Writing Confused

[Mist]

I know not a lot of you will understand this one; even I don't sometimes, but here it is:

Confused

Does the wind whisper truth in my ear,
empty as it was before?
During, after;
as if nothing changed at all.

Back into the metal tube,
I'm wingless; my stars have fallen.
And ever yet,
I emerge into the light.

A new path to the waterfall;
I look over my shoulder
to see my distant face,
and when I turn back around
your laughing echoes around me.

Smother my hope,
yet,
You cling to me
like a thin kinfe,
making me bleed slowly.

Where do butterflies
flutter when it's cold?
Your tireless lies
grow forever old.

I'll always be nervous here,
drowning silently,
helplessly,
in my tears.

OOC: Whew, that was longer than I thought it would be...

[Boo]

Good one! I got it for the biggest part. It was a bit [B]confusing[/B] LOL

[Mist]

Do you mean you got it for the [b]most[/b] part? You're confusing me now...

[Boo]

yes for the [B]Most[/B] part

[Mist]

Oh...okay! I was a bit confused there... Anyway, thanks.

[/v\ajin Vegeta]

thats really good

[vegeta rocker]

very sad yet beautiful, i look forward to more of your writing.

[Empathy]

I really like your writing Mist...its REALLY good...*remembers that she should point that out to her more often* I really like that one....its really good...by the way...how was your trip?

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1]Thanks guys! Meesa appreciate it! I already told you about my trip, Jessi, but I'd be glad to PM you about for the...hmmm...third time, is it? :D[/color][/size]

[Avalon]

Sweet! I liked it very much...although it was quite sad...

[Psychotik]

It's lovely, it;s very mysterious, you really have to delve beneath the surface to understand its true meaning. This is what poems are all about.

Reverence-out>>

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1]Awe, thanks alot, guys. It's not [i]that[/i] good.[/color][/size]

[Juu]

Yeah, mysterious..... But Great!! I can't really write poems..... just make up a short phrase.... LOL, :whoops:

[Mist]

[color=red][size=1] Well, thanks for the compliments guys.[/color][/size]

[The Harlequin]

[font=gothic][color=crimson]Poetry writing is easy. String a bunch of phrases together. Writing [I]good[/I] poetry however is something else. It was that good.[/font][/color]