Mitch

[color=red] I wish I knew french :(...but I don't. Anyways, back to the poems. They seem like they could be a song they flow so nicely. These poems are just like a picture frame of emotions. I can't wait to see more of your work, Circeus![/color]

[color=red][i][b]FoChanor[/b] I felt my feet touch the floor as I stepped into a stop between the door long I stood examining a room of short space a room so very small that upon the tip of my tongue I could taste the unroominess and inside that room was but a tiny chair it was a worn excuse of a chair but a chair it was and as my eyes flew away from that chair I began to see the room as a whole the floor was a dirty dirt of soot that was a black of blacks the walls were a crackled masterpiece of ancient tatter and as I stood unwillingly peering about my legs slowly began walking a sly walk of curiosity thirsting the dirt flung up in a dusty flight as my feet touched the floor and as I neared that ancient chair a crash I heard behind quickly then I turned around finding that door to be closed alas the room was still in light for at the far edge of the room stood a flimsy light a lamp creating a mellow, restricted light and as I regained my moments lapse as I turned around I said: "Just the wind." I restarted my slow walk of thirst nearing upon the worn chair slowly I sat into the seat making nervous glances about the room and in that sudden instant the room expanded into a huge labyrinth quizzically I glanced around surprise upon my face in a bland splendor standing up I perceived a darkly lit hall and walked into that ghostly entrance peering about in a mysterious delight I padded about in my curious flight and whence I came to the end of the hall I came to yet another doorway standing between the door I did peer into another room once more and this one did seem the same as the last small and enclosed with yet another chair within the center and as I glanced upon that chair I saw that it was no longer a worn out chair but it looked of a newly furnished chair and thus I began a hypnotic walk as again the door behind me shut in a loud clang but still did I walk drawn unto that chair like a strongly placed magnet thus I sat into that welcoming chair and as suddenly as I there sat the room yet did change whence again and as everything rippled about in a watery puddle suddenly I was no longer in a room but I was upon a very high hill a hill so high that as I peered down all I saw was a great slope of meandering green yet still I sat upon that comfy chair for many a time not wanting to leave the wonderful security which it brought but as it became dark a coldness began to surround me an evil air of scattery stare and that chair no longer seemed secure so I gathered my wit and sat up in no longer a sit slowly I scaled that unending hill torture it was for my whole body to ill but still through I made it by some way of chance and as I neared the end dawn reared his starting glance sweating abound, I stopped for a quick stance and viewed that beautiful fireball there sparkling within the heavenly blue sky thus I ended my long ill trodden journey and as I stoop upon leveled ground I turned toward that hope holding light and spoke: "I hath made my journey." and thus I turned around and set my feet upon the so hard ground as I stepped into a stop between another door[/i] [size=1]I posted this in today's poem, but decided to post it here as well. If you do not understand it, just read it again and make your mind think of everthing as a metaphor. And if you still don't understand it, just ask me what it means and I will tell.[/size] [i][b]Forest Trodden[/b] The woods are large and deep a long travel for one to keep but I, I took the woods for a ride looked around deep inside the most malevolent hides and I, I stepped the path locked deep saw many trees forever ke[t and upon my horse I did ease as I approached a tall, meandering tree a beauty it truly stood to be and I, I took that tree for mine chopped it down branch for branch, vine for vine from it I saw the hope of luminous shine and from that have I built my path from those wood which I guilt[/i][/color]

[color=red] Hey, you are a good mod break, and I just [i]love[/i] watching that dancing banana. *stares at dancing banana for thirty minutes*..uh, yeh...[/color]

[color=red] They are both overhyped and overpopular just for their looks. I mean, Britney and her can sing, but the lyrics and the whole base of their songs usually goes along with something about 'boys' or something about 'dirtiness'. So I just ignore them, and poof, no more annoyance.[/color]

[color=red] Yes, they have to be one of my favorite bands. I prefer their older CD over their newer one, but both CDs are good. My favorite song would be "Suggestions" from the first CD. And also "Spiders" that song is cool to.[/color]

[color=red] Heh, they are good bands. But they remind me so much of the beatles, well, at least the hives do. And the vines, well, they just seem to like to scream a lot. But I like them :)[/color]

[color=red] I like the way it seems to flow like a smooth river. That is what I mainly like. Also you state your feelings bluntly, going right to the truth other than just describing the feeling. Good job yet again![/color]

[color=red] [i]Deeply folded skin of purge become but nothing of a pain learned and fall upon what seeds[/i] I tried...;)[/color]

[color=red] Here's another: [i][b]"To be illogical is to be human."[/b][/i][/color]

[color=red] If you don't get a little nervous, or a little terrified, then you aren't putting any effort into it. At least that's what I believe. Trust me, you'll get over it once you loosen up and unstiffen once you begin. Heck, I had to read my own poem in front of my class on Wednesday. I just did it, even though I was nervous. I stuttered a little bit and numerous other things, but I did it. And that's what matters in the end: You had enough guts to do it in the end.[/color]

[color=red] James is just saying what I said before, Mnemloth. Respect has different levels. The lowest being respect because they are a human, an individual. So I still do believe someone can respect everyone, but it's just a weakend form of respect.[/color]

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by DuoGod of Death [/i] [B]Ah but the contrary is true. It is perfect length to express true emotions. Its just in the ability of the writer. I myself can not truly write a Haiku like it is supposed to be written and don't expect anyone here to just for the simple fact that it is an art that must be worked on long and hard, but when perfected is the most beautiful of all poetry. Its funny how so few words can potray such strong emotion... [/B][/QUOTE] [color=red] You are very right. It depends on the writer, and practice. I'm certain that if I started writing Haikus for about a month, I would get at least one good one out of the bunch. But I find Haikus to be limiting to me. I don't like having to follow a set amount of rules because it ruins my creative flare when I write.[/color]

[color=red] Well, I used to really be into Anime. But it's kind of died down now, so I want to change my name here to Mitch when James and the tech. staff implement the ability to change your name. I want Mitch because that's my real name, and it just suits me better.[/color]

[color=red][i] [b]SighDox[/b] A sigh is much to take for my fear I have to stake on every little move I make within these chained wounds but a sigh is but a blowing of air a needless waste of chilled care and I know that all it will is become thin despair because I feel that I can never stab these fearful wounds I have ran try I will with all demise with little time to say the lies so held deep within the fear I take for ever on a paradox to make[/i][/color]

[color=red]I rather loathe Haikus, but hey, I'll give it a shot. [i]Rippled rips of rip a crimson light upon thy placed wound falling dreams of uncouth test [/i] See...I suck at Haikus. It is to short of room to convey anything that is a strongly feral emotion.[/color]

[color=red] The first one was absolute genious. And the second was genious a little less. I loved the description in the first, it made me feel like I could feel the emotions run into me like a meandering river. Very nice.[/color]

[color=red] Change is an inevitable thing. It grasps you in its tight tendrils and slothers upon you a new feeling of an entire picture of what reality is. You will need to except this change, or you won't make the right choices that society says you should. I've felt this way before, and it is an overwhelming feeling. You feel like a small part of something that's so much bigger than you are. You finally see what the real world has chosen to become, and are no longer as ignorant to the ways of our society as you used to be. I've felt it before. All you have to do is accept it. It sounds simple, but is much more of a complexity then simplicity. But if I can do it, anyone can. So just try to accept them as these new feelings come, and everything will make sense. As for your like of Sailormoon and so on--if someone hates you for what you like, that is their loss, [i] not yours[/i]. So just ignore people like that, since they are biased.[/color]

[color=red] Very nice, CWB. I think just that you had enough guts to post it up here shows that you're not afraid of the truth. Oh, and about how you don't drive yet, if anyone holds it against you, I will certainly make it a personal manner. Other than that, it was great.[/color]

[color=red] I'm not a gamer who really enjoys fighting games. I way more enjoy RPGs, but I've played most of the Mortal Combats and I've also seen both movies. The first movie they did a well done job with, I thought, although it could've been better, at least it was average. The second movie...well, to say it bluntly, it [i]sucked[/i]. Now, the games I also found to be nothing all that special. Because to me fighting games are mindless, I mean there's no point to it for me. I'd probably say that MK3 is my favorite, although that one was pretty bland as all of the rest. Now, I believe any game has potential, but we will see. We will see.[/color]

[color=red] Well, at the moment I am saving the rest of my left over birthday money for a CD player for my car, but for Christmas, I've got my list now, heh. I've never played any Wild Arms or Suikoden, but I will certain get a shot when Chirstmas rears over. I'm content with Kingdom Hearts and Timpsplitters 2 for the momentary time between Christmas...so yeh.[/color]

[color=red] Heh, my (well, it isn't mine, but hey, I live in it :p) house has about...five bedrooms. So I'm not crowded at all. *Spreads body out all over his house* Yup, bigger is better, and smaller is better. But if you can't have both..I'll take one.[/color]

[color=red] :eek: Lots of spammy posts. But I haven't really gone over to try any Japanese music as of yet. Someday I'm certain I will, but I'm fine with American Rock for the time being.[/color]

[color=red][b]1. Where are you from? (country, city, locate it if it's not known)[/b] Bismarck, North Dakota in The United States of America [b]2. Tell us something we should know about it[/b] Uh...it's snowing right now. Actually I don't know all that much about Bismarck, I've only lived here for about 4 years I believe. But I'll have to say I like it here. It's one of the lowest states crime rate-wise, and the people are really friendly. [b]3. no "it's boring" or "never comes here"[/b] 4. [b]discuss about it![/b] Uh...not much to say here. It's just a really nice place to live at. It's named after something russian...but I can't remember...yeh, I'll shut up now. I'm clueless when it comes to where I live :confused:[/color]

[color=red] I've already asked this before, it didn't happen then. So I doubt it would happen now. But I would like a spell checker, but, hey, I'll just use Microsoft Word to spellcheck if I really think I need to. That method works well, unless you're lazy, that is.[/color]

[color=red] Double posting doesn't seem to be that big of a problem, except for in a newbie's case. And anyways, if they (a newbie) does double post, I usually nicely tell them, or another mod does, to delete their double post and edit their first and add it all together. But, yes, if it could be done, a stopping of double posting would be worthy to have.[/color]