Writing Next to Nothing

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] First of all, I would like to say this poem means very much to me, and for the first time, I would rather no criticism on this one. Okay? Okay.


[B]Next to Nothing[/B]


[i] You barely even know,
yet you say you care.
You haven't even seen me,
but you're always there.

You never question what I say,
or tell me what to think.
You suprise me in so many ways,
it's hard for me to speak.

You never tell me lies,
and I somehow fell to trust you.
You seem to know what I'm really saying,
even if I told you not to.

You can always read my thoughts,
and know when something's wrong.
And yet you never pressure me,
but I know you're for the long...

Well, I guess this is getting sappy,
and I guess little weird,
maybe even a little gross...
but I just wanna say thanks.

What you may say
might be little to you,
but next to nothing
it's pretty much everything.[/i][/color][/size]

[Corey]

A very good poem Evelyn. :)

[Deedlit]

[color=009966]That's a great poem, Mist. ^_~ Not surprising though since you're one of the best poets on here. ^_-[/color]

[Boo]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DarkOrderKnight [/i]
[B]A very good poem Evelyn. :) [/B][/QUOTE]

You said it how it is DoK

[Dan L]

That was great. There's a very specific reason why I think that poem is.. well.. [i]brilliant[/i], and really touching.. but I won't go into it ^^. I'll just stick with "great poem" ;)

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] Deed...for the [i]last[/i] time, I'm just like any other poet, kk?

Thanks DEM. I'm far from brilliant, but I'll take the praise. ^^

D_A, thanks. ^_~[/color][/size]

[Dan L]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Mist [/i]
[B][color=crimson][size=1] Thanks DEM. I'm far from brilliant, but I'll take the praise. ^^[/color][/size] [/B][/QUOTE]

Brilliance is a very subjective thing. I loved the poem... someone else might hate it. I thought it was brilliant ;)

[spike speigel]

I agree with Deus ex Machina. The poem was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] Thanks, SS. I appreciate the praise.[/color][/size]

[RicoTranzrig]

[color=darkblue]Good poetry always comes from the heart :D That person must me a lot to you.[/color]

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] Yup; he's family! ^^[/color][/size]

[BearsBaby635]

[color=blue] It's SOOO cool, Mist! I love it! ^_^ you keep it up.[/color]

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] *salutes*

Will do, captain![/color][/size]

[Mitch]

[color=red] I liked it all except the last stanza. The last stanza seemed a little drawn out, but all in all, I liked it. It's very thought trodding. Oh, and it's also nice to finally see you back. I hope your moving and all went well.[/color]

[Mist]

[color=crimson][size=1] Oh, I'm not back. I only have internet access for a coupld of more hours before I dissappear into thin air again. Actually, I liked the last stanza. I had to have something out of order; I don't like the perfectly in-tuned poetry that a lot of Otaku members prefer. Perfection drives me nuts.[/color][/size]

[::Ex-Soldier::]

I'm not a very good poet, so I would never know if it was a great poem or not...but I liked it.

Nice effort.

[Juu]

[color=deeppink] [size=1]Was this one of the poems you were telling me about? ^^;
Or... were they something else? Anyway, graet as usual Evelyn! You need to post more of your poetry here!! Get back here!! ><;;[/color] [/size]