Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Okay, I'm going to try to do a rhyming one this time. I just realized in my whole life, I've only done two that rhyme. Go figure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ These days have come to pass Indeed so very slow I must now figure out Where it is I need to go These days are playing tricks on me To try and keep me down But I think I can make it now Without a single frown. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I didn't like that one much. It was another off my head. I just can't write as good when i rhyme. It throws me off balance.
Epsilon Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 It's a better ryhm then I could do. I'm really bad at ryhming. Still if ryhming throws you off balance that was still really good for something you don't usually do.
Guest dayday Posted June 29, 2003 Posted June 29, 2003 Yeah, I guess you're right. Post a rhyming and I'll see about you though, okay? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The rain keeps coming It's burning me as it comes Like fire instead I can't stand to be here It hurts so much to be Place me in a different place So I can be away from this pain But first tell me why Why this rain is causing me pain It never did before Strange how things change like that I just don't understand why Nothing can ever stay the same ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry it took so long. I had to try on my dress for a wedding. I hate dresses!
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Rain....just like tears! Rain like fire burning the soul longing to be the same. Too bad things are never the same when you need them to be. It's just like time, when you need time your already running out of it, and the cloacks couting down to fast. *.....a dress...Ick!*
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Lol, I have to wear them all the time. That's why I try to get pants suits a lot. Here's the next one. It's made from the song I sung a while back. It's not that good though. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sunny days come and they go But I will take the chance Nothing is standing in my way My heart will always stay Even though when night falls The sky will trun dark But still I will go my way I will never turn around Why would I run I'd be going nowhere I will always stand With nothing in my way
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Wow, that must of souded nice as a song. It sounds great as a poem so I think when you had sung it, it must have sounded good as a song too. Also way better lyrics then I could have come up with.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 I don't think when I write. I just put down words and they come out the way they do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People are around They're suffocating me Who are you And you and you I need to be alone It's too crowded here Just go away There's other places Besides around me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I have to go. We have baseball and it's time to play. Even though it's late. I'll be on later.
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Strange, I think to much and that's how I come up with poems. I like that poem most people feel that way. People often need to be alone, any ways talk to you later. And have fun playing baseball.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Okay I'm back on. I can't think, sometimes I'll start to think out of nowhere and my brain starts to hurt. Literally. That's why I just write and not think about it. And I do wish people would leave me alone. If I sit there with my usual mean look they think somethings wrong with me and try to cheer me up. It's annoying. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hiding secrets are everywhere Creeping around the corners Coming from every crack in the wall From every person whispering behind you Trying to tell you that one thing Something that's been hiiden so long Never to reveal itself to you Until now this very moment The one that it's been waiting for
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 A hiden secret. It's great, every thing holds some kind of secerts. Creeping every where are secerts waitting for the right person. And thinking too deep into thought makes my brain hurt. Anyways most people couldn't just write something and like it with out thinking. So you must have a lot more talent then every one around or even you really thought.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 I don't actaully read what I write until after I'm done. Then it does sound good. If it sucks I just do another one. Here's another try at alphabet. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ After the one moment Before I was there Certain that it was Down beside me Everything was gone Fading away from life Guided be my world Hiding from my existence
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 very nice, and I guss it would be easyer to decide what it's like after you finish it. That's a great alphabet poem. Favorite line is the "fading" part.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Thanks Ruby, I didn't think that one was good though. The lines didn't exactly go together. Let's try a little abstract shall we. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lost forever Lost forever Lost forever Lost forever Gone without Gone without Gone without Gone without A new meaning A new meaning A new meaning A new menaing Lost forever Gone without A new meaning
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Wow! really cool. All in the end coming togeather to make a meaning, of a being that is gone and lost. ^^ I guss in my next post I'll try abstract too.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 This is your rhyming poem. I redid it for you so it would be a little better. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Water flows by And so does time In the light With all my mind Pass the darkness In the way to live And the light So for me to give ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is the one you did. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Water flows by as so dose time In the light and the might In the way to fight Pass the darkness and the light....
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Your's sounds much better. Your better at rhyming then I am, I don't like rhyming. I like your's better because it really rhyms, and becase it easyer and better to read.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 It's still your poem. I don't own it, you do. I think the only reason I'm good at rhyming is because I listen to a lot of music that usaully rhymes. But it's noramlly R&B Slowjams, my favorite. This next poem sucks. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You think you're better you Maybe I am But's that's the way you think No one's the same Yet no one is different It all comes to the one word The one you never thought it would be The one no one understands Destiny ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ How about I give you some lessons in rhyming? It's not that hard really.
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Very nice poem, about destainy all comeing back. The one thing no one can understand nor ever will. And I think I will would like to take some lessons from you on rhyming.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Okay do you want me to just post here or something. How do you want to learn? It's your desicion.
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 It dosen't matter to me how I learn to rhyme. Which ever way is the easyest to do I guss. So I don't know eather...Your IM name is daydayangel79802 right?
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 So I can IM you. That'd be another way to learn to rhyme plus it'd take less time to have lessons that way.
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Here's something I thought would be good. It's not mne though. Again it's one of Kirk Franklin's song. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You are the only one that's patient when I fall Your angels come to save me every time I call You don't laugh at me when I make mistakes and cry You're not like man You understand me See people change one day They don't like you the next they do I wish that everyone could love me just like You So here I am this sinful man peace won't allow I was wondering can you hold me now I was wondering can you hold me now To every broken person that may hear this song To every boy or girl that feels their smile is gone I know exactly how it feels to lay in the bed at night And cry And cry
Epsilon Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 That's a song? O_o Well then if it really is it must be a good one. Glade you posted that, it sounds very nice. I like it, thanks for posting it dayday. (Don't know why but I feel like posting a happy face.) :)
Guest dayday Posted June 30, 2003 Posted June 30, 2003 Maybe you keep wanting to post happy faces because you want to smile. It doesn't hurt to smile every now and then. It's good for the soul.:) See. `````````````````` Actaully Kirk rights a lot of stuff like that. That's why I like his music so much.
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