Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Posted June 19, 2003 Ligthed path guilding your way, sounds like the end to those ones where the dearest thing was taken away. I like it, it's like a chain of poems that make up one big story.
Guest dayday Posted June 20, 2003 Posted June 20, 2003 I wrote this one after I got mad at a few people. It's longer than the rest of them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Look I'm tired of you You mouth off like you control the world You think you can treat me like trash You write my name on a piece of paper But what's that going to do Nothing that's what I have to listen to you when you don't talk You don't even have to wave hello I'm tired of you and your selfish ways Alwasy saying I'm not respectful I answer your question but you don't care I give you an innocent face but it's a stare Just leave me alone by myself Do you know what that means I don't want anyone near me especially you Tears are coming from my eyes Staining my face in all space They don't mean anything to you My tears of anger joy and sorrow Coming down slowly like rain And you know why it's because I'm tired of you
Epsilon Posted June 20, 2003 Posted June 20, 2003 How many people were you mad at? Anyways I love it, too many people think they own the world. Dosen't matter how long they are, just what they mean. Anyways still love it. Keep writing.:D
Guest dayday Posted June 20, 2003 Posted June 20, 2003 Only one person, my teacher. It's a good thing she didn't get too close or she would have been knocked out. Life will end like everything else Space, life, emotion it all does But time it seems to be different It stops when your life ends Then starts when another is born It moves freely like the wind Passing straight through your mind You lose everything and nothing left It all goes by with a blink Stopping and going over and over It needs to stop and stay there Never moving again
Epsilon Posted June 20, 2003 Posted June 20, 2003 ^-^ I like it. Love things that get you thinking. The part about how time stops and starts reminds me of FF8 for PS1. They go into a time warp and yeah...time just stops. It's great.
Guest dayday Posted June 21, 2003 Posted June 21, 2003 You spoiled me, I haven't gotten that far in the game yet. I got this since I am listening to a song that goes almost the same way. I just rearranged the words and put them in a dofferent order. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Do you see him That sick child over there Holding on tight to his mother's hand Crying to be freed I tell him not to worry I have a shoulder you can lean on I'm your friend and I'll be there To catch you when you fall Stop crying out I am here
Epsilon Posted June 21, 2003 Posted June 21, 2003 opps...sorry about that. I didn't mean to spoil the game, it will be looooooooooong game playing time. What song is that? I've never heard of something like that before. Anyways I like the poem, I've never tryed it with song lyrics before.
Guest dayday Posted June 22, 2003 Posted June 22, 2003 It's okay. The second disc is real long anyway. Here's a monster poem. Something I did for school I couple of weeks ago. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The No Understanding Monster Has eyes filled with fear Ears full of worry and A mouth that stills Its arms and legs are covered with sadness Every hair on its head is made of tears It cries by the river everyday Then runs to its cave when the ships come in No one understands it because they can?t see That?s why it?s The Monster of No Understanding
Epsilon Posted June 22, 2003 Posted June 22, 2003 Monster of No Understanding...most be alot of those around the world. I like how in the poem it's so descriptive...(sp?) Anyways it's good because of it being covered in sadness. Wheee! I love it when things are sad, alone, evil, or something that relates to those topics!
Guest dayday Posted June 23, 2003 Posted June 23, 2003 You're crazy. Sad, alone, and evil aren't good things. They're bad. Come on get it straight. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ L-living I-imagine F-fate E-eternal
Epsilon Posted June 23, 2003 Posted June 23, 2003 There's a memeroy and a resone for every poem I write. Most of then are about sadness, lonness, and evil things, I've grown to like them all for that. If you don't get it, I'm a half goth! I don't like happy, and sorry I didn't like that poem all that much. The only thing I liked was the "Fate" part. You must think I'm crazyer now then before.
Guest dayday Posted June 24, 2003 Posted June 24, 2003 Yes, actually I do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The third-eye sees when you cry at night The third-eye knows when you blink away tears The third-eye sees when you?re running away The third-eye sees when you sleep through the memories
Epsilon Posted June 25, 2003 Posted June 25, 2003 Wow, cool. Having a 3rd I would be fun. You could help people that way. Sleep through the memoreies, and seeing you blink back tears. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry about getting on your neavers, and I'll try to write the way I once did. :)
Guest dayday Posted June 26, 2003 Posted June 26, 2003 You need to tell me All of those things About you The things you want to keep secret But I have to know You can't keep this a secret forever If you're not okay I need to know I'll be there for you Whenever it is I will But why didn't you tell me You weren't okay Why didn't you tell me Everything wasn't alright
Epsilon Posted June 26, 2003 Posted June 26, 2003 ^^ I like it, reaching out to some one. That's a great poem. No one can keep a secret forever, it'd be nice if someone could. Still I love the thoughts and feelings to this poem.
Guest dayday Posted June 28, 2003 Posted June 28, 2003 Here's another one from a song. Again you might not know it because it's from the same cd as before. So don't stress out trying to figure where it came from. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The spring of April's gone The leaves have all turned brown The children are all grown up And there's no one around I'm looking over my life And all the mistakes I've made And I'm afraid, afraid This wouldn't really be originial work since I copied the words straight that time. I can't get credit for this since I didn't make it up. If you want the lyrics to this song and the one before it just PM me.
Epsilon Posted June 28, 2003 Posted June 28, 2003 It may be a song, but it still sounds good as a poem to me. In fact I lliked it! Time passes (sp) by and there's nothing you can do about. I think that that band has a perspective on things from what I know of then. I wouldn't really know a whole lot though. Still good poem and... Congrats!
Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 If you look at my sig and at the first song poem you see it's the same thing. I told that I only changed the words a little. Try this one. But again I just copied this one. And again I can't get any credit for it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` When I wake up in the morning love And my heart is filled with pain. The smile I had upon my face is gone Can't see the sunshine from the rain When I think of You Then the world is allright with me.
Epsilon Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 So that's where it came from...*looks at sig*.... Wow, still very nice in poem form. Glade you posted these! You may not have been the one who made them up, but still great. I feel like putting a smiley face. (don't konw why) :)
Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Okay, now back to my own stuff. K. Franklin might be good a words but so am I. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's such a lovely day But why can't I see it The skies are clear But my mind is not I'm tired of not seeing so much Everything is just so cloudy I want to be free Free from all this To do as I please To finally see this lovely day
Epsilon Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Yes dayday's work is back on! To be free and see all around you, and to do as you please. It's great! Thinking too much can cloud your thoughts....or is it the other way around? No matter, I like it because it states one of the many things true.
Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 I think it's the other way around. If you're thinking thoughts then they wouldn't get cloudy because if you think thoughts then you would still be thinking thoughts, or something like that. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Friends are those who love you Those who stay by your side Never leaving you no matter what Staying through the storms Telling you they care Forgiving you for all those things you did And you when they do it too Friends are always there To help you pass through the storm
Epsilon Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Yeah, yoru probly right about that. It's great to have a friend who stays by your side through every thing. That'd be fun, to know some one alaways cares. I like the poem and the toughts behind them. Although I don't really know why, since I tend to keep a certain amount of discentce from people. Still, great poem!
Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 I kinda keep my distance too. The few friends I got I stay away from them sometimes too. Sometimes I go a whole day without saying anything to them. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Help Help me to survive Help me to stay alive Help me keep going Help me to not stop Help me to be free Help me to fight Help me because You're all I've got
Epsilon Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Very nice, the word "help" repeating over again only with a different meaning each time. I like it, because of the concept and all the meanings it could have.
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