] he said. "[COLOR=DarkOrange]So you are the one that has been following us? And your digimon a DemiDevimon. A interesting choice. Are by chance a evil player?" [/COLOR] asked Adam. "[COLOR=DarkSlateGray]Some may say I am a evil player. I will do what ever it take as long the money is good.[/COLOR]" replied the man. "[COLOR=DarkOrange]Ha ha ha! I like your attitude! What is your name[/COLOR]?" asked Adam in a upbeat manner. "[COLOR=DarkSlateGray] I am called here Dark Guardian." [/COLOR] replied DG. "[COLOR=DarkOrange]I am known as Deathsye. And this is my digimon BlackAugumon you can call him Nega. So may I inquire why you were following me?" [/COLOR] [COLOR=DarkSlateGray]"I was interested in why you have a black Augumon? Why not a regular one?"[/COLOR] Adam was silent and a bit angry but how could this guy know what happen in that forest. " [COLOR=DarkOrange]In time, but i have one more question.... Why don't you come with me? To Saware? I could use a ally when i go to confront Mekratrimon. I will not be offended by your reply just tell me what do you say?"[/COLOR] asked Adam in a sly voice. "[COLOR=DarkSlateGray]What is in it for me?" [/COLOR] asked Daryl quickly. Adam replied, "[COLOR=DarkOrange]Power... and wealth... everything you and I need. So what do you say." [/COLOR] " [COLOR=DarkSlateGray]You had me at the wealth part.[/COLOR]" said Daryl. Adam stuck out his hand and Daryl shook it. Nega and DemiDevimon were right next to each other. "[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]So, I guess this makes us partners.. eh, Nega[/COLOR]?" asked DemiDevimon. "[COLOR=Red]This makes us allies... but if I feel for one milisecond that you will betray my Master...," [/COLOR] Nega looked at DemiDevimon with intense fiery eyes, "[COLOR=Red] I will delete you with out even thinking about it." [/COLOR] said Nega calmly. Demidevimon jumped alittle. "[COLOR=DarkOrange]Nega! Let's go!" [/COLOR] "[COLOR=DarkSlateGray]You to DemiDevimon.[/COLOR]"[COLOR=Red] "Coming Master Deathsye[/COLOR]." [COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]"Right behind ya[/COLOR]!"[/COLOR] -------------------- OCC- I put the dialouge in differnt colors for different people and digimon so that it would be easier to read. I hope this is ok...

Red looked at what was left of his precious Black Hole. As he looked he shook his head his head bleeding slightly, "No Gado I don't think God could put this back together." Red's Cellphone started to ring. He took the beat up phone out of his suit and answered it, "Sir... Yes it has been totally destroyed.... I know how much money it costed to build it. Sir, are you sure? On such short notice? I see. I will expect the replacement to be here tomorrow.... Yes, sir." Red then hung up the phone. "What was that about?" asked Gado. Red quickly replied, "My replacment gundam is coming tomorrow." "How conventant for you." "My gundam is scrap but yours is still able to work it was just a force shutdown from the blast with a few repairs it should be good as new. And since I ain't got crap to do till tomorrow you got yourself a new mechanic till then." "Fine." Red and Gado walked over to the Forbidden that was laying on the ground with a lone black scrap of the black hole on it with the ghost insignia on it. The Next day a huge dropship droped off a huge object with a tarp over it. "Is this it?" said Red. "I guess it is. ALRIGHT GUYS OFF WITH THE TARP!" The tarp fell to the ground with a thud and a Gundam in complete contrasting color to the Black Hole was standing in front of Red. Then, he read the name plate that was on the left foot of the gundam. "So, this gundam is called the 'White Hole'. I hope you stand up better then the Black Hole. The gundam was quickly move inside the Neo-American hanger. ----------------------------------------------------------------- OCC- I am going to post the new gundams armements in the Adventure Inn.

The Black Hole walked into the city slowly and looked around quickly and right in front of him was the Quad Gundam Forbidden. "I see you modified your gundam." stated Red in a surprised voice. "He he he your going to need it." he added quickly. "You talk to much. I have seen your matches they are nothing special." said Gado in a calm voice. "Well, I can't say I am that impressed with you. Seeing the only way you can win is killing the other opponent." replied Red in a sarcastic tone. Then the announcer came up in a screen in each cockpit. "Are you Ready!" "Time to see if you can back up your talk kid." said Gado. "GO!" The Quad Forbidden whipped out its scythe and rush towards the Black Hole. Black Hole quickly drew his beamsaber and blocked the rush. The force from the attack sent the Black Hole flying back a few yards. "Whoa. Your fast." The Forbidden rushed again barly missing Red by feet. Then, The Black Hole let out a flurry of attacks with the beamsaber Gado blocking each time. "Time to stop playing around." yelled Gado as he started to fire his 115mm machine guns at the Black Hole whose only ranged attack was his beam cannons and his head vulcans. As he was dodging The head vulcan wouldn't do anything to the armor of the Quad Forbidden and his buster cannon shots took to much energy and took a while to fire up. "I was hoping to save this for later Gado. But you leave me no choice.... Activate! Ghost Gundam Program! Phase Cloak Activate!" The Black Hole disappeared into thin air. Gado not knowing what happene fired at the spot where the Black Hole stood. The bullets only hit air. "Where did he go?!" Quad Forbbiden walked through the city searching for the Black Hole. Then, a dense fog fell in the city. "Where did this fog come from it is nearly noon!!" A dark figure appeared behind the Forbidden and struck the gundam with it's hand. Gado looked back and saw nothing. "That is an interesting trick kid." Then the Black Hole appeared in front of him. "THERE YOU ARE!!!!" Gado quickly fires a few shots at the Black Hole but they go through. As quickly as the Black Hole appeared it disappeared again. Gado was looking around with a slight look of fear. "How did those shots go through I know i hit him..." "What's the matter Gado... are you afraid... afraid of the pain I am fixing to give..." said Red with his voice slightly staticy. The Black Hole burst out of the building that was next to Gado striking him as it ran by and disappeared. "You coward face me." yelled Gado in anger. The Black Hole form behind struck the Forbidden's Head denting it slightly. Gado turned around and tried to fire at him with his rail gun. This time it nearly hit Red in the cockpit. Luckily he went into phase shift right before the shot hit. The huge projectile passed right by Red. "That was close!" Gado fired another shot at the shoulder of the Black hole and it hit. "SHIT! No that was the place where the phase is at." Red said in horror," Please tell me the cloak works." Red turned invisible and started to run. The fog lifted and the sun shined unfortunately for Red his camo wasn't as affective during this time. Gado fired a rail gun shot at the center of the distortion but because of the distance it hit the cloaking device. Now the Black Hole was fully visible. Gado slowly approached Red.

The next day-"Sir! We have put the your modification is loaded into place!" said a mechanic as he rushed into Red's office. Red exclaimed, "Excellent! I will run a full systems diognostic in a few minutes." The mechanic started to leave the room, "Oh and good work Anderson." "Thank you sir!" The Mech. left the room and right after Red left and stood in front of the Black Hole it's shoulder plate with a ghostly insignia. "It is time to see what you are truely made of Black Hole. A line fell from the cockpit of the pitch black gundam and Red grabbed on to it and rode it up. Then, he quickly jumped into the cockpit and ran the Final Diagnostic for the entire system. A male voice rang out, "Diognastic Complete! All systemes operational! Preparing Nerve connecters." The rubber-like substance rolled over Red's body and the Black Hole's arm twiched signifing that the nerve connection was complete. Then Red move the leg and all the other parts to make sure everything was in working order. The he made his way out of his hanger and towards the City Arena that was degsignated for this fight. "This is a perfect place to try out the Ghost Gundam program. He he he... Gado won't even know what hit him."

[COLOR=DarkRed]Adam was walking around the city until he noticed a large dome shaped building. After seeing it was a battle arena Adam decided to go in and watch some fights. Afrer a while of watch a few sparing fights Nega noticed a young man and a young woman talking a few meters away. "Master... There is someone over there maybe we should maybe litsen to what they are talking about." said Nega in a inquisative voice. "Good idea, Maybe they have some useful info. But we need to be quiet. We don't know what their allegince is." replied Adam. "Thank you, Master Deathsye." The quietly ran over to a wall that was around the corner. "I've decided to take you somewhere. It's a place called Saware and I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Perhaps you'll fit right in." the young woman said, smiling. White wondered was Saware was. "Is that like... a clan or guild or something?" he sat down on a nearby bench and scratched his Gomamon's ear while he waited for an answer. "Well... you'll see. I don't want to ruin it for you." "Saware? Where is that?" thought Adam. Then the two took off out of the building. Then Nega spoke up, "I remember that Saware was where a big battle between the Good player versus the Bad Players. The bad players won." "How do you know that?" asked Adam. "I overheard several player talking about it. Apperently the Good Player nearly won until the leader of the evil side, Mekratrimon, turned it around." replied Nega. Adam sat down and thought for a while periododicly making sure Nega hadn't wondered off. Of course, Nega never did anything without his consent. Fianlly Adam let out a loud laugh and said, "It appears this Mekratrimon is exactly who we need to be allied with." said Adam in a confident voice. "Master, Mekratrimon is a Mega Digimon what make you so sure she will even concider using us." asked Nega causiously. "Well, I don't know that she will... but if we can get allied with her then you will get strong. Then when you reach Mega... we take what is ours." Adam started laughing manilicly. Nega didn't say it but he was worried but he didn't question Adam. Then Adam stood up and started to exit the building then headed towards the city limits.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=DarkRed]Adam and Nega walk out of the forest. As soon as they got out of the woods Adam started walking toward Serenity City. "Master Deathsye where are we going?" asked Nega. "We are going to get you stronger Nega... Then none of the good players are going to stop us." "Master why are you hellbent on destroying the good players?" "That Dobermon... are Vaccine type digimon on the digidex it says they are loyal and honorable... But when I last played they killed your predecessor Augumon. If they are good... then I would rather be evil. The good players are exactly the same. They think they are so superior to the evil all be cause they are good. I believe it is time for us to take them down a notch.' "I see... so if the light is my Master's enemy...," Nega said with a intense look on his face." then the light is also my enemy." "Look there is the city of Serenity. Where some of the good players hangout. We won't engage unless they bother us. They would be on us like the black on your body. Maybe we can also get supplies here too." Adam and Nega entered the city, which as soon as they entered the good players eyes turned to them. They paid the players no attention. They started to browse though the shop. Some of the good players were watching Adam and Nega like hawks. They watched closely at the two suspecting they may try something. Adam could feel their eyes piercing his back. He was wondering weather any of them would attack. Then, one lone boy for the crowd finally spoke up, "Why are you here? You should get out while you have a chance! Flamon Get him!? yelled the player. The Flamon used the Attack ?Baby Salamander? Nega easly dodged the attack and fired back with Pepper Breath. The attack hit Flamon knocking him to the ground damaged. ?Flamon! Let?s see if you can take a Champion! Digivolve!? The kid hit the Digivolution button and Flamon digivolved into Agnimon. ?Let?s see you take this one!? said Agnimon. Adam then said calmly, ?Fool.... Do you honestly think someone like you can stop me and my Digimon... Nega show this punk what a REAL Champion looks like.? Nega then digivolved into Blackgreymon. ?NOVA BLAST!? Nega fired right at Agnimon however, Agnimon quickly jumped out of the way and used the Salamander Break attack. The attack hit Nega directly staggering him nearly falling down. ?Nega! You know what to do!? yelled Adam. Nega nodded his head, ?Grey Tooth!? He lunged for Agnimon and caught him in his mouth, Agnimon was trying to hold Nega?s mouth open. ?I can?t hold it much longer! Ahhh!? yelled Agnimon. Then, he devolved into Flamon and Nega?s mouth closed. ?Flamon!!!!!!? yelled the other player. ?Nega....? said Adam. Nega opened his mouth and Flamon was out cold inside his mouth. Nega then spit him out. The kid ran over to his partner and looked at Adam with hate filled eyes. ?There is a reason why I spared you... you will tell everyone what has transpired here today...? then he turned to the crowd surrounding him, ?and everyone else remember my name Deathsye.... and he...? pointing toward Nega, ?is Nega, soon to be the most power entity in this world. See you later chumps.? After Adam finished his speech he and Nega walks slowly through the crowd and headed to the Temple District.[/COLOR] ----------------------------------------- OCC- Sorry if the Quality isn't good i am getting used to the style of writing.

Ok This is how we do the P vs P match we will do a Poll who ever wins the poll wins the match the other loses. Me and Sabizi thought this would be a good idea so the First PVP Poll is on the RP now. GET TO VOTING!!!!!!!!!!!!

OCC- Sorry i havent posted in a while i have had finals in High school so i haven't had a lot of time. And since Krono hasn't posted yet i will use him. Feel free to put him in a match. ---------------------------------------------- "Finally... It is finished. My ultimate upgrade.... Alright team!" Red yelled. His team fell into line. "I want this thing attached by tomorrow! I have the match verus the Quad Gundam. I want EVERYTHING opperational!" One of his team spoke up, "Sir! We can't do it. It would take all night." Red walked over to the Engineer and stared directly into his eyes. "I don't care if it take until up to the match you will get this done or you sir are out of a Job. AM I CLEAR!" said Red in a harsh voice. "Yes Sir!" They all yelled. Red went back into the back room. He started to watch the tape of the Quad Gundams matches. He studied them and finally he stopped the tape. "This will be difficult everytime he has gone for the cockpit. I need to make sure he doesn't hit me with the Buster Cannon. But, " He started to laugh hard," He won't even see me coming Until it is too late. HA HA HA HA!"

Hi, This is my first foray into the Art Studio so I hope I do good :animeswea It is kinda big also. This Drawing is infact my first drawing take a look and tell me what you think. [COLOR=Orange][URL=http://s69.photobucket.com/albums/i65/Deathsye2/?action=view¤t=Shu.jpg][U][COLOR=DarkOrange]Shu-The Blind Knight[/COLOR][/U][/URL][/COLOR] I hope you like it I don't have a scanner right now so i can't post more recent Drawings. But I will try. These are figures i did in paint for you to have a grasp of what my characters look like.

"Knight! Come on buddy YOU CAN DO THIS!" Screamed Hiro when Knight was attacking himself. Knight could hear Hiro but because of his confusion he couldn't under stand him. "KNIGHT DO YOU REMEMBER BEFORE WE WERE SNAG'UM!" yelled Hiro. Knight started to understand the words. "REMEMBER HOW YOU WERE ALWAYS HUNGRY. HOW YOU WERE ALWAYS COLD." Knight snapped out of the confusion and quickly jumped back into the battle. "Now Knight show this person what we can do!" Knight's firey eyes started to glow. Then he was covered in a bright light. "Are you... evolving?" asked Hiro. When the light cleared a different Pokemon was standing in front of Hiro it was a Pupitar. "Knight...." Knight looked back and looked directly at Hiro. "Right! I get it!" Sparkle saw the transformation a scoffed at it. "So what if your Knight evolved it still won't be enough." Sparlke told shocker to use Fire spin on Knight. "Fire wont work on Knight but Knight Use Rapid Spin!" The attack when around Knight in a tornado motion. Then Knight stopped spinning. Unfortunately, Shocker used areial Ace to a knock Knight out. "Knight... Return."

"KNIGHT!!!" yelled Hiro as Knight was hit by the shadow beam. Knight slowly got up. "Are you alright?" asked Hiro. Knight nodded. He looked towards Shocker with that flame in his eyes flareing higher. "Ari?" said Hiro. She was standing back watching the battle. "I guess this one is on my own. CINDER!!!!!" Cinder quickly jumped in to the acton with a ember attack on Shocker. Shocker barely dodging the attack got blindsided by Knight's Rollout. " This is not going to be like last time..."

"That is fine by me... Cinder you have to sit this one out. " said Hiro. Cinder looked dissapointed at Hiro. "I'm sorry but Knight is more suited to this battle. If there was another way I would use you but..." he explained. Cinder understood and stood on the side lines. "Alright Knight your up! For your first attack use Roll out!" Knight rolled up in to a little ball and rolled quickly towards Raksha.

"The way I see it," Hiro started to say, " if you help me with my mission you would get in good with the Chief. If you help me I will put in a good word in. And I get that 20,000 he offered and maybe I won't be fired." When he finished saying that there was a rustle in the bushes Riku and the others walked out of the woods in front of Hiro and Ari. "Well... Hello Hello." Riku saw Hiro and Ari, " Isn't that the guy that attacked me?" asked Riku. "I believe so." replied Sparkle. Knight and Cinder quickly jumped into a guarded stance. They couldn't wait to take revenge for what Sparkle did to them. "Spoink! Spoink! Spoink!" yelled the Spoink that was acomannying them. "So this is the person that stole your golden pearl... You give the pearl back." Sparkle said quickly. " Looks like our paths were ment to be. Cinder... Knight time to take what is ours." Kinght had an unuasl flare in his eyes. He had never knew defeat as Sparkle handed out. He was ready to fight. Cinder was remembering how he lost in the last battle. He had always been the weakest link in the team, But today that would change. All three quickly prepared for the melee that would insue.

Adam awoke with a startled look on his face. Another nightmare about Augumon, his digimon partner. He had been playing Digimon a week when his partner was deleted by a Dobermon. Adam still hasn't recovered from the ordeal. " It was another dream..." He looked at his Digivice on his dresser. " I guess i will have to go back sometime. But this time will be different. I have to be stronger." He got out of bed and grabbed his Digivice, put some clothes on and walked out of his apartment complex. When Adam arrived at the VR Facility he entered the doors and saw that the woman that was there when he registered was not at the desk. The man behind the desk asked," How way I help you?" Adam replied, " I need a VR unit for Digimon, Please" "Right. Your name is...?" "My name is Adam Chastian. I came here last week." The man look down at the computer, " Right. What do you want your new partner to be?" Adam replied, "BlackAugumon and here is the evolution line" Handed the man a piece of paper. "Right. Room 3 Unit 4. Have a nice day." "Yeah you to." Adam got to the specified room he opened the door and walked over to the unit he would be useing. He took a long deep breathe. "Here I go." He climbed in to the unit and laid down. He put his black digivice in to the slot." His consciousness was jerked from the world of reality and into the Virtal World known as Digimon. [COLOR=DarkRed] Adam appeared in Serenity the place he and Augumon had first met. He looked aroung quickly looking for his new partner. He was nowhere in sight. He looked at his digivice and saw that BlackAugumon was in the forest. "The forest... that is where I lost Augumon. I can't lose him to." He ran towards the forest. Adam had just entered in the forest where he had lost Augumon. "Why does he have to appear here?" he asked him as He was looking around when there was a russle in the bushes next to him. "Come on out." A black colored Augumon walked out of the bushes and made his way towards Adam. "I guess your my new partner." The Augumon didn't respond. "Can you talk?" He remained silent. "I guess not." said Adam. " I won't speak unless you wish me to Master." said BlackAugumon. "Master? You don't need to call me that." "Yes, I do. For you are the one I serve. Loyally and unquestionably" "I guess I can't stop you. I think I will call you Nega. What do you think?" "What ever you wish... Master Deathsye." "Then that's your name. I have to admit I do like being called Master. Come on Nega." "Yes." Adam and Nega start walking out of the woods when a Dobermon came running at them. "No. This is the same Dobermon that killed Augumon..." said Adam. The Dobermon closed in on them. "I guess you didn't learn your lesson the last time boy." said the the Dobermon. "I have to do something..." Adam looked down and saw a sharp stick lying on the ground. He quickly picked it up. "What do you expect that to do to us? I am a Champion level you can't beat me with a stick!" he said with a howl. " I guess you don't see the point." said Adam. "Nega." "Yes master. Pepper Breathe!" The attack just glanced off of the Dobermon. "That wont do anything. That's how your other partner died." Adam gripped the stick tightly nearly breaking it. "Nega! Time to Digivolve!" he yelled at the top of his voice. "Oh, I am really scared now." Said the Dobermon with a mocking tone. Then Nega evolved into BlackGreymon. "Nova Blast!" said Nega. A fireball welled up in Nega's mouth. Then, the fireball went flying towards the Dobermon. The dog digimon quickly dodged the attack and lunged at Nega, latching on to his arm. Nega roared in pain. He then threw the Dobermon off of his arm it bleeding a little. "Nova Blast! " The fireball launched at him again and again he dodged the attack. Adam was looking at the battle worried. "This isn't good. Nega is too slow to hit the Dobermon." He quickly looked around at the surrounding tree until he saw there was a huge tree behind the Dobermon. "Nega! Aim for the tree!" Adam yelled. Nega looked at his master confused ,but he quickly knew what he was talking about. "NOVA BLAST!" The attack went past the Dobermon and struck the tree making it fall. " Are you an idiot you missed!" yelled the Dobermon. "Oh, really look behind you." said Nega. He looked behind him and the tree was right on top of him. The tree fell with a huge crash on top of him. He was pinned under the tree heavyly damaged. Adam walked over to the Dobermon and said, "This is for my friend." He stabbed the sharp end of the stick into the torso of the Dobermon. It exploded into data and Nega devolved and aborpted the data. "Master?" Adam didn't say anything. He hadn't known his master long ,but he knew as of right now not to push the issue. Adam was silent for a longtime. Then Nega finally spoke up, "We need to get going Master. We have much to do." Adam looked at Nega with possessed looking eyes. Slowly he began laughing at the top of his lungs. " This is just the beginning... now this entire world will feel my pain." said Adam. "Master Adam..." "No. Call me Master Deathsye I like that name better. " Something had awoken inside Adam. Something that he has never felt. A unquenchable bloodlust. They they quickly exited the forest and headed towards Serenity.[/COLOR] -------------------------------- OCC- so how is it for my first post?

[COLOR=SeaGreen]" Nor will you ever darken this world again Marik. You and you machinations end here!"[/COLOR] said The Keeper. Marik laughed, "[COLOR=DarkRed] Have you forgot the last time we fought? Hmp. You never stood a chance against my power. You were always weak Magi(Ma-Jy). You were one of the lowest on the Pharaoh?s court. You were least then nothing to the rest of us." [/COLOR] said Marik. Magi looked down at the ground. He knew this to be true. He was but a mere ant compared to Marik. "[COLOR=SeaGreen] Marik... I have no idea why the Pharaoh chose me to guard the Sword and Rod.... he must have saw something in me that no one else could... I can't betray his trust. And now I will not betray these young people because I am weak.... I will never let you hurt anyone ever again!" [/COLOR] said Magi. ----------------------------------- OCC- I decided to give the keeper and name. and i hope this isn't messing up any ones plans.

[quote name='Sazabi']It depends on how you post. Everyone has different writing styles. Some add more info and more detail but it takes longe. People enjoy those more. Some people whp do script and don't seperate key events tend to kill forums. Posting length also effects things[/quote] I do admit I write stories in script form however one story that I wrote that was probably my best and most liked called Hunters was written in script form. I have tried a lot of times to write in the regular style but it usually goes wrong somewhere for ex. when I was known as Vlade Rayne one story I wrote was written in regular form the story bombed. I don't know if it was my inexpedience but then I realized that I am more descriptive in Script form then in regular. Hunters was liked by friends and people I didn't know. Because of this I write in script form. I guess it is time to practice with the regular style. Sorry for the off topic rant i just want folks to know how i felt.

This is a Thread to help my make a better RPG. Since this is my first RP i would appreciate any Comment you have so I will not make the same mistakes in the future. And if you want to talk about what is going on in the Thread RPG PM me or Write here. Thank you. This was actually an experiment to see if any one would join the RP because my posting is aparently the mark of death for some forums. I hope this will break the curse. :animedepr

Name: Adamu Chastian Age: 18(new) Gender:Male Username: Deathsye Appearance: He has Red hair.Navy blue eyes . Wears a black hoodie with a red stripe going around it and has red pants and sneakers. Partner Digimon: Black Agumon Digivolutions: BlackGreymon>BlackMetalGreymon>Blackwargreymon.

Red was talking on his cell phone while working on his 'Project' "So my next match is against... Neo-..... Brazil. And he is fast eh? Ok I will be out there in a few i got to work on something." He hung up and put down his tools. "Fast means he is small framed and probly has weak armor. Now would be a good time to use The Enforcer." His team was in the hanger goofing off then Red came in. "Guys! Load the Enforcer Armor on the Black Hole!" The Mechanics worked fast the loaded on the Heavy Armor and the Shotgun on the waste. "Good job you did that in Record time. Guys..." Red started to get in to the cockpit, "wish me luck!" "Good luck Chief" said one of them. Red gave them a thumbs up but in reality this was the first real test of the enforcer armor. Red was concerned that he may not move at all because of the armor on such a small frame. "This is no time to question my engineering skills." His Cockpit fired up and the nerve censors came on line. He tried to move slowly he steped forward. When he got outside of the Hanger. He quickened his pace. "I can move fine but my speed is cut by at least half." He continued to the Ring arena that was surrounded by water. " This isn't good with all this weight i would sink like a stone." The Brazilian Gundam known as the Python Gundam was in front of The Black Hole Enforcer. "Ah. So you are my opponenet," Said the pilot", that was an impressive victory over the French Gundam yesterday. But it will take more then that to stop me." "I wouldn't want this to be to easy." The Brazilian pilot laughed when the time went down the Python attack Black Hole with blinding speed quickly wrapping around the Enforcer. "Are you feeling the pressure yet?" Red laughed, "Pressure more like a damn massage." The enforcer broke lose and whipped out his beam saber. "This is going to be fun." said the other pilot. The Python Gundam repeatly attacked the Black Hole knocking him back a little each time. Then finally the Black Hole cut the right arm of the Python gundam. This phased him a little but the attack still landed. He was already against the edge this strike sent him over and he fell in to the water the heavyness of the armor weighing him down. On the ring Python Gundam was looking at where Black Hole fell off. After the bubbles stopped he thought he had won. As he raised his hand in victory Black Hole shot out of the water with Shotgun in hand the armor was jettesend. Black Hole stood there in front of Python Gundam with the gun pointed towards him. "Good bye!" He fire all 8 rounds into the Python Gundams body missing the cockpit. The Python Gundam fell then Black Hole put the shotgun on his shoulder a raised his hands in victory. The crowd cheered but a sole bystander was watching with hate filled eyes. Then Red headed back to the hangers to complete his masterpiece.

[COLOR=SeaGreen]"MARIK!!!"[/COLOR] yelled The Keeper as he ran into the room where Star and the others were. "Adamu you got out of the prism?" asked Alex. "[COLOR=SeaGreen]No his soul is still inside, I am the Keeper of the Millienium Sword and Rod. Marik I will seal you away for good. And in doing so will free the boy from your prison of souls." [/COLOR] Marik grined a foul smile. "So you got out of my Soul Prism. No matter you will go back soon enough." [COLOR=SeaGreen]"Not this time Marik." [/COLOR] The other were confused.

"[COLOR=SeaGreen]What foul will would attack this place..." [/COLOR] The keeper wondered. "[COLOR=SeaGreen]how can the Prism still be intact[/COLOR]." The Keeper paced. Back and forth talking whispering. "What are you whispering about?" asked Toshiro. "I[COLOR=SeaGreen] was wishing the Pharoah was here. He would know exactly what to do.[/COLOR]" he replied. Then suddenly it hit him,"[COLOR=SeaGreen] Marik! He has to be on this island! It all makes sense! The one known as "Alex" was controlled by Marik himself! How could I be so stupid...[/COLOR]" The Keeper punched the wall. "[COLOR=SeaGreen]Where ever Marik is is where we will find a way to free Adamu." The Keeper and Toshiro took off for the Abandoned Dorms.[/COLOR]

Adamu was still wandering the darkness of the Soul Prism. He was losing hope. " I am never going to get out of this... Toshiro...Ceres...Star... I have been a fool to think I could take on Alex." Meanwhile in the Academy one of the last shadow riders go down. "This was almost too easy." Said Toshiro. "[COLOR=SeaGreen]Maybe... but don't short change your self."[/COLOR] replied The Keeper. Inside the Prism " I should just except that i will never get out of here." Adamu fell to his knees. In the Academy, "[COLOR=SeaGreen]This is bad..." [/COLOR] said The Keeper. "What?" asked Toshiro. "I can hardly feel Adamu anymore I think he is giving up." "He is stronger then that! I know it! Can't you do something!" "[COLOR=SeaGreen]No... I can't. The Prism that has sealed Adamu should have dissipated when Alex was defeated. But it hasn't there must be something more going on here then I know[/COLOR]."

The Keeper turns to the other Shadow Rider, "You go!" he said in a booming voice. The Shadow Rider drew a card. "You won't take me down as easy! I turn my face down monster face up! and my Man Eater Bug destroys your Legendary Fisherman. and I summon Undead Knight!" he said with a smug smile. "[COLOR=SeaGreen]You forgot my face down trap... Trap Hole! Which destroys your Undead Knight! Since you ended your turn! I play Premature Burial! Which brings back my Fisherman then i place another card face down and then I Attack your Man Eater! That brings your Life Points down to 2300! TOSHIRO FINISH HIM OFF![/COLOR]