Nomura

Cool, well, this chapter will be the last of Sasuke's world :animecry: Any questions before I post the next story?EDIT: I guess none...well, here we go! [B]Chapter Ten: End of Pain[/B] I opened my eyes again, and relief struck me to what I saw. ?Sasuke...Sa...?said a distant voice. Sakura?s voice. She...was...[I]alive?[/I] ?Where-Where am I?? I choked out. I looked around, this un-familiar place. But I noticed...It was familiar. It was the bridge that Tazuna was building. In the distance, Zabuza and Kakashi were talking. Naruto wasn?t anywhere to be seen. Kakashi?s fist went through Haku?s chest, as he suddenly appeared in front of Zabuza. So, Naruto didn?t kill Haku...Kakashi did. Then, was that all a dream? Zabuza soon, brought up tears of sadness, and stunned by HAku?s death, he plundered himself into a crowd of Gato?s men, killing many of them, including Gato. [I]We buried Haku beside Zabuza afterwards. [/I] We finally arrived back in Konahagakure. I was restless, and tired. I went back to my apartment, and got some sleep. The next day, I went to the woods to train. The lush green trees shone in the sunlight, and many birds were feeding on seeds and other plants around the ground. I stepped forward, and a large gang of black birds flew into the air. I remembered my dream, and froze. I suddenly hid behind a tree. ?Who?s there?? I called out. I looked out from behind the tree, with my kunai ready. Akamaru barked at me, as we looked each other in the eyes. Kiba stepped behind Akamaru, to see what the problem was. ?Oh, It?s just you,? I muttered, putting my kunai back in my back pack. I turned and walked away from Kiba, not looking back. I walked into the town, to get a bite to eat. A fruit merchant stand stood at the end of the town. I grabbed some grapes, and slapped some money onto the counter of the stand. I turned around to see the merchant one more time. The merchant was wearing a traveler?s hat, with rugged red clothes. His scarred face and blue hair, put off a glow, especially with his toothy smile. ?Hey, you...Have something you might think...is cool,? He said quietly. I approached slowly to him. He looked familiar. [I]So familiar.[/I] ?What do you want, old man?? I exclaimed. ?I have these...? He muttered, holding up a dark blue jewel. ?It?s a Sakuri stone...it?s said to to let you travel back in time...Some people even have the Sakuri stone planted in them when their born...But it only runs in the Uchiha clan...? ?[I]That?s nonsense,[/I] you old fool...? I exclaimed, turning and walking quickly away. What was he talking about...Time travel in the Uchiha clan? Crazy people these days. How dare he even say the Uchiha clan name. That?s just so...unbelievable. Nobody can back in time, and nobody is born with the powers to. I walked until I was close to my apartment, when I saw Naruto running out of his apartment door, screaming. ?What?s wrong, you big chicken?? I said. ?[I]G-G-Ghost[/I]!? Naruto gulped and shouted, pointed at his apartment room. ?[I]What?? [/I] I exclaimed. ?There?s blood all over my couch for some reason! Dry blood! Ghost blood!? He shouted. ?Naruto, I bet you just cut yourself when you were drunk or something...? I muttered, walking away, into my apartment. [I]Crap, today has been weird[/I], I think to myself. [I]Just plain weird. [/I] I do wonder why, that man was familiar, and how come blood, was on Naruto?s couch, but it doesn?t really matter. I still have to train to beat my brother. And, harder I shall train. Harder and harder, until I beat him. But still...I just wonder...Don?t know why... ?Hmm...weird,? I say, eating the rest of my grapes, as I gaze out my window at the pure sunlight. [I]?Just plain weird...?[/I] So whatcha think? LOL, I can't believe this is the end of SW... Wow... Nina-anything else you're wondering 'bout, I can clear it up for ya. Keyblade wielder- I'll make sure to PM ya. Lady Asphyxia-thank you for giving me hints and tips, that'll help me, but I'm not going back to correct everything. In a couple of years I want to look back at all my work to see how I wrote now. Anyway, thanks for being a cool mod.

Have you ever seen a CGI movie with graphics that if you didn't know it was CGI, you might think parts of it were real? Have ya noticed they don't really put that much effort into a game? I mean, some games have put things similiar to CGI movies, like Final Fantasy(Looked just like one) Tekken five(Graphics went down within gameplay), Xenosaga, Metal Gear solid(not as good, but close)and other games... Would you guys like to see Movie graphics in games for our older systems? (PS2, Xbox, GC, NDS)

Nomura's review of Jing Title: King of Bandits, Jing Length: 325 min., 13 episodes Theme Song: I use to think FMA's TS was the best, but this one is ten times better. Each time, I sing along to it, and enjoy it as much as the time before. The Plot: The plot is about a young teenage boy, who travels from town to town, searching for rare items. He meets many girls, probably one in every episode, and he falls in love with a couple of them. None even knows that he's the king, until he steals something unthinkable. There are actual morals throughout this story too, so it's probably got everything. Action, Romance, Drama, Adventure, Comedy, everything. Fans of FMA, InuYasha, and DBZ will love the strange unique story. Characters: Jing- The king of bandits and star of the show. Kir- The sidekick mockingbird of Jing, who can fuse to Jing's arm to makes a blast of power as a weapon. Kir is Girl Crazy, and a lil bit pervy... Postino- A traveling mailman that shows up in every other episode on a motor cycle, giving tips to Jing. Mysterious... Artwork: The artwork is very solid and is really great. It's similiar to FMA and DBZ, but has it's own unique style. So, yeah, this Anime is awesome and I think I'll give it a...9.6!

LOL, Nina, the point of this chapter was to look a lil' between the lines... Well, I'll explain. Kakashi- Duh, he was killed by Zakanru, pretending to be Sasuke. You know that one. Shikamaru- Shikamaru's shadow technique takes control of your body, and you must do what he does. Shikamru, killed himself, thinking that the real Zakanaru was dying along with him. Ino and Sakura-Kakashi was dead at the moment, LOL, so how could he invite them into his home? Exactly...A doppeganger looking like Kakashi...They went in, and were obviously killed. Rock Lee- Don't remember? He was killed in chapter seven. Well....Ch. 9 should be on the way, sooner or later. I'd like to thank all the people who are reading my posts and liking them! As for the ones who don't quite enjoy 'em...well maybe my stories aren't your thing! So anyway, adios amigos! LOL.. P.S, Nina, Keyblade Wielder...mind if you get put on my budd list? EDIT: Finally got the next chapter written, and there will be one more. This story is only a ten chapter gig, LOL. Well, here's Chapter nine. [B]Chapter nine: Beginning to the End, Vice Versa[/B] My gut pulsed with pain. I had a feeling, now, that some friends were dying. Just a feeling... It?s funny, I never even liked these guys...now they?re close to me... Naruto and Zakanaru went on. Blood flying. Zakanru finished off the last of Naruto?s doppelgangers, and glanced into the tree-tops, where I was hiding. Crap, he knows, I thought, jumping from my position before he attacked. In one swift movement of his hand, a giant shuriken flew towards me. I closed my eyes. [I]This is it! I?m going to die... The Uchiha clan will never be restored, and I?ll never...Never Kill my-[/I] I heard the sound of a blade hitting a body. I felt no pain, so I opened my eyes. On the branch, defending me, was Kiba, his arm severed, where the blade had hit him. ?Akamaru felt a chakra...What?s going...on...here...?Kiba whispered before fainting. My anger swept over me at that moment. He?s taken every thing from me! My eyes turned...Full-blown Sharingan, even stronger than when I was fighting with Haku. My chakra flowing, I ran down the tree I was perched on, and cut off Zakanaru?s arm. My kunai knife dripping with his blood, I turned around to see if Naruto was still okay. Bruised and battered, he got off the ground. I looked over my shoulder for a second. Again, Zakanaru, had disappeared. Like in my dream, I followed his foot steps until I was behind him, my kunai around his neck. I asked him why he wanted to kill me, like in my dream. ?You have...never cared.? He muttered. ?What?? I exclaimed. ?Everything has been meaningless to you. Now, several of your friends are dead, and my death will never bring them back...? He muttered, a tear falling from his face. For some reason, a tear fell from my face too. I closed my eyes, and opened them again, to be in front of... [I]Myself. [/I] A younger me, crying. My brother, bringing pain within words. I?ve never cared... [I]Never. [/I] [I]Why now? [/I] I closed my eyes again... Relief struck me to what I saw.

LOL, thanks you guys! Sorry, I havn't been posting alot since I've been so busy...so I'm gonna try to post the next chapter today... CAUTION!: IF YOU DON'T WANNA SEE YOUR FAVE CHARACTERS DIE....WELL TOO BAD... [B]Chapter Eight: Death of comrades[/B] [COLOR=DarkGreen]Sasuke went flying as Zakanaru stabbed and kicked him even more. Kakashi, near-by jumped in the middle of the battle, trying to save Sasuke from any more attacks. "I'm not gonna let my comrade die!" He shouted, charging at Zakanaru. A kunai peirced through his heart from behind. Sasuke, slowly melted back into a Zakanaru doppleganger. "Gotcha," said the sick voice of Zakanaru. "You" croaked Kakashi, falling to the ground in a heap, blood dripping down his body... [/COLOR] ------------------------------------------- [COLOR=Sienna]Shikamaru ran through the forest, trying to find the real Zakanaru. He ran until he came to a river edge. Zakanaru sat at the edge, his feet in the water. "Seperated from the pack, huh? You...must be real...You pain in the butt!" Shikamaru exclaimed, triggering his "Me-and-my-shadow-jitsu". Shikamaru tried hard to hold on to Zakanaru with his shadow, but it was almost impossible, until finaly, he got him long enough to kill him. "My life means yours...A shinobi...like me'lll take that price!" Shikamru said, holding a kunai up to his throat. Such a sad story. Shikamaru killed himself to kill Zakanru, but sadly, he only killed a doppleganger... [/COLOR] ----------------------------------------------- [COLOR=Pink]Ino and Sakura ran through thge forest, all the way to Konahagakure village. Along the way, they met Kakashi, who invited them inside his apartment to hide...[/COLOR] Ino, Sakura, Kakashi, Shikamaru,and Rock Lee...Are Dead... LOL, That one was kinda short, but I still wanted to give this chapter to show you guys what else was happening, at the time of Sasuke's battle. P.S. Shikamaru's me and my shadow jitsu....Whatever shikamaru does when he captures you in his shadow, you do. So, when he killed himself, Zakanaru also died. But..of course...it was...just a doppleganger... :animecry: So...I'll think of something good for the next chapter! Thanks for the criticism and such!

Well...Noodle sure ain't a dude... She's asian, and a female! Gasp!

TIKE, LOL. Well, perhaps you didn't get the point of that song... The Problem we can't see, But the answer is thee, refers to us being the problem. Trust me, I'm not sloppy enough to just rhyme with any ol' word. Song Meanings for all you straight bakas: Wonder- Wonder is my newest song, refering to our world and how we live in it. We are greedy, self centered, and disturb innocent people. We also pollute, very much. So, we should just wonder how it's gonna end. Faded- Bad relationship... You guys should get this one...

Yep, we have enough WR characters... the RPG'll take place after Christmas, so everybody has enough time to sign up!

I've been making a gorillaz comic called the Monkeyz. It's like a fanfic comic based off the Gorillaz cartoons and music. Here's the lead singer of the Monkeyz, coManndo. I drew him on Oekaki, and I think he looks like the gorillaz cartoon does. [IMG]http://neondragonart.com/oekaki/pics/escrow/1134765863.png[/IMG] You like? I'll be drawing more of 'em soon.

Do we have any Gorillaz fans in da house? LOL, I myself am a fan, and I know we have some other fans. So, come one, come all!

I'm not sure what exactly you mean about forced and straightforeward...please explain, Tike. :animeswea

LOL, write a funny Gorillaz fanfic.

Xsuyoh groaned, and fell to the ground, angry. "C'mon Hall...I just got you out, and now you want me to get your stuff from the Academy?" He said, taking his goggles off his forehead. "C'mon X, you're the most agile of all three of us! You get in and back!" Hallden exclaimed, sitting on a tree stump. Xsuyoh got up, put his goggles back on, and began to walk down the path. "Where are you going?" Ash shouted at him. "Well, if we're gonna get that stuff from the military, we need to do it before next week... It may take two or three days for us to get there..." Xsuyoh grumbled. The three walked the path, until they came to an Inn. They had a drink, and settled in for a goodnight's sleep. Xsuyoh wasn't sleeping at all. His bed was sooo uncomfortable. Quitely, he got up and stretched. Then, he heard something outside his window. He glanced out the window, and lost his breath. Something outside his window was moving. He opened his window, and pered out into the night. A cloaked man was running away from the window, carrying Xsuyoh's backpack full of weapons and tools. "Hey!" Xsuyoh shouted, and jumped out his window. The cloaked man, turned around, and shot a dart at Xsuyoh. The blow dart gun! Xsuyoh's weapon! Xsuyoh fell to the ground unconccious.

Well, I myself am a Supersmash bro fan... But I've always wanted to make my own... so Here's the RPG! In this RPG, there shall be three teams. The Videogamers: A team of videogame characters. Can be any videogame character. The Otakus: A team of Anime characters. Can be any anime character or Manga character. The Comics: A team of western or comicbook characters. Any comic or western characters go. So you get the rules? Sign up: Name: Gender: Appearance: Must have pic for this. Biography: Just tell about your character. Title: Tell the game, comic, or anime they come from. Got it? As for me... Name:Link(young) Gender:M Appearance: [IMG]http://www.creativeuncut.com/media/oot-link05sm.gif[/IMG] [IMG]http://www.creativeuncut.com/media/oot-link15sm.jpg[/IMG] Biography: Link, an eleven year old boy,lives deep in the forest, where the great Deku tree lives.The deku tree, about to die of a curse, sends Link to defeat Ganondorf, a dessert traveler who has put a spell on Deku. Link goes into the shop to find a shield and store, but can only find a shield, for 40 rupees. Later, Link visits the training grounds of Deku village, and stumbles into a small passage, when he almost gets run over by a boulder. Link dodges, and trips over a box. He looks down, to see the box lying on its side open. Inside is the legendary Deku sword. Link grabs the sword and runs to the passage way. Just as Link is about to go see the great deku tree, his fairy alerts him of something in the sky. A hand! A giant hand comes down and picks Link up, and they fly into the sky. Link, afraid of how high he is, faints. Link wakes several hours later, to be in a room, full of pictures of different people. One, looks like him, only older(Older Link). Many chairs are lined up in the room. "W-Where..." He stutters, when a fairy flies into the room. "Oh, you're awake? Well...I'd better give you a hint... You've been chosen to participate in The Team Smash, a contest where you and a team go on a adventure and fight other teams." Link blinks and rubbs his head. "Each participate gets a fairy, and I'll be yours." The pink light with wings said. "What happened to-" Link started. "That fairy? Oh, she's fine.She's just here to watch, since she doesn't know the rules on how to play..." Link was still confused. "So...sooner or later, your teammates'll be here. You should get some rest." Link was led to a room with a couch and telivision to rest. When Link saw a man on the TV, he reached for his sword and got ready to strike. "No, no... You watch it and see what happens.." Said the fairy. Link sat down and watched carefully. It was sorta fun...He'd never seen anything like it. "My name's Kuro by the way..." said the fairy, leaving the room. Title: Link is from [I]The Legend of Zelda[/I] And, someone can be older link too... So, you got the dealio? So sign up and have fun!

LOL, I copied off of Retri sorta... Well, this a library of my lyrics and poems, and enjoy! [B]Wonder[/B] When will we learn? Defensive acts are still unconcerned As the problem stands, we take more than we need We settle ourselves in the pot of greed Red Horizons, Black smoke We breathe the air, and then we choke The problem we can't see But the answer is thee The knowledge that we lack Makes the world crack Forever lay ourselves Down to the dirt And we wonder, yes we wonder Why we hurt Stay in your home Hold your grudge But you should...you should know Sorry, our time's end is near Tomorrow we might not be here The problem we can't see But the answer is thee The knowledge that we lack Makes the world crack Forever lay ourselves Down to the dirt And we wonder, oh yes we wonder Why we hurt It won't go away, away, away It will just stay, stay, stay So wonder, yes wonder Wonder,oh wonder Wonder! Wonder! It will go fast, fast, fast No it won't last, last, last So wonder away... Wow, one song already and it's been kinda long! Well, settle yourselves down and get ready for more! [B]Faded[/B] My heart stopped beating But my head is bleeding I'm falling for the same stuff Over and Over again I've had enough It's time for this to end! Do you see my pain? Your wrath? Your reigne? It's all too much I can't take this anymore! I have no touch Time to let this go and shut the door Screaming Decieving All the things you do If you keep doing this I'll swear to you When will this end? Will it ever begin? To fade? If you're hurt If you're lost There I am at your aid! Screaming Decieving All the things you do If you keep doing this I'll swear to you What? Don't you see me? What? Staring so much? What? But you can't see anything... My heart stopped beating But my head is bleeding Falling for the same stuff over and over again... Over...And Over...And Over! Again!

Yeah, I'm believing it already... But, I like Art of the Doppleganger! They kept it straight Japanese! Doppleganger, of course, means clone... I don't really see anything wrong with the dubb, since I find it enjoyable anyway. But, they could stop the "Believe it!" crap...and start cursing... Well, I guess they don't have to start cursing, since there's no real point to it... But I'm glad they're showing more blood! But even if they are showing more, they still didn't show enough for [SPOILER]when Sasuke was getting blazed with kunai by Haku. In the Manga, he has 'em sticking through him left, right, up and down![/SPOILER] Why dont we take out our anger in a healthy way? Let's each give everything we hate about the dubb. :animesmil

Okay, good... If there's gonna be a Winry in this game, there should also probabably be a Ed... So, anybody wanna be Ed, Al, Roy or etc.? PS Don't forget to give short bios of your characters!

God, I need to do my research... Okay...

When I said 'your own characters', I meant out of a fanfic of an anime or something like that, but this is good too. If anybody is waiting for the rules to posted in the arena, too bad, cause I'm not posting 'em 'till we get enough sign ups. PS include bios with your sign ups!

1963? That's way too behind when it really was made... Havn't you ever seen Gigantor? That just goes to show you that anime was made before 1963, since it was made before AB...I may be wrong...BUT I believe still that anime was made in the 1920s believe it or not... Avatar discussion please. Does anybody think Aang will restart Firebending training? "Cause if you remember, he stopped after he burnt Katara by being impatient with the flames he was controlling at the swamp place with the old man, whos name I do not remember. LOL, honestly, Aang is pretty good at Water bending, but I still think Katara is the man...Wo-man...Well, Katara is good, let's just say that...

LOL, I'm a Gorillaz fan and so...I made a poem for the holidays about them. Here goes... Twaz da night 'fo' christmas Not a gorilla awake in da house A monkey ran by, probably high Right up Noodle's blouse She screamed, awoke, and tried to choke that poor bloke, who awoke da folk She ran out dat door Santa fell to dat floor He was surprised to see dat gurl And Noodle...Man, she thought she might hurl The band was mad An' Santa ain't glad Noodle feels bad And man, them monkeys be dead like the wurd, "Rad" That story be sad Santa, on his sleigh, went a flying Noodle was crying Them monkeys still dying Eww...Noodle wiped her nose with her hand... Happy Holidayz, from the Gorillaz, one awesome band LOL, I was silly... Oh well, you like? Rate if you want, critisicm apreciatted... If you don't know who the Gorillaz are, they're a hip-hop type band. And, they have an anime type mini cartoon on Mtv. Well...Fin, and happy holidayz. PS Noodle is the bands keyboard player, whom is a girl, or gurl if you will... -Nom

This is my first FMA pic, which I drew like a year ago. I know, it sucks, and trust me, I'm ten times better this year. Cut me some slack! I drew this when I first became a fan! I didn't know the art enough to draw it perfectly... [IMG][url=http://img479.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fma2fj.jpg][img=http://img479.imageshack.us/img479/4568/fma2fj.th.jpg][/url][/IMG] Now..does anybody know where I can color this, besides MS paint? For some reason, this one's too complicated and MS paint can't get the whole thing colored. There'll be lil white parts, where it didn't color...

Well, I've known about this manga for a while, and I've been waiting to see if we have any fans... The only one I know of really, is Kat, and her colorful banner... :animeswea So..Yotsuba fans! Please post here! PS...Just wondering, is there an anime of Yotsuba?

I bet it's....I'm not sure... Kabuto's already done his part, Sasuke's not from the Sound... How 'bout a good guy? You know like... Good but is reallly a spy guy? LOL, what if it was Kakashi? That would break some ice on those fans of his. Oh well, have to wait to see...

Then it's settled, it's just a western anime. But most western animes try to hard, or just ain't that great. But, this one...it's a keeper. So, now, do we have any more fans? PS I think that anime started in the 1920s, so yeah that was long ago, but most anime back then had influence from Disney, but yeah, I may be wrong... Sorry for yelling, Sandy, LOL :animeswea