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Guard: One...last...time...Who, and when next?

AJ: (mumbles: ) I don't ...know...

Guard: You worthless wretches...

[i]Shocks him[/i]

Guard: If you don't know anything, then what the hell were you doing with the rest of them outside? HUH?!

[i]Shocks him again[/i]

AJ: Free..dom...we will give them freedom..

Guard: There you go again, chattin up some BS..YOU are NOT one of US..your mother was a TRAITOR...you are NOT a human

AJ: I am! *splutters blood*

Guard: HEY! Take this one to the infirmary, and tell 'em to root out his tail! :naughty: :demon: [/b]
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The patrolling guard walks past Craig and Neil's cell. He notices Craig, who is sleeping soundly, has still got his tail. The guard pulls out his radio.

Guard: Boss, we got a monkey in cell 24, over.

Boss: Get backup, then go in and pull it off, over.

Guard: Roger, over and out.

The guard calls over 4 other patrolling guards. They go in, 2 restrain Neil, and 2 restrain Craig, while the other yanks out his tail! Craig awakes with a jolt!

Craig: WTF!

Guard: Silence!

The guard shoots a tranquiliser into Craigs neck, Craig falls instantly to sleep.

Guard: Our work is done here. Move out.
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DAMNIT!!!! I GO AWAY FOR ONE WEEKEND AND PLAY FFVIII THAT I GOT THIS WEEKEND, AND YOU ALL MAKE A MESS OUTTA ME! I HAVE A TAIL, I'M A GUY, I'M 13, AND I'VE BEEN HERE MY WHOLE LIFE! OK, I'm done!
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*After a bit, Craig wakes up*
Craig: You ok?
Neil: Am [i]I[/i] ok? You're the one they ripped off!
Craig: True...But why didn't they get your's?
Neil: I can hide it very easily!
Craig: Yeah, but how in your sleep?
Neil: When you've been here for 13 years, then we'll talk...
'Sides, I'm gettin tired of this! GUARD!
Guard Biggs(Yes, from FFVIII, only demoted even more): What, you stupid tailess monkey? Hahaha...
Neil: *scowles* I want to speak to the Commander!
Biggs: HAHAHAHA!!! What? You wanna take a chance at ripping his throat out again?
Neil: No...I wanna make a deal.
Biggs: Really...Well, any informatin you could possibly have, we already ha---
Neil: I know when the next entire cellbreak'll be!
Biggs: :eek: *Opens door and drags Neil to the Commander...*
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Hey ss trunks you forgot to include me in the post, im in the cell with neil and craig also, so i uess they didnt rip my tail out either, you know why? they tried to look for it but it was jammed up my a**! hehehe.

Boy Pyro munkie sure does love beating the crap out of us, hey can you just get to the point and make hizoka and warlock find us so we can get to the good part of the story, people will end up leaving this. oh, and i think that siren was trying to say that she got outside of her cell and an unknown man grabbed her and said dont look at the moon. i dont know why though.lol
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[SIZE=1][i]Neil and Guard Biggs(?, lol) walk to the commander..[/i]

Guard Biggs: "So how much do you think you know?"

Neil: "I [i]know[/i] more than you know I'm sure.."

Guard Biggs: "Hrmm.. I'm sure the Commander will enjoy the info.."

[i]They walk for a bit more out across the wasteland to the Commanders private HQ when suddenly Neil forcefully disappears[/i]

Guard Biggs: "Wha..?"

[i]Guard Biggs is suddenly hit hard in the face from something he can't see...[/i]

Guard Biggs: "What the f...!?!?! Let's see which f....er I get to kill now..."

[i]Biggs flips a lense over his eye allowing him to see anything that is invisible..[/i]

Guard Biggs: "Now where are you..."

[i]Biggs, armed with his strongest weapon, scans around him.. as he comes to what was behind him he suddenly sees a whirling ball of energy heading straight for him![/i]

Guard Biggs: "Holy crap!!!"

[i]Before Biggs can react the energy smashes into knocking him back and exploding, but causing minor damage[/i]

Guard Biggs: "Why those little!!!"

[i]Biggs is hit a fw times more and then slowly gets up from the ground[/i]

Guard Biggs: "There is [i]definitley[/i] more than one of them!"

[i]Biggs suddenly feels a stinging pain in his chest and looks down to see blood dripping from something covered in blood that resembles a hand.. Biggs drops to the ground.. dead.... Hizoku and Warlock appear out of nowhere, Hizoku holding Neil by the throat...[/i]

Warlock: "That took some work.."

Hizoku: "Yeah.. but on to bigger matters.."

[i]Hizoku looks at Neil and punches him in the face kncoking him to the ground and then jumps onto his chest[/i]

Hizoku: "What were you going to tell them!!!" :flaming:

Neil: *cough!* "I wasn't going to tell them anything!"

Hizoku: "You lie!!"

Neil: "What do [i]I[/i] know!?!?"

Warlock: "Let him go.. he couldn't know anything.. we've never met him.."

[i]Hizoku looks down at Neil angrily and then gets up off him. Neil stands up and brushes the dirt off him.[/i]

Hizoku: "What's your name?"

Neil: "Neil. You?"

Warlock: "Warlock."

Hizoku: "Hizoku... do you know where the others are?"

Neil: "..Yes, I do."

Hizoku: "Good. Take us there."

Neil: "And you won't kill me?"

Hizoku: "Not if you don't give me a reason to."

Neil: "Heh.. Ok, follow me."

[i]Neil leads Warlock and Hizoku to the prisoner compound[/i][/SIZE]
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*As the three warriors run along the corridors, they hear footsteps.*
Neil: *Whispers* HIDE!
*Neil turns around to see Hizoku and Warlock have disappeard!*
Neil: WHERE THE FU*K ARE THEY?!
Guard: You heard 'bout the slight breakout?
Guard2: Who hasn't? I heard it was that Sayian kid again who started it. Blasted Sherz to kingdom-come.
Guard: You mean A5G790?
Guard: Idiot...yes Neil!
Guard2: Whateva...Let's get somethin to eat!
Guard: I'll just get a *NAME FOR ACHOLHALIC BEVERAGE*
*The two guards walk away*
Neil: Now.......where did they go?
*Warlock smacks Neil on the back*
Warlock: Hey, let's go!
Neil: GODDAMNIT!!! That friggin hurt!
Warlock: LET'S JUST GO, ALREADY!
Neil: Fine...
*The three fighters rush off towards the cells...*
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Craig looks down the cell, and sees Neil, followed by one person that he's never seen before, and the man he recognises that fell into his cell.

Craig: Hey Neil, whats going on?

Neil: Never mind that, lets get you out of here!

Craig: Allow me.

Craig grips the bars, and after a some straining and a lot of forrce, he manages to pull the bars apart, and slips out.

Hizoku: Why did you come here first?

Neil: Because I trust Craig the most. He's very strong and knows most of the people in here.

Warlock: Okay, lets get to work.
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Neil: Wait...don't kill 'um...yet. If their awake when you kill 'um, they'll scream and shi.t. Sooo...
*Neil walks up to the guard and punches him in the neck, causing him to pass out in a few more seconds. The other guard is basically stunned and is shaking where he stands. His taser is on the ground.*
Neil: Well, it looks like payback. *Neil picks up the taser and covers the guards mouth.* I wonder how strong these things are...
*Neil begins shocking the guard, but the effect is very small. Neil finds a dial, and turns it. The taser's power increases, and the guard begins to quake with pain. After a few minutes, the guard passes out.*
Neil: Ok, now you can kill 'um. Hey, where's Kaiyu?
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[SIZE=1][i]Kaiyu comes around the corner of the cell.[/i]

Kaiyu: "I'm right here. I just wanted to be sure the coast was clear.."

[i]Hizoku comes back from wripping off the guards heads..[/i]

Neil: ":eek: That's a little much don't you think?"

Craig: "Ok, now that we're out what do we do?"

Hizoku: "There are still others, we need to get them too.."

Craig: "Ok, umm.. oh, there's a girl over in a different compound, she could be useful."

Warlock: "How long will it take us to get there?"

Craig: "Umm.. 15 minutes or so."

Hizoku: "What are we going to pass by?"

Craig: "The armory."

Hizoku: "Crap."

Kaiyu: "What?"

Warlock: "That place is guarded like a fortress."

Hizoku: "It [i]is[/i] a fortress.... how long if we go around it?"

Craig: "Ummm.. 30 minutes or so."

Neil: "That's quite some time."

Hizoku: "Ya but it's the safest way. Let's go."

[i]Hizoku and the others head out of the compound and head to the other prisoner compound.[/i][/SIZE]
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Neil: *huffin and puffin* Shouldn't we.........just go.....by the.....Armory? Can't.....you two just.....go invisible?
Craig: Good point, but you're forgettin somthin'
Neil: What?
Kaiyu: The energy detecters....
Forte: He's right.
Neil: Oh.........Well, can't we just blast 'um?
Warlock: And have every guard in this place on our as.ses? No thanks!
Neil: This is gonna take too long if we don't!
Hizoku: Why don't you just hush?
Neil: But!!!
Hizoku: Shush! This is the best COA.
Neil: If you say so...but shouldn't we at least go get so---
*Hizoku looks at Neil with a angry look*
Neil:...............
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forget my other posts i just got out of my cell

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siren snuck around the corner and bashed right into Hizoku

siren: eek!

hizoku grabbs the back of her shirt and slings her into the far wall

siren: what the hell was that for?*tail lashes back and forth*

Hizoku: *sees her tail* you're a saiyan!

siren: well duh...
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[SIZE=1]Craig: "Hizoku, that would be Siren. She's the one we came here for."

Hizoku: "Oh really.."

[i]Hizoku lets go of Siren and she straightens out her clothes..[/i]

Siren: "You came for me?... Alright, what's going on?"

Neil: "We're going to get the hell outta here, that's what' going on."

Siren: "And how do you plan to do that?"

Kaiyu: "This guy seems to have a plan." *gestures toward Hizoku*

Siren: "And who might you be?"

Hizoku: "One that should be respected..."

Warlock: "All we know is that his name's Hizoku."

[i]There is silence for a moment...[/i]

Andrew: "So when are we getting out of here?"

[i]Hizoku snaps out of his concentration looking up..[/i]

Hizoku: "Is there anyone else?"

Craig: "Ummm... I don't know.."
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If there is anyone else please post so I/we know who to find. Thanks. If not, someone continue from there somehow.[/SIZE]
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Craig: AJ!

Hizoku: Wha?

Craig: He's an old friend, and he's in interrogation.

Hizoku: Do you know where it is?

Craig: Yes, it's lightly guarded, but the guards there are strong.

Warlock: Then lets get going.

Craig leads the others off towards the interrogation block.
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[SIZE=1]Hizoku: "Heh, you go ahead and take the compound.. I'm going the next step further when I get out of this place.."

Andrew: "What's more than the compound???"

Warlock: "You couldn't be talking about this planet.. none of us are strong enough to take out a planet."

Hizoku: ":naughty:"

Craig: "You're hiding something."

Hizoku: "You're just now figuring this out? :rolleyes:"

Neil: "How much longer 'til we get to AJ?"

Craig: "Shouldn't be too long now.. but then there's actually getting to him..."[/SIZE]
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As the warriors run along, they hear voices from behind...and ahead.

Neil: Crap! Whatta we do?
Siren: I would normally fight, but..........
Craig: Yeah.
Forte: Same.
Neil: Hizoku? Any ideas?
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It's not much, but it kept this thing alive...I guess.
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Hey guys im sorry ive been gone, got grounded again. well i guess ill start off from where you left off, didnt give me much to start with though but ill do my best!lol



Kaiyu:Siren NOOOOOO!!!! urrrrrr......why do you always have to do this girl......

Kaiyu charges into the midst of the battle and trys to save siren from being pounded by low life guards that get paid minimum wadge and live just to kill.

Kaiyu:I wont let this happen, we saiyans live to fight and i will not be treated like a f**ken lab rat!!!!!!!!!!

Kaiyu knows that he is 10 times weaker than the gaurd but shoots a blast anyways.......the guard turns his face towards the blast and it hits him in the eye causeing him to go blind.

Neil:Whoa Nice shot!!!!!!!

Kaiyu:Holy crap! I know that was cool but NO TIME TO CELEBRATE! Come on SIREN!!!!!!!!!!!! Lets GOOOO!!!!!

Kaiyu grabs siren and pulls her to safety.

Kaiyu: (Looks at siren which is holding by a thread and smiles at her flinching eyes.)Man! You clutz.......

Kaiyu:Hizoku! We cant just stand around waiting for more gaurds! (Kaiyu jumps up and grabs him by the shirt)WHAT DO WE DOOOOOOOOO?????/!!!!!!!!
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Ok i got a little lost oo but from what i know, we just escaped with everyone and we are outside with troops and guards chasing us, i just saved siren as you can see. now that you mention it ss4444 did screw somthin up, i like is avatar though, that was a sweet shot from the show,lol.
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